"Kaisi zindagi hai ye...."

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" Kyon aati hai mujhe aaj bhi un beete huye lamhon ki yaad,
  sunti hoon jo uska naam,aaj bhi kyun ruk jaati hai saans..,

  phir se wahi dard,wahi tanhaai nahin chahiye hai mujhe..,
  woh khwaab jo hamesha bikharte hain,nahi dekhne mujhe,

  naa chahte huye bhi kyun aa jaata hai uska chehra saamne,
  door hai wo,phir kyun hamesha paas mehsoos karti hun use,

  woh iss kadar bas chuka hai ab meri in ankhon mein...,
  dekhti hoon kahin,dikhti kyun hain uski ankhein mujhe,

  har sambhav koshish ki maine door jaane ke liye usse....,
  jab main door gayi,wo kareeb kyun aana chahta hai mere,

  maine pyar kiya thha tumse,tumne kya kya diya mujhe,
  ansoo,dard,tanhaai sabse pyare saathi bane zindagi ke,

  jab maine bayaan kiya thha tumse apne dil ka haal..,
  tab kyun nahin pooche thhe tumne mujhse ye sawaal,

  aaj jab maen sab kuch bhula kar aage badhna chahti hoon,
  tumhari ankhon me mere liye taraste aansoo kaise dekhoon,

  dil samajh nahi paa raha hai main kya karoon,
  use yoon chod ke main aage kaise badhoon...,

  ek taraf wo hai,ek taraf meri khud ki zindagi hai,
  aaj saare nateeje mere ek faisle pe nirbhar hain.,

  kya zindagi di hai tune ae khuda mujhe....,
  jab jo chaha maine wo kabhi na mila mujhe,

  jab bhi apne ateet ko chod aage badhti hoon main,
  wo ateet mujhe kya soch ke de deta tu hai?Huh?,

  pehle mere har khwab ko todta hai,har khwahish raundta hai,
  aisa koi sitam na bacha hoga jo tu mujhe nahin detaa hai....,

  har baar toot ke sambhaalti hoon main khud ko,
  aur har baar phir tootne ko naya gam deta hai,

  ab to jee lene do mujhe,mujhe akela chod bhi do.......,
  dekho mere ashkon ne bhi aaj mera saath chod diya hai."
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2005, 06:14:54 PM »
very nice nidhi!!!!!!!!
bohot khoob.


zindagi se mat ghabra tu ae musafir
khushiyan bhi milengi tujhe chalte chalte.
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2005, 06:16:48 PM »
Quote from: "tanha dil tanha safar"
very nice nidhi!!!!!!!!
bohot khoob.


zindagi se mat ghabra tu ae musafir
khushiyan bhi milengi tujhe chalte chalte.
Thanx Tanha Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2005, 06:42:49 PM »
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" Kyon aati hai mujhe aaj bhi un beete huye lamhon ki yaad,
  sunti hoon jo uska naam,aaj bhi kyun ruk jaati hai saans..,

  phir se wahi dard,wahi tanhaai nahin chahiye hai mujhe..,
  woh khwaab jo hamesha bikharte hain,nahi dekhne mujhe,

  naa chahte huye bhi kyun aa jaata hai uska chehra saamne,
  door hai wo,phir kyun hamesha paas mehsoos karti hun use,

  woh iss kadar bas chuka hai ab meri in ankhon mein...,
  dekhti hoon kahin,dikhti kyun hain uski ankhein mujhe,

  har sambhav koshish ki maine door jaane ke liye usse....,
  jab main door gayi,wo kareeb kyun aana chahta hai mere,

  maine pyar kiya thha tumse,tumne kya kya diya mujhe,
  ansoo,dard,tanhaai sabse pyare saathi bane zindagi ke,

  jab maine bayaan kiya thha tumse apne dil ka haal..,
  tab kyun nahin pooche thhe tumne mujhse ye sawaal,

  aaj jab maen sab kuch bhula kar aage badhna chahti hoon,
  tumhari ankhon me mere liye taraste aansoo kaise dekhoon,

  dil samajh nahi paa raha hai main kya karoon,
  use yoon chod ke main aage kaise badhoon...,

  ek taraf wo hai,ek taraf meri khud ki zindagi hai,
  aaj saare nateeje mere ek faisle pe nirbhar hain.,

  kya zindagi di hai tune ae khuda mujhe....,
  jab jo chaha maine wo kabhi na mila mujhe,

  jab bhi apne ateet ko chod aage badhti hoon main,
  wo ateet mujhe kya soch ke de deta tu hai?Huh?,

  pehle mere har khwab ko todta hai,har khwahish raundta hai,
  aisa koi sitam na bacha hoga jo tu mujhe nahin detaa hai....,

  har baar toot ke sambhaalti hoon main khud ko,
  aur har baar phir tootne ko naya gam deta hai,

  ab to jee lene do mujhe,mujhe akela chod bhi do.......,
  dekho mere ashkon ne bhi aaj mera saath chod diya hai."


wah ..... bhoot khoob Nidhi ji.... lagta hai humey bhi lucknow jana chahiye ....pta nhi uss jagah mein kya hai jo aap itna acha likhtey ho .... aur waseey bhi mausi se miley bhi baut arsa ho gya .... really very nice written !!

in lamhon ke taane baane mein hum tum base the
paani mein jaise paani aise hum rehte the
aise mein jab is paani ne tan man pighlaaye
laazmi hai aise mein hamein tum yaad aaye !!
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2005, 08:54:20 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
" Kyon aati hai mujhe aaj bhi un beete huye lamhon ki yaad,
  sunti hoon jo uska naam,aaj bhi kyun ruk jaati hai saans..,

  phir se wahi dard,wahi tanhaai nahin chahiye hai mujhe..,
  woh khwaab jo hamesha bikharte hain,nahi dekhne mujhe,

  naa chahte huye bhi kyun aa jaata hai uska chehra saamne,
  door hai wo,phir kyun hamesha paas mehsoos karti hun use,

  woh iss kadar bas chuka hai ab meri in ankhon mein...,
  dekhti hoon kahin,dikhti kyun hain uski ankhein mujhe,

  har sambhav koshish ki maine door jaane ke liye usse....,
  jab main door gayi,wo kareeb kyun aana chahta hai mere,

  maine pyar kiya thha tumse,tumne kya kya diya mujhe,
  ansoo,dard,tanhaai sabse pyare saathi bane zindagi ke,

  jab maine bayaan kiya thha tumse apne dil ka haal..,
  tab kyun nahin pooche thhe tumne mujhse ye sawaal,

  aaj jab maen sab kuch bhula kar aage badhna chahti hoon,
  tumhari ankhon me mere liye taraste aansoo kaise dekhoon,

  dil samajh nahi paa raha hai main kya karoon,
  use yoon chod ke main aage kaise badhoon...,

  ek taraf wo hai,ek taraf meri khud ki zindagi hai,
  aaj saare nateeje mere ek faisle pe nirbhar hain.,

  kya zindagi di hai tune ae khuda mujhe....,
  jab jo chaha maine wo kabhi na mila mujhe,

  jab bhi apne ateet ko chod aage badhti hoon main,
  wo ateet mujhe kya soch ke de deta tu hai?Huh?,

  pehle mere har khwab ko todta hai,har khwahish raundta hai,
  aisa koi sitam na bacha hoga jo tu mujhe nahin detaa hai....,

  har baar toot ke sambhaalti hoon main khud ko,
  aur har baar phir tootne ko naya gam deta hai,

  ab to jee lene do mujhe,mujhe akela chod bhi do.......,
  dekho mere ashkon ne bhi aaj mera saath chod diya hai."


wooooowwwwww nidhi!!!!!!!! jab bih ati ho sab ko hila kar rakh deti ho  :wink:  well done kuddiye!!!  :D
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2005, 10:19:59 PM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
" Kyon aati hai mujhe aaj bhi un beete huye lamhon ki yaad,
  sunti hoon jo uska naam,aaj bhi kyun ruk jaati hai saans..,

  phir se wahi dard,wahi tanhaai nahin chahiye hai mujhe..,
  woh khwaab jo hamesha bikharte hain,nahi dekhne mujhe,

  naa chahte huye bhi kyun aa jaata hai uska chehra saamne,
  door hai wo,phir kyun hamesha paas mehsoos karti hun use,

  woh iss kadar bas chuka hai ab meri in ankhon mein...,
  dekhti hoon kahin,dikhti kyun hain uski ankhein mujhe,

  har sambhav koshish ki maine door jaane ke liye usse....,
  jab main door gayi,wo kareeb kyun aana chahta hai mere,

  maine pyar kiya thha tumse,tumne kya kya diya mujhe,
  ansoo,dard,tanhaai sabse pyare saathi bane zindagi ke,

  jab maine bayaan kiya thha tumse apne dil ka haal..,
  tab kyun nahin pooche thhe tumne mujhse ye sawaal,

  aaj jab maen sab kuch bhula kar aage badhna chahti hoon,
  tumhari ankhon me mere liye taraste aansoo kaise dekhoon,

  dil samajh nahi paa raha hai main kya karoon,
  use yoon chod ke main aage kaise badhoon...,

  ek taraf wo hai,ek taraf meri khud ki zindagi hai,
  aaj saare nateeje mere ek faisle pe nirbhar hain.,

  kya zindagi di hai tune ae khuda mujhe....,
  jab jo chaha maine wo kabhi na mila mujhe,

  jab bhi apne ateet ko chod aage badhti hoon main,
  wo ateet mujhe kya soch ke de deta tu hai?Huh?,

  pehle mere har khwab ko todta hai,har khwahish raundta hai,
  aisa koi sitam na bacha hoga jo tu mujhe nahin detaa hai....,

  har baar toot ke sambhaalti hoon main khud ko,
  aur har baar phir tootne ko naya gam deta hai,

  ab to jee lene do mujhe,mujhe akela chod bhi do.......,
  dekho mere ashkon ne bhi aaj mera saath chod diya hai."


wah ..... bhoot khoob Nidhi ji.... lagta hai humey bhi lucknow jana chahiye ....pta nhi uss jagah mein kya hai jo aap itna acha likhtey ho .... aur waseey bhi mausi se miley bhi baut arsa ho gya .... really very nice written !!

in lamhon ke taane baane mein hum tum base the
paani mein jaise paani aise hum rehte the
aise mein jab is paani ne tan man pighlaaye
laazmi hai aise mein hamein tum yaad aaye !!



Bohat bohat shukriya humtum Usual Smile ,Agar aisi baat hai to zaroor aaiye Lucknow,most welcome  Usual Smile

very well written.
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2005, 10:26:09 PM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
" Kyon aati hai mujhe aaj bhi un beete huye lamhon ki yaad,
  sunti hoon jo uska naam,aaj bhi kyun ruk jaati hai saans..,

  phir se wahi dard,wahi tanhaai nahin chahiye hai mujhe..,
  woh khwaab jo hamesha bikharte hain,nahi dekhne mujhe,

  naa chahte huye bhi kyun aa jaata hai uska chehra saamne,
  door hai wo,phir kyun hamesha paas mehsoos karti hun use,

  woh iss kadar bas chuka hai ab meri in ankhon mein...,
  dekhti hoon kahin,dikhti kyun hain uski ankhein mujhe,

  har sambhav koshish ki maine door jaane ke liye usse....,
  jab main door gayi,wo kareeb kyun aana chahta hai mere,

  maine pyar kiya thha tumse,tumne kya kya diya mujhe,
  ansoo,dard,tanhaai sabse pyare saathi bane zindagi ke,

  jab maine bayaan kiya thha tumse apne dil ka haal..,
  tab kyun nahin pooche thhe tumne mujhse ye sawaal,

  aaj jab maen sab kuch bhula kar aage badhna chahti hoon,
  tumhari ankhon me mere liye taraste aansoo kaise dekhoon,

  dil samajh nahi paa raha hai main kya karoon,
  use yoon chod ke main aage kaise badhoon...,

  ek taraf wo hai,ek taraf meri khud ki zindagi hai,
  aaj saare nateeje mere ek faisle pe nirbhar hain.,

  kya zindagi di hai tune ae khuda mujhe....,
  jab jo chaha maine wo kabhi na mila mujhe,

  jab bhi apne ateet ko chod aage badhti hoon main,
  wo ateet mujhe kya soch ke de deta tu hai?Huh?,

  pehle mere har khwab ko todta hai,har khwahish raundta hai,
  aisa koi sitam na bacha hoga jo tu mujhe nahin detaa hai....,

  har baar toot ke sambhaalti hoon main khud ko,
  aur har baar phir tootne ko naya gam deta hai,

  ab to jee lene do mujhe,mujhe akela chod bhi do.......,
  dekho mere ashkon ne bhi aaj mera saath chod diya hai."


wooooowwwwww nidhi!!!!!!!! jab bih ati ho sab ko hila kar rakh deti ho  :wink:  well done kuddiye!!!  :D


thanx a lot meena sis,aapki ki sis hoon,aapse hi seekha hai hilaana...lol. Winking
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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2005, 10:30:04 PM »
Really Nidhi...its a beautiful piece of work..... Great !!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2005, 10:39:58 PM »
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Really Nidhi...its a beautiful piece of work..... Great !!!!!!
my pleasure u liked it Talat Usual Smile .Thanx a lot.
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«Reply #9 on: May 24, 2005, 12:25:20 AM »
ab to jee lene do mujhe,mujhe akela chod bhi do.......,
dekho mere ashkon ne bhi aaj mera saath chod diya hai.".....hey nidhi kya baat hai......really nice but those two line just touched my heart..
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«Reply #10 on: May 24, 2005, 03:26:36 AM »
Khamoshiyon ki saleeb par latki
ajnabiyat ki dehleez par khadi zindagi
ik din pooch baithee mujhse ek sawaal
bata tera kya hai wajood?
pal bhar socha phir boli
kisi ki beti, kisi ki bahu
kisi ki biwi, kisi ki maa
yehi to nahi hai mera wajood

wo boli
inn sabke beech tera kya hai apna wajood?
ghabra kar talashne lagi main apna wajood
par kisi rishte mein nazar naa aaya mujhko mera apna wajood
khamoshiyon ki saleeb par latki
ajnabiyat ki dehleez par khadi zindagi
meri bebasi par muskurati rahi
aur main mita kar apna wajood
har rishte ka wajood nibhati rahi
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«Reply #11 on: May 24, 2005, 12:44:19 PM »
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ab to jee lene do mujhe,mujhe akela chod bhi do.......,
dekho mere ashkon ne bhi aaj mera saath chod diya hai.".....hey nidhi kya baat hai......really nice but those two line just touched my heart..


Thank u Isha for liking my work Usual Smile .

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Khamoshiyon ki saleeb par latki
ajnabiyat ki dehleez par khadi zindagi
ik din pooch baithee mujhse ek sawaal
bata tera kya hai wajood?
pal bhar socha phir boli
kisi ki beti, kisi ki bahu
kisi ki biwi, kisi ki maa
yehi to nahi hai mera wajood

wo boli
inn sabke beech tera kya hai apna wajood?
ghabra kar talashne lagi main apna wajood
par kisi rishte mein nazar naa aaya mujhko mera apna wajood
khamoshiyon ki saleeb par latki
ajnabiyat ki dehleez par khadi zindagi
meri bebasi par muskurati rahi
aur main mita kar apna wajood
har rishte ka wajood nibhati rahi


wah naveed,bohat hi accha likha hai,excellent work.
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«Reply #12 on: May 24, 2005, 01:00:02 PM »
HI nidhi ji ab itni taarif ke baad kya kahu main aapse.........har kisi ke dil ko chhua hai aapne,kisi ko apna pyar yaad aaya,kisi ko apne yaar ki judayi.....yeh dil bhi kya cheez hai...kitne gham ko sahta hai,uff nahi karta..par jab ateet samne aa jaye phir to kayamat hoti hai.....dil kuch kahta hai,aankh nam hoti hai,sab apne paraye hote hai bas wahi ek apna najar aata hai...........jisne hame apno se dur kar diya wahi ajnabi..dil ko sukun pahuchata hai......
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«Reply #13 on: May 24, 2005, 03:24:59 PM »
wah naveed ji bahut hi khubsurat sabdo ke saath aapne ek aurat ki kahani apni jubani suna di hai...bahut dard hai is baat mein ki hum apne wajood ko nahi dhudh paate hai?

     inn sabke beech tera kya hai apna wajood?
      ghabra kar talashne lagi main apna wajood
     par kisi rishte mein nazar naa aaya mujhko mera apna wajood
   
                  meri bebasi par muskurati rahi
                aur main mita kar apna wajood
                 har rishte ka wajood nibhati rahi....
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«Reply #14 on: May 24, 2005, 03:28:03 PM »
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HI nidhi ji ab itni taarif ke baad kya kahu main aapse.........har kisi ke dil ko chhua hai aapne,kisi ko apna pyar yaad aaya,kisi ko apne yaar ki judayi.....yeh dil bhi kya cheez hai...kitne gham ko sahta hai,uff nahi karta..par jab ateet samne aa jaye phir to kayamat hoti hai.....dil kuch kahta hai,aankh nam hoti hai,sab apne paraye hote hai bas wahi ek apna najar aata hai...........jisne hame apno se dur kar diya wahi ajnabi..dil ko sukun pahuchata hai......


thank u so much kismis,accha lagta hai jab koi poem ko dil se padhta hai aur mehsoos karta hai,bojat bohat shukriya aapka  Usual Smile .
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