kabhi toh...

by Manav Mehra on August 03, 2007, 10:05:49 AM
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bohaat dard hai, kash lafzon ke sath sath sab nikal jata... kash yeh sab tum samjh sakti aor main tumhein yeh kabhi samjha pata


kabhi toh mujh par apna haq jatao

takraar mein hi chahe tum yeh kaho
par kabhi toh mujhe apna batao

kayun ajj ankhein badli badli si hain tumhari
in ankhon mein kabhi toh mera aks lao

beete palon ka tum mere samne dum bharte ho
mere payar mein kya kami hai,chalo yeh hi batalao

tadpata hu tere bagair, aor sunte nahi meri awaz
kabhi toh kahin se aa kar mujhe chaunkaow

kabh tak jiyu iss qadar marte marte main "Manasi"
apna agar nahi toh Mout ka "Manav" ko rasta dikhao
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2007, 12:55:19 PM »
simple yet expressive.
Full of emotion. Good writeup Mr. Manav.
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2007, 04:31:09 PM »
nice one Manav!
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2007, 02:22:21 PM »
Thanks Ricky and Sanya. bohat dil se likha tha. lekin kissi ne poem ke roop mein reply nahi diya. anyways.. thanks to both of u for nice comments

Manav
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2007, 03:17:22 PM »
Mr. Manav..

Even if no one replied in form of poem, still it deserves what it is  ..
Quote from: "Ricky"
simple yet expressive.
Full of emotion. Good writeup Mr. Manav.
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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2007, 04:58:27 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB MANAVJI.....EK REPLY(KOSHISH) POETRY KE ROOP MEIN...I HOPE U ALL LIKE IT

HAQ JATAANE SE KOI APNA NAHI HOTA
APNAPAN TO USSE KEHTE HAI YAARON
JAB CHOT LAGE DIL MEIN
TO DIL  UNKA BI ROTA

KYUN HO JAATE HO MAYUS
ISHQ KE ANJAAM PE
AGAR AANKHEIN HI KEH DE DETI HAR BAAT
TO DUNIYA MEIN SAWAALO KE PEHRA  NA HOTA

HUM BI SAMAJ SAKTE HAI"KHWAISH"
BAHUT DARD HAI
 MOHABBAT BARE USS DIL MEIN
PAR BINA KHOYE
KUCH HAASIL BI TO NAHI HOTA

NO HONA YUH BEBAS
KE MAUT KA KHAYAL BI AAYE DIL MEIN
YEH ISHQ KA IMTEHAAN HAI"KHWAISH"
 BINA IMTEHAAN KE
ZINDAGI KA SAFAR
MUQAMBAL BI TO NAHI HOTA
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2007, 07:16:53 PM »
Quote from: "Ricky"
Mr. Manav..

Even if no one replied in form of poem, still it deserves what it is  ..
Quote from: "Ricky"
simple yet expressive.
Full of emotion. Good writeup Mr. Manav.


Thanks Ricky, meri bas ek request thi yoindia ke poets ko ki koi aa kar likhe.new member ko replies ki hamesha bhook rehti hai ...
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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2007, 07:18:38 PM »
Quote from: "khwaish"
BAHUT KHOOB MANAVJI.....EK REPLY(KOSHISH) POETRY KE ROOP MEIN...I HOPE U ALL LIKE IT

HAQ JATAANE SE KOI APNA NAHI HOTA
APNAPAN TO USSE KEHTE HAI YAARON
JAB CHOT LAGE DIL MEIN
TO DIL  UNKA BI ROTA

KYUN HO JAATE HO MAYUS
ISHQ KE ANJAAM PE
AGAR AANKHEIN HI KEH DE DETI HAR BAAT
TO DUNIYA MEIN SAWAALO KE PEHRA  NA HOTA

HUM BI SAMAJ SAKTE HAI"KHWAISH"
BAHUT DARD HAI
 MOHABBAT BARE USS DIL MEIN
PAR BINA KHOYE
KUCH HAASIL BI TO NAHI HOTA

NO HONA YUH BEBAS
KE MAUT KA KHAYAL BI AAYE DIL MEIN
YEH ISHQ KA IMTEHAAN HAI"KHWAISH"
 BINA IMTEHAAN KE
ZINDAGI KA SAFAR
MUQAMBAL BI TO NAHI HOTA


khwaish jitna khobsurat aapka naam hai utna hi achha aapne likha hai. thanks for the response
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2007, 07:26:28 PM »
tere lubhon se apna naam sunNa acha lagta hai
tera haq se mujhe apna batana acha lagta hai

khalipan se bhikhari hui hai meri yeh zindagi
ussmein tera bahaar ban ke chahna acha lagta hai

ghutTa hai dum mera iss pathar si duniya ke beech
tere anchal mein chup aa kar sona accha lagta hai

abb toh toot gaya hu main tere diye hijar ke dard
teri bahaon mein aakar,dil halka karna achha lagta hai

sunNa chahta hu main ki tum meri ho,sirf meri,kayunki
"manasi" tera "manav" "manav" pukarana acha lagta hai
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2007, 11:20:00 PM »
Khwahish , those were beautiful words.

Mr. Manav, this one is again good & beautiful.
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2007, 10:23:29 AM »
once again thanks Ricky ......you can address me as just manav. and where is roja in this thread?
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2007, 06:47:07 PM »
bohot khoob manav ji...apki dono poems achi hai par first poem ke last lines dil ko chu gaye!!! keep it up!!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 08, 2007, 07:44:47 PM »
Very nice work Manav.......and nice one by Khwaish...!!!
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«Reply #13 on: August 09, 2007, 12:00:05 AM »
I have correct my mistake. I was actually addressing Khwahish .
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«Reply #14 on: August 09, 2007, 04:43:48 PM »
i was just kidding ricky, i know u were addressing khwaish :wink:

Thanks Talat and Meena, aap bhi kuch likhe.
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