---Khwabon ki mehfil---

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khwabon ki mehfil sazi thi
     sapno ka bhi jamghat tha
socha humne dekh kar--
     chalo hum bhi shareek jo jayen
zara apni in aankho me bhi
    khusiyon ki chamak bhar layen
bezaar tadapte dil ko bas
     thoda sa hi bahla ayen !
Paas Jaa kar mahsoos hua--
     ye to mere hi Bikhre khwabon ki mehfil aur
toot chuke sapno ka
      jamghat tha
bade zor se hansi aaee
     haye ye kaisa manzar tha !
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«Reply #1 on: January 10, 2011, 12:10:34 AM »
wah wah
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khwabon ki mehfil sazi thi
     sapno ka bhi jamghat tha
socha humne dekh kar--
     chalo hum bhi shareek jo jayen
zara apni in aankho me bhi
    khusiyon ki chamak bhar layen
bezaar tadapte dil ko bas
     thoda sa hi bahla ayen !
Paas Jaa kar mahsoos hua--
     ye to mere hi Bikhre khwabon ki mehfil aur
toot chuke sapno ka
      jamghat tha
bade zor se hansi aaee
     haye ye kaisa manzar tha !
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«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2011, 12:46:15 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 10, 2011, 05:51:51 PM »
sukriya Manoj
sukriya Rahim bhai.
ye to bas yun hi likh gaya
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #4 on: January 10, 2011, 07:03:02 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2011, 01:26:53 PM »
Inspiring lines kb ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2011, 03:00:18 PM »
NICE KB JI
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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2011, 03:14:25 PM »
KB ji.....bht meaningful likha he.......bade hi simple  tarike se lkiha he but direct dil me utar jane wala he........padkar bht aacha laga......last ki 4 lines  feel karo to sach jaan hi nikal jaye
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«Reply #8 on: January 11, 2011, 03:21:48 PM »
sukriya janaab.
Rishi ji, sahil ji--
aur matrix ji aap itna feel na karen--
jaan ko apne salamat rakhen aap.
sukriya sarahne ke liye.
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«Reply #9 on: January 11, 2011, 03:28:15 PM »
KB.....main comment karun ya sad face banaun.....

bolo na......

tumhe pata hai main kya kahungi .....tongue3
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«Reply #10 on: January 11, 2011, 03:33:33 PM »
ufffffff----
Kas akkk--
sad face se KB hate karing u ko pata hai.
ab mai kya bolu bhala??
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«Reply #11 on: January 11, 2011, 03:36:12 PM »
Khawabon ki iS mehfil mein humein bhi bulaana , dil mein apni chahat ke sapne bhi sazaana , jo lage koi khawab tootne bandh karke aankhein apni usko tum bachana , khawab to khawab hain kab tak sath nibhayenge ,toot jayenge aankh khulte phir haqeeqat mein khud ko tanha hi paana
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«Reply #12 on: January 11, 2011, 03:38:33 PM »
KB i knw u hate sad facec even i do.....
isily to kaha b happy write happy...saddy mere liye hi rehne do tum....
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«Reply #13 on: January 11, 2011, 03:42:22 PM »
Sahill ji bahut badhiya likha aapne Really.
Kasak---mai sad kahan likha!
ye to bas aise hi ho gaya tha jab kisi ne mujhe apne saare contact se remove kiya.
hahaha--saddy aapko hi mubarak--u r best in saddy lekhni re..Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: January 12, 2011, 09:51:22 AM »
bahut khub KBji... khub hai ji

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