judai

by arham hashmi on May 30, 2007, 01:15:40 AM

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thukra kar unhone kaha ke ab muskurao, hum muskura diye aakhir sawal unki khushi ka tha, unhone khoya woh jo sirf unhi ka tha maine khoya woh jo mera tha hi nai.........


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judai

«Reply #1 on: May 30, 2007, 02:57:26 AM »

nice lines hashmi ji...

apka yoindia mai sawagat hai!!


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judai

«Reply #2 on: May 30, 2007, 09:12:34 PM »

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thukra kar unhone kaha ke ab muskurao,
hum muskura diye aakhir sawal unki khushi ka tha, unhone khoya woh jo sirf unhi ka tha maine khoya woh jo mera hi nahin Tha!!!

I have balanced it a little.. nice lines Usual Smile


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judai

«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2007, 10:02:39 AM »

hasmi ji... simple or sweet sabdo main bahoot bakubi apne apni judai ka gum bayan kiyya hai.. good lines.. Lyk to read more from U.. keep writing

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