Kabhi Main Bhi Apne Dil ki Baat Sunana Chaahta Tha "Khwaish"

by khwaish on March 12, 2010, 03:45:36 PM
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Dil Ki Dastaan Sunana Chaahta Tha
Main Bhi Muskurana Chaahta Tha...

Meri Kuch Majbooriyon Ne Qaid Kiya Hai Mujhe
Varna Main Bhi Panchiyon Ki Tarah Udna Chaahta Tha....

Tufaan Ke Darr Se Kabhi Zindagi Ki Kashti Par Sawaar Hi Naa Hua,
Varna Main Bhi Apni Himmat Aazmaana Chaahta Tha...

Auron Ke Faislo Ko Naa Jaane Kyon Khud Ka Faisla Maan Liya Maine!!!!
Kabhi Main Bhi Apni Dil Ki Baat Sunana Chaahta Tha....

Sharto Ke Dam Par Kabhi Zindagi Nahi Guzarti,
Eh Nadaan!!! Tujhe Yeh Batlaana Chaahta Tha....

Yuhi Kisi Raah Par Kuch Der Ke Liye Rukh Gaya Tha Main,
Yeh Naa Soch Ke Main Yuhi Halaat Se Haar Maana Chaahta Tha....

Meri Baaton Par Ab Aitbaar Nahi To Naa Sahi,
Yehi Sach Hai Aur Main Sirf Sach Dikhlaana Chaahta Tha....

Abhi To Aur Bhi Log Aayenge Mujhe Galat Tehraane Ke Liye!!!!
Par Koi Gham Nahi,Main Sirf Apne Khuda Ke Aage Apna Sar Jhuklaana Chaahta Tha..

Agar Kisi Insaan Ki Sachai Ko Parakhni Ho To Uski Nazron se Nazrein Milakar Dekh
Par Chodd Ab inn Baaton Ko,Main Puraaane Kisso Ko Nahi Dohraana Chaahta Tha..

Par Yeh Na Sochna Ke Ab "Khwaish" Ko kisi Baat Par Ka Koi Dard-o-Ranj Nahi!!!
Mere Dard Ko Dekh Kar Aaena Bhi Mujhse Nazre Churaana Chaahta Tha....

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 12, 2010, 05:33:23 PM »
very good ...keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2010, 05:53:52 PM »
Bahut Khub Khwaish Bhai

Yeh Lines Badi Achhi Lagi Mujhey

Good Job.....
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Khush Rahiye....


~Shihab~


Bahut bahut Shukriya Majid Bhai Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 12, 2010, 05:57:49 PM »
Waah Waah Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish ji.. Behad Umda likha hai.. Bahoot Khoob! Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 12, 2010, 06:25:13 PM »
Bahut shandaar. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: March 12, 2010, 09:44:57 PM »
very good ...keep it up

Thankyou Soooooooooo Much Spandanaji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: March 12, 2010, 10:23:14 PM »
bahut hi khoob khwaish ji.....padh kar lga jaise apne hi jajbaaton ko aaine mein dekh rahi hu.....sach mein....m totally speechless.........har lafj umda.....bahur khoob... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2010, 01:03:41 AM »
very very nice khwaish ji... wah...

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«Reply #8 on: March 13, 2010, 03:49:19 AM »
Bahaut khoob Dost...Applause
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«Reply #9 on: March 13, 2010, 12:27:33 PM »
Waah Waah Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish ji.. Behad Umda likha hai.. Bahoot Khoob! Applause

Bahut bahut Shukriya Dear Sophi.. Usual Smile

Thanx For Always Reading And Appreciating My Work icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: March 13, 2010, 01:59:51 PM »
Wah wah Khwaish ji,great work,dil ko chu jaati hai aapke har ek kavita.midblowing creation.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: March 13, 2010, 05:57:39 PM »
Bahut shandaar. Clapping Smiley

Pasand Farmaane Ke Liye Teh Dil se Shukriya Daljeetji Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: March 13, 2010, 08:02:15 PM »
bahut hi khoob khwaish ji.....padh kar lga jaise apne hi jajbaaton ko aaine mein dekh rahi hu.....sach mein....m totally speechless.........har lafj umda.....bahur khoob... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooooooo Much Dear Pooja..

Inn Jazbaaton ko samajhne Ke Liye Tehhhhhhhh Dil Se Shukriya. icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: March 16, 2010, 07:57:38 PM »
wah khwaishji wah. bahut khoob.
TERE SIWA AUR KAUN KEHTA HAI BEWAFA HOON MEIN.
MEIN TO BUS APNI MOHABBAT  AAJMAANAA CHAHTA THA.

ZARAA SI BAAT PE TUM CHAL DIYE PALAT KE NA DEKHA.
WAHI HUA JISKA SHAQ THA MEIN YE KHUD KO DIKHANA CHAHTA THA.
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«Reply #14 on: March 16, 2010, 08:02:21 PM »
wah khwaishji wah. bahut khoob.
TERE SIWA AUR KAUN KEHTA HAI BEWAFA HOON MEIN.
MEIN TO BUS APNI MOHABBAT  AAJMAANAA CHAHTA THA.

ZARAA SI BAAT PE TUM CHAL DIYE PALAT KE NA DEKHA.
WAHI HUA JISKA SHAQ THA MEIN YE KHUD KO DIKHANA CHAHTA THA.
bahut khoob suresh ji
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