~ jhook gaya aaj asman bhi...~

by roshni246 on June 17, 2006, 05:37:00 PM
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roshni246
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Aasma bhi jhook gaya ye kis kami ke waste
Mar rahe the bar bar zindagi ke waste

Tha chupa rakha jab suraj ne chaira apna
Chaand tarre jal gaye Roshni ke waste

Her taraf thi mausiyan ro raha tha ye naseeb
seh rahe the har sitam bebasi ke waste

zindagi hi loot gayi tu kon pochta hai yahan
dhoondte hi reh gaye har khushi ke raaste

dost aise bhi the jo humse lag ker woh gale
Maarte the khanjar dil par dushmani ke waste

Aankh ka pani bhi ab dard se sookh gaya
nahi rote aaj hum kisiki dosti ke waste

hum ne wafa ki thi bohot.. to bewafa log humko kahe
Bhut milte hai aaj sanam aashiqi ke waste

hum andheron main bhi roye ager to ilzaam sab lagate the
Aag laga di aaj ghar main roshni ke waste

Aajizi se manga tha jab to kuch nahi hume mila
zid main aye to aasma bhi jhook gaya har khushi ke waste

Aasma bhi jhook gaya ye kis kami ke waste
Mar rahe the bar bar zindagi ke waste


~rosh~
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2006, 05:43:45 PM »
Roshu

Ufff ! Kitna dardnaak likha hai !

Bahut he achcha likha hai !

Rajbir
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ranjana
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2006, 06:04:51 PM »
so nice ..........very beautiful .............bahut khub likha hai Roshni........ Usual Smile
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2006, 06:13:45 PM »
Quote from: "roshni246"
Aasma bhi jhook gaya ye kis kami ke waste
Mar rahe the bar bar zindagi ke waste

Tha chupa rakha jab suraj ne chaira apna
Chaand tarre jal gaye Roshni ke waste

Her taraf thi mausiyan ro raha tha ye naseeb
seh rahe the har sitam bebasi ke waste

zindagi hi loot gayi tu kon pochta hai yahan
dhoondte hi reh gaye har khushi ke raaste

dost aise bhi the jo humse lag ker woh gale
Maarte the khanjar dil par dushmani ke waste

Aankh ka pani bhi ab dard se sookh gaya
nahi rote aaj hum kisiki dosti ke waste

hum ne wafa ki thi bohot.. to bewafa log humko kahe
Bhut milte hai aaj sanam aashiqi ke waste

hum andheron main bhi roye ager to ilzaam sab lagate the
Aag laga di aaj ghar main roshni ke waste

Aajizi se manga tha jab to kuch nahi hume mila
zid main aye to aasma bhi jhook gaya har khushi ke waste

Aasma bhi jhook gaya ye kis kami ke waste
Mar rahe the bar bar zindagi ke waste


~rosh~


Kya kahe ham jada,tumne kya likha hain tumhe khud hi pata hein!!!
par in char line too good dil ko chu jati hein

dost aise bhi the jo humse lag ker woh gale
Maarte the khanjar dil par dushmani ke waste

Aankh ka pani bhi ab dard se sookh gaya
nahi rote aaj hum kisiki dosti ke waste
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2006, 07:08:46 PM »
Outstanding Work Rosh :wink:


Batao na tum aaj Zara.....
Kya thi hamari khata.....

Kuch pal jiye jo ruswai ke......
Mila mujhe tumhari Judai ka silsila......!!!!!!!!!
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nirbhay
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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2006, 08:39:31 AM »
Aaj wakt hai aaou gila kar loo humse, sulah kar lo humse
Kal kya pataa lamha mile na mile aapni muhabaat ke wastey

Do pal karloo seher waadi-e-gurbat mein hamare sath
Kal kya pataa kantein kahan chubhenge dard dene ke waastey

Sheerah tum mein na mila muhabaat karne ke waastey
Zehar bhi fhir naseeb na hua Khudkusi ke waastey..

Fhir yoon hua ke tum mein bhi nigun sii jagg utii
To mujmein bhi zidd sii hogayi sitam dhaane ke waastey

Ye galiyaan hain koun si, ye kiss manzil ke hain raastey
Hum to rah guzar hue they, ek duje ki khushi ke waastey

Yaa Dhundlo aaisa sanam, pasha na ho jiska sitam
Nikal Chalein hain jalaa ke aapne ghar teri khushi ke waastey
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roshni246
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«Reply #6 on: July 02, 2006, 04:55:23 PM »
Kisko maaloom tha din yeh bhi aayenge
Unki ek jhalak ko nain taras jaayenge
Haal yeh kaisa hai? saal yeh kaisa hai?
Ik ik pal lamba ik saal jaisa hai

Dil ka kya hai phir manaa lenge
Hume dard-e-dil ki kya davaa denge?
Mann machla hai yoon ki mushkil sambhale nahi sambhalta
Phir unki aahosh me khoneki tamanna hai

Baahon me unki jab pure armaan humare honge
Aur bhi haseen tab saare yeh nazaare honge

Unpe dil-o-jaan lutaane ko jee chaahta hai
Paas unke aake na jaaneko jee chaahta hai

Jasbaat ubharkar aakhon mein na aane denge
Palkon pe there hue sitaare na girne denge
Zaahir dabi mohabbat unpe karni nahi hai
Varna yeh judaai seh na paayenge hume yakeen hai...!!


~rosh~
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ranjana
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«Reply #7 on: July 02, 2006, 05:32:04 PM »
wonderful ......ROSHU and NEER .DEAR......its really very touching ..BAHUT KHOOB.....
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nikki
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«Reply #8 on: July 02, 2006, 05:42:10 PM »
too good Roshni n Neer....
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roshni246
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«Reply #9 on: July 02, 2006, 05:44:40 PM »
thanks mom :D
and niki di :D
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #10 on: July 02, 2006, 05:49:34 PM »
Quote from: "roshni246"
Aasma bhi jhook gaya ye kis kami ke waste
Mar rahe the bar bar zindagi ke waste

Tha chupa rakha jab suraj ne chaira apna
Chaand tarre jal gaye Roshni ke waste

Her taraf thi mausiyan ro raha tha ye naseeb
seh rahe the har sitam bebasi ke waste

zindagi hi loot gayi tu kon pochta hai yahan
dhoondte hi reh gaye har khushi ke raaste

dost aise bhi the jo humse lag ker woh gale
Maarte the khanjar dil par dushmani ke waste

Aankh ka pani bhi ab dard se sookh gaya
nahi rote aaj hum kisiki dosti ke waste

hum ne wafa ki thi bohot.. to bewafa log humko kahe
Bhut milte hai aaj sanam aashiqi ke waste

hum andheron main bhi roye ager to ilzaam sab lagate the
Aag laga di aaj ghar main roshni ke waste

Aajizi se manga tha jab to kuch nahi hume mila
zid main aye to aasma bhi jhook gaya har khushi ke waste

Aasma bhi jhook gaya ye kis kami ke waste
Mar rahe the bar bar zindagi ke waste


~rosh~


Wah Kya baat hai Roshu Naam Roshan kar dia :wink:
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roshni246
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«Reply #11 on: July 02, 2006, 05:51:48 PM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Quote from: "roshni246"
Aasma bhi jhook gaya ye kis kami ke waste
Mar rahe the bar bar zindagi ke waste

Tha chupa rakha jab suraj ne chaira apna
Chaand tarre jal gaye Roshni ke waste

Her taraf thi mausiyan ro raha tha ye naseeb
seh rahe the har sitam bebasi ke waste

zindagi hi loot gayi tu kon pochta hai yahan
dhoondte hi reh gaye har khushi ke raaste

dost aise bhi the jo humse lag ker woh gale
Maarte the khanjar dil par dushmani ke waste

Aankh ka pani bhi ab dard se sookh gaya
nahi rote aaj hum kisiki dosti ke waste

hum ne wafa ki thi bohot.. to bewafa log humko kahe
Bhut milte hai aaj sanam aashiqi ke waste

hum andheron main bhi roye ager to ilzaam sab lagate the
Aag laga di aaj ghar main roshni ke waste

Aajizi se manga tha jab to kuch nahi hume mila
zid main aye to aasma bhi jhook gaya har khushi ke waste

Aasma bhi jhook gaya ye kis kami ke waste
Mar rahe the bar bar zindagi ke waste


~rosh~


Wah Kya baat hai Roshu Naam Roshan kar dia :wink:



 Puzzled !  Puzzled !  :oops:  :oops:

thxx :blush: :blush: itni tareef yaar !
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Style_guru
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«Reply #12 on: July 03, 2006, 02:14:40 PM »
The Style Guru Says......


Parzai Ji, its juz superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrb!!!
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roshni246
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«Reply #13 on: July 03, 2006, 03:03:08 PM »
THANKSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS :D
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