Judega Jo toh tootega nahi. .....

by Ricky on May 01, 2013, 11:10:03 PM
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Wrote a small poetry after a long time, now sharing with bazme e Yoindia Shayariadab. Waiting for comments and views.




Naa malum tha jo judega toh tootega nahi,
Kitna bhi chhuraun isse, chhootega nahi...

Jaise kahin koi dOr hai, bandhe hue mujhe,
Uljha ja raha hun ki ab ye, suljhega nahi,

Aarzu bhi jaati rahi, lagi wo dhundhlane,
Parr naam hai jo hai ye,  mitega nahi,

Naa khona hai kuch, naa paane ki chahat,
Kaisa hai begana waqt ab ye, katega nahi,

Haan juda... jo juda ye rishta tujhse .
Badal jaye "ikshayar" per ye, badlega nahi.....



Thank you for reading it.
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2013, 11:57:00 PM »
Naa khona hai kuch, naa paane ki chahat,
Kaisa hai begana waqt ab ye, katega nahi,

Is sher ka javaab naheeN.
khayaal bhi umda..

Bahut badhiya kalaam..
First time i have read you, quite impressive.

keep writing..

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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2013, 12:07:50 AM »
Bahut khoob Ricky jee, keep writing, keep posting.
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2013, 12:19:48 AM »
Quote from: Ricky on May 01, 2013, 11:10:03 PM

Wrote a small poetry after a long time, now sharing with bazme e Yoindia Shayariadab. Waiting for comments and views.




Naa malum tha jo judega toh tootega nahi,
Kitna bhi chhuraun isse, chhootega nahi...

Jaise kahin koi dOr hai, bandhe hue mujhe,
Uljha ja raha hun ki ab ye, suljhega nahi,

Aarzu bhi jaati rahi, lagi wo dhundhlane,
Parr naam hai jo hai ye,  mitega nahi,

Naa khona hai kuch, naa paane ki chahat,
Kaisa hai begana waqt ab ye, katega nahi,

Haan juda... jo juda ye rishta tujhse .
Badal jaye "ikshayar" per ye, badlega nahi.....



Thank you for reading it.
waah bohat khoob ji ,............bohat c daad,..........
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2013, 12:26:52 AM »
Waah waah waah bahut bahut khoob ..behad umda..dheron daad...
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2013, 01:53:49 AM »
 Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2013, 02:29:57 AM »
Ricky Jee Aadaab...!



WaaH janab kya baat hai, bade hi puqta khayaalat ko lafz diye haiN aapne.. behad khoob ashaar huye haiN jee.. Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par huamri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye janab... achcha likhte haiN aap..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2013, 09:28:33 AM »
Quote from: Ricky on May 01, 2013, 11:10:03 PM

Wrote a small poetry after a long time, now sharing with bazme e Yoindia Shayariadab. Waiting for comments and views.




Naa malum tha jo judega toh tootega nahi,
Kitna bhi chhuraun isse, chhootega nahi...

Jaise kahin koi dOr hai, bandhe hue mujhe,
Uljha ja raha hun ki ab ye, suljhega nahi,

Aarzu bhi jaati rahi, lagi wo dhundhlane,
Parr naam hai jo hai ye,  mitega nahi,

Naa khona hai kuch, naa paane ki chahat,
Kaisa hai begana waqt ab ye, katega nahi,

Haan juda... jo juda ye rishta tujhse .
Badal jaye "ikshayar" per ye, badlega nahi.....



Thank you for reading it.
Ricky Ji Bahut Achchha Likha Hai.
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2013, 10:37:09 AM »
ricky jee...bahut sundar likha hai aapne...
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2013, 02:33:12 PM »
Quote from: Ricky on May 01, 2013, 11:10:03 PM

Wrote a small poetry after a long time, now sharing with bazme e Yoindia Shayariadab. Waiting for comments and views.




Naa malum tha jo judega toh tootega nahi,
Kitna bhi chhuraun isse, chhootega nahi...

Jaise kahin koi dOr hai, bandhe hue mujhe,
Uljha ja raha hun ki ab ye, suljhega nahi,

Aarzu bhi jaati rahi, lagi wo dhundhlane,
Parr naam hai jo hai ye,  mitega nahi,

Naa khona hai kuch, naa paane ki chahat,
Kaisa hai begana waqt ab ye, katega nahi,

Haan juda... jo juda ye rishta tujhse .
Badal jaye "ikshayar" per ye, badlega nahi.....



Thank you for reading it.

Jaise kahin koi dOr hai, bandhe hue mujhe,
Uljha ja raha hun ki ab ye, suljhega nahi,

Naa khona hai kuch, naa paane ki chahat,
Kaisa hai begana waqt ab ye, katega nahi,

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Ricky Ji..

Khoobsurat Aur Gehri Ghazal Khaas Taur Par yeh 2 Ashaar..

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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2013, 07:29:38 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob likha hai aapne. bade gehre ehsaas rahe. dheron daad
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«Reply #11 on: May 02, 2013, 10:09:35 PM »
beautiful
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«Reply #12 on: May 04, 2013, 10:35:53 PM »
Quote from: mkv on May 01, 2013, 11:57:00 PM
Naa khona hai kuch, naa paane ki chahat,
Kaisa hai begana waqt ab ye, katega nahi,

Is sher ka javaab naheeN.
khayaal bhi umda..

Bahut badhiya kalaam..
First time i have read you, quite impressive.

keep writing..


Those are really nice word, I liked the way you showed your appreciation. Really encouraging.

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 02, 2013, 12:07:50 AM
Bahut khoob Ricky jee, keep writing, keep posting.
Thank you, I will try to keep writing though its been long since I have written something.

Quote from: laaiba on May 02, 2013, 12:19:48 AM
waah bohat khoob ji ,............bohat c daad,..........
Shukriya Laaiba for bohot si Daad.

Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on May 02, 2013, 12:26:52 AM
Waah waah waah bahut bahut khoob ..behad umda..dheron daad...
Shukriya aapka Musaahib..

Quote from: FARE on May 02, 2013, 01:53:49 AM
Applause Applause
:Thank you: Usual Smile

Quote from: ParwaaZ on May 02, 2013, 02:29:57 AM
Ricky Jee Aadaab...!



WaaH janab kya baat hai, bade hi puqta khayaalat ko lafz diye haiN aapne.. behad khoob ashaar huye haiN jee.. Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par huamri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye janab... achcha likhte haiN aap..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile



Janaab ParwaaZ , bohot accha laga jo apne khul ke tareef ki aur tamaam lavz kahe, tahedil se shukriya..

Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on May 02, 2013, 09:28:33 AM
Ricky Ji Bahut Achchha Likha Hai.

Jee Janaab, bohot bohot shukriya..

Quote from: aru12 on May 02, 2013, 10:37:09 AM
ricky jee...bahut sundar likha hai aapne...

Dhanywaad mahanubhaav. Usual Smile

Quote from: khwahish on May 02, 2013, 02:33:12 PM
Jaise kahin koi dOr hai, bandhe hue mujhe,
Uljha ja raha hun ki ab ye, suljhega nahi,

Naa khona hai kuch, naa paane ki chahat,
Kaisa hai begana waqt ab ye, katega nahi,

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Ricky Ji..

Khoobsurat Aur Gehri Ghazal Khaas Taur Par yeh 2 Ashaar..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Shukriya Khwahish  Saheb, dili tasalli mili jo aapko ghazal mein gahrai kabil-e-tareef lagi.

Quote from: aqsh on May 02, 2013, 07:29:38 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob likha hai aapne. bade gehre ehsaas rahe. dheron daad
Bohot bohot shukriya aqsh sahiba.
Quote from: sksaini4 on May 02, 2013, 10:09:35 PM
beautiful
I am glad you liked it.
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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2013, 05:06:04 AM »
nice one

aslam
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«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2013, 01:10:00 AM »
Shukriya Aslam for appreciating.
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