khud hat gaye manzer se hum

by samnoj on July 11, 2005, 01:43:12 PM
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ek tamasha ban gaye the bheed me baher se hum
is liye behter hua khud hat gaye manzer se hum

takleefo ki taza aandhia ur ek sukha shajer
khud ko dhaanp lete hai ek fati chader se hum

jane kya matlab nikale log apne tareeke per
her ek se khulke ab milte nahi is der se hum

shaam itni jaldi kaise raasto me ghir gayi
subah ki pahli kiran le ker chale the gher se hum

kis ke derwaze pe aakhir dastake dete hai log
shor hai baher bahut, khamosh hai ander se hum

aage peeche sirf apne dost hi to hai samnoj
sach to ye hai, lad rahe hai apne hi lashker se hum
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2005, 01:50:31 PM »
wahh sam bohot hi achha likha hai...i esp liked these lines...

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takleefo ki taza aandhia ur ek sukha shajer
khud ko dhaanp lete hai ek fati chader se hum


kis ke derwaze pe aakhir dastake dete hai log
shor hai baher bahut, khamosh hai ander se hum


very nice!!!


kya pata tujhe kitni badi saza tune di hai
tujhe bhool jaane ki ek kasam aaj li hai
par kuch nahi samajhta ab dil e nadaan
tujhe dekhkar dil machalta mera aaj bhi hai
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2005, 01:57:57 PM »
thanx sanya
aur tumne bhia cha likha hai

khud ko zinda rakhe ya gher ki nigahdari kare
ek diya kab tak bhala, her ek ki dildari kare

aa gaya bezaar apni is adaakari se wo
kab hase, kab chahre pe sanjeedgi taari kare

shaher me jeena hai, chalna do rukhi talwar per
aadmi kis se bache, kiski tarafdari kare

shaher ka azaar hum ko lagna tha lag hi gaya
ab to apne saath jo bhi gandi bimari kare

her kisi ko jaise ek lamba safer derpesh hai
raat hi se subah ko chalne ki tyari kare
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2005, 02:13:29 PM »
Quote from: "samnoj"
thanx sanya
aur tumne bhia cha likha hai

khud ko zinda rakhe ya gher ki nigahdari kare
ek diya kab tak bhala, her ek ki dildari kare

aa gaya bezaar apni is adaakari se wo
kab hase, kab chahre pe sanjeedgi taari kare

shaher me jeena hai, chalna do rukhi talwar per
aadmi kis se bache, kiski tarafdari kare

shaher ka azaar hum ko lagna tha lag hi gaya
ab to apne saath jo bhi gandi bimari kare

her kisi ko jaise ek lamba safer derpesh hai
raat hi se subah ko chalne ki tyari kare
wah wah sam...bohot hi khoob!!! jawab nahi!
thanx btw


jeene ki ab toh har aas hi toot gayi
aise tanha hogayi jaise zindagi rooth gayi
iss tarah tedha hogaya duniya ka rasta hai
baadal bhi ab mere ghar par hi barasta hai
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«Reply #4 on: July 11, 2005, 02:19:07 PM »
wow both nice one.............hmmmmmmmmmm itna dard bahar.............gr8888888..............!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2005, 03:51:09 PM »
wah wah samnoj jiiii....

"kis ke derwaze pe aakhir dastake dete hai log
shor hai baher bahut, khamosh hai ander se hum "


yeh lines to bohot achi lagi mujhe!!!

 :D
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«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2005, 03:58:24 PM »
dard ka samandar hai baahoon me mere,
utth raha hai sailaab ab seene me mere,
mit jayegi hasti ye jaanta hoo main,
phir bhi iss dil me mohabbat hai teri.
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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2005, 05:45:06 AM »
Khudko mitha ke bhi main tujhe jinda rakhungi khud main
ki tuhi hai dil main  tuhi hai athma tuhi hai jaan meri
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«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2005, 07:44:34 AM »
thanx sanya, salma n meena
good work sanya, pandit n sandhaya

kawish ko hakayat sunata hu main
phir fikr ki kandeel jalata hu main
yu ghum kada-e-dil ko roshan ker ke
ehsaas ko aayina dikhata hu main

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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2005, 02:14:57 PM »
Quote from: "samnoj"
ek tamasha ban gaye the bheed me baher se hum
is liye behter hua khud hat gaye manzer se hum

takleefo ki taza aandhia ur ek sukha shajer
khud ko dhaanp lete hai ek fati chader se hum

jane kya matlab nikale log apne tareeke per
her ek se khulke ab milte nahi is der se hum

shaam itni jaldi kaise raasto me ghir gayi
subah ki pahli kiran le ker chale the gher se hum

kis ke derwaze pe aakhir dastake dete hai log
shor hai baher bahut, khamosh hai ander se hum

aage peeche sirf apne dost hi to hai samnoj
sach to ye hai, lad rahe hai apne hi lashker se hum


waah sammy.......................

kal tak jisko lagte they khusbudaar phool...
aaj usko hi kaanta lagney lagey hai hum.....
naa chubhe kisi ko, na aur dard de aab RAJ...
issliye gulistaan chor kar chale gaye hum...
i
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«Reply #10 on: July 14, 2005, 11:06:17 AM »
thanx n good one raj

baghbaan ne lagadi aag jab aashiyane ko mere
jin pe takya tha wohi patte hawa dene lage

nm
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«Reply #11 on: July 17, 2005, 07:29:42 AM »
Very Nice Sam.... and alll .............. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 18, 2005, 11:34:08 AM »
thanx talat............................................ ..................
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