** Khud Jal Gaye** RH

by Rajesh Harish on April 21, 2010, 07:37:43 AM
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Woh aag laga kar yun hum se bole
Ki kaise lagtein hain yeh shole
Hum bas yun muskura kar rah gaye
Aur weh to khud-be-khud jal gaye
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2010, 07:41:17 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai    Rajesh Harish ji......

Woh lagakar hampar aag zor zor se hasne lage
unhe malum na hua wo khud aag me pasne lage....
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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2010, 07:43:19 AM »
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Shukriya

Nice lines Cara Ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2010, 10:27:21 AM »
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Bahot achha likha hai Rajesh ji.
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«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2010, 01:45:24 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2010, 02:46:53 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai Rajesh ji... bahut khoob...!!!

humein ghayal kiya tha tumne, par hum muskurate reh gaye,
hamari muskaan ko dekh k tum tadapte reh gaye...

Woh aag laga kar yun hum se bole
Ki kaise lagtein hain yeh shole
Hum bas yun muskura kar rah gaye
Aur weh to khud-be-khud jal gaye

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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2010, 02:53:56 PM »
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Shukriya Kapil

Aap ne achchha jawaab likha hai

Kuchh meri or se

Khud ghayel hue aur humko badnaam kiyaa
Teri nazuk halaat par hume muskurana ayaa
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«Reply #7 on: April 21, 2010, 03:10:36 PM »
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shukriya Rajesh ji... aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

Shukriya Kapil

Aap ne achchha jawaab likha hai

Kuchh meri or se

Khud ghayel hue aur humko badnaam kiyaa
Teri nazuk halaat par hume muskurana ayaa
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«Reply #8 on: April 21, 2010, 06:42:54 PM »
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shukriya Rajesh ji... aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!


Thanx Kapil
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«Reply #9 on: April 23, 2010, 01:02:38 AM »
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Gud one Rajesh
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«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2010, 03:21:24 AM »
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Thanx Neel
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