kabhi toh...

by Manav Mehra on August 03, 2007, 10:05:49 AM
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #15 on: August 26, 2007, 03:33:04 PM »
bas yuhi....


khud ko khudki najron mein gira diya
ajj humne apna har armaan baha diya

likha karte the jis panno par apni zindagi
ussi sapno ki kitaab ko dekho jala diya

socha kiye ki shayad kuch karaar aa jayega
rakh kar samne tasveer teri,ek-ek ashq baha diya

khaata kya thi, bas yuhi dosti aapse kar li
dost badli payar mein, jisse dard humne bana diya
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Pooja
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«Reply #16 on: August 26, 2007, 09:04:04 PM »
wah, kaya baat hai... simple, deep, emotional!!!
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #17 on: August 26, 2007, 09:31:52 PM »
Shukriya pooja ji.. aap har jagah comments hi de rahe ho...itna acha likhte ho aap..  mann bane toh yahan bhi kuch likheyga
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Talat
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«Reply #18 on: August 27, 2007, 10:21:46 PM »
Manav, bohot khoob ...you write so touching...!!

Koi na jaane, khud ko saza de rahe hain hum
Dil todke kisika, sir jhukaaye khade hain hum

Uski aankhain khusk hain, askh mere behte hain
Dard kisi ka umr bhar ke liye seh rahe hain hum
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Pooja
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«Reply #19 on: August 27, 2007, 11:20:09 PM »
wah kay abaat hai Talat.. bahoot acha likha hai apne...

MANAV JI, Kuch khas nahi baat bani, phir bhi apki poem pard kar jo man mai ayya likh rahi hu

Khud hi bichard kar, khud hi ro diye
Tore kar khud hi rishta, sab sapne tord diye

Karu kis.se shikayat ajj, sab kuch to mere hi hath tha
Bas sabar ka daman toot, aor bandhan tord diye

Kabhi, kahin to samjhega wo insaan
Issi soch main, sare anzaam kismet per chord diye

Khud hi bichard kar, khud hi ro diye
Tore kar khud hi rishta, sab sapne tord diye
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #20 on: August 29, 2007, 08:41:27 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Manav, bohot khoob ...you write so touching...!!

Koi na jaane, khud ko saza de rahe hain hum
Dil todke kisika, sir jhukaaye khade hain hum

Uski aankhain khusk hain, askh mere behte hain
Dard kisi ka umr bhar ke liye seh rahe hain hum


bohaat khoob talat,  mujhe samjh hi nahi aa raha kya likhu apko reply mein,

kya likhu shabd jo mere dil ki baat bata jaye
ya karu kuch aisa jo mujhe bhi pathar bana jaye
doori tujhse ek pal bhi,humse na bardasht hui hai
tumhi keh do koi baat,jo toote dil se jeena sikha jaye
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #21 on: August 29, 2007, 08:51:55 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"

MANAV JI, Kuch khas nahi baat bani,


koshish karunga ji acha likhne ki... abhi seekh raha hu

Quote from: "Pooja"
Khud hi bichard kar, khud hi ro diye
Tore kar khud hi rishta, sab sapne tord diye

Karu kis.se shikayat ajj, sab kuch to mere hi hath tha
Bas sabar ka daman toot, aor bandhan tord diye

Kabhi, kahin to samjhega wo insaan
Issi soch main, sare anzaam kismet per chord diye

Khud hi bichard kar, khud hi ro diye
Tore kar khud hi rishta, sab sapne tord diye



achha nahi lag raha mujhe,tera yu door jana
apne hi hathon se,sawapan-mehal khak banaNa

itni nadani teri,meri samjh mein nahi aayi hai
nadani mein hi tum kahin,ab door na chale jana
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SHONA
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«Reply #22 on: August 29, 2007, 10:41:42 PM »
Quote from: "khwaish"
BAHUT KHOOB MANAVJI.....EK REPLY(KOSHISH) POETRY KE ROOP MEIN...I HOPE U ALL LIKE IT

HAQ JATAANE SE KOI APNA NAHI HOTA
APNAPAN TO USSE KEHTE HAI YAARON
JAB CHOT LAGE DIL MEIN
TO DIL  UNKA BI ROTA

KYUN HO JAATE HO MAYUS
ISHQ KE ANJAAM PE
AGAR AANKHEIN HI KEH DE DETI HAR BAAT
TO DUNIYA MEIN SAWAALO KE PEHRA  NA HOTA

HUM BI SAMAJ SAKTE HAI"KHWAISH"
BAHUT DARD HAI
 MOHABBAT BARE USS DIL MEIN
PAR BINA KHOYE
KUCH HAASIL BI TO NAHI HOTA

NO HONA YUH BEBAS
KE MAUT KA KHAYAL BI AAYE DIL MEIN
YEH ISHQ KA IMTEHAAN HAI"KHWAISH"
 BINA IMTEHAAN KE
ZINDAGI KA SAFAR
MUQAMBAL BI TO NAHI HOTA


wow...beautiful one khwaish.. =D>  =D>  =D>
manav & talat..too good
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Pooja
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«Reply #23 on: August 30, 2007, 10:45:53 PM »
Quote from: "Manav Mehra"
Quote from: "Pooja"

MANAV JI, Kuch khas nahi baat bani,


koshish karunga ji acha likhne ki... abhi seekh raha hu




yah apse nahi kaha tha Manav ji, apni poem ke liye kaha tha ki app jitani achi nahi likhi gai... Phir bhi yaha post kar rahi hu... App galat samjh gaye  sad5
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Pooja
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«Reply #24 on: August 30, 2007, 10:52:55 PM »
bahoot khoob Talat, Manav and Khwaish..

Kise acha lagta hai apno se door jaana
Bahoot he mushkil ho jaata hai
apne dil ke haal ko, apno ko kai baar samjhana

Dil dukhaye apno ka aor unko dard de
Isse acha hota hai, waqat per alag ho jaana

Her koi hai preshan yaha, her kisi ka apna afsana
Kabhi to koi aisa mile, jo samjhe yah dil deewana

Waqat, bewaqat ke mile dardo se humne bas yahi hai jaana
Zindagi hai ek dard ka daria, kabhi doob kar kabhi tair kar
her kisi ko hai is dard ke dariye mai se jaana…….
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Talat
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«Reply #25 on: August 31, 2007, 06:33:38 PM »
Quote from: "Manav Mehra"
Quote from: "Talat"
Manav, bohot khoob ...you write so touching...!!

Koi na jaane, khud ko saza de rahe hain hum
Dil todke kisika, sir jhukaaye khade hain hum

Uski aankhain khusk hain, askh mere behte hain
Dard kisi ka umr bhar ke liye seh rahe hain hum


bohaat khoob talat,  mujhe samjh hi nahi aa raha kya likhu apko reply mein,

kya likhu shabd jo mere dil ki baat bata jaye
ya karu kuch aisa jo mujhe bhi pathar bana jaye
doori tujhse ek pal bhi,humse na bardasht hui hai
tumhi keh do koi baat,jo toote dil se jeena sikha jaye


Thanks Manav Usual Smile aur bohot khoob, ek baar phir.

Aa hi jaata hai, toote dil sang jeena,
Pathar ka bana daalo
har tukda jo hai toote dil ka,
Saja lo muskurahat, rok lo askh,
Kabhi dukh nahin denge sukoon,
Kabhi bechain kar degi ye dunya,
Seekh lo, ae dost,
Apne toote dil ke sang jeena !
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Talat
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«Reply #26 on: August 31, 2007, 06:34:39 PM »
Thanks Pooja...aapne bhi bohot achcha likha hai, humesha ki tarah Usual Smile
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