kisi gair kaa daaman thaam kar... Intezar !

by Intezar on December 02, 2010, 05:32:17 PM
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   Kuch dil farebo se huaa jaata hai zaar zaar aitbaar bhi yahaan
   Ki phir koi ajnabi mila mujhe nazre jhukaye is baar bhi yahaan

   Kisi gair kaa daaman thaam kar socha wo apna hoga shayad
   lekin phir milaa hume wahi dard ka sehra is baar bhi yahaan

   Ki koi to thaame meri baahein ki main bikhar raha hun toot kar
   Lekin samet le mujhko khud me koi nahin hai is baar bhi yahaan

   Kiski ummeed me be-zaar huaa jaata hai tu khud ko barbaad kiye
   Milegi tujhe wahi nafarat wahi daga wahi fareb is baar bhi yahaan

   Main kis kaabil tha jo apni palko par sazaaya tune khwaab ki tarah
   Sazaa kar khwab jala diya tune har baar ki tarah is baar bhi yahaan

   Ki shohrat ki tamanna liye roshan huye baihte hain jo is mehfil me
   Sabhi ki khushi ke liye bana diya tamaasha mera is baar bhi yahaan

   Ek na-muraad si hayaat meri jo, is jahaan ki deewaaron me qaid hai
   Dhundli ho gayi hai ummeed is qaid se nikalne ki is baar bhi yahaan

   In jismo.n ki duniya ko chhod kar socha, door huye fareb se hum to
   Lekin wahi dhoka mila is lahad mein ‘Intezar’ ko is baar bhi yahaan !


           
                                           Shukirya
                                           Intezar !
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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2010, 07:07:42 PM »
bht khubb intezar ji...bht mast likha hai aapne...jald hi iska reply dene ki koshish karungi
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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2010, 07:48:11 PM »
nice one

   Kuch dil farebo se huaa jaata hai zaar zaar aitbaar bhi yahaan
   Ki phir koi ajnabi mila mujhe nazre jhukaye is baar bhi yahaan

   Kisi gair kaa daaman thaam kar socha wo apna hoga shayad
   lekin phir milaa hume wahi dard ka sehra is baar bhi yahaan

   Ki koi to thaame meri baahein ki main bikhar raha hun toot kar
   Lekin samet le mujhko khud me koi nahin hai is baar bhi yahaan

   Kiski ummeed me be-zaar huaa jaata hai tu khud ko barbaad kiye
   Milegi tujhe wahi nafarat wahi daga wahi fareb is baar bhi yahaan

   Main kis kaabil tha jo apni palko par sazaaya tune khwaab ki tarah
   Sazaa kar khwab jala diya tune har baar ki tarah is baar bhi yahaan

   Ki shohrat ki tamanna liye roshan huye baihte hain jo is mehfil me
   Sabhi ki khushi ke liye bana diya tamaasha mera is baar bhi yahaan

   Ek na-muraad si hayaat meri jo, is jahaan ki deewaaron me qaid hai
   Dhundli ho gayi hai ummeed is qaid se nikalne ki is baar bhi yahaan

   In jismo.n ki duniya ko chhod kar socha, door huye fareb se hum to
   Lekin wahi dhoka mila is lahad mein ‘Intezar’ ko is baar bhi yahaan !


           
                                           Shukirya
                                           Intezar !

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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2010, 08:28:25 PM »
Shukriya... aur Intezar rahega Jawaab ka...

Intezar !

bht khubb intezar ji...bht mast likha hai aapne...jald hi iska reply dene ki koshish karungi
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2010, 08:38:20 PM »
Shukriya Manoj ji bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !
nice one
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2010, 06:08:13 AM »
 Applause Applause  Applause
buhat hi umda likha hai intezar ji.
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2010, 06:43:30 AM »
bahut bahut umda lika he aapne..

dher ssaari daad intezar ji~
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«Reply #7 on: December 03, 2010, 11:34:52 AM »
Shukriya Poonam ji bahut bahut shukriya aap ka... aur aapki is nazar ka... !

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buhat hi umda likha hai intezar ji.
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«Reply #8 on: December 03, 2010, 11:36:21 AM »
Abhi ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya... aap ne ik nazar hum par daali iskeliye bahut bahut shukriya... !

Intezar !

bahut bahut umda lika he aapne..

dher ssaari daad intezar ji~
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«Reply #9 on: December 03, 2010, 02:41:09 PM »
Intezaar ji...bahut achha likha aapne ...bhale meri samjh me nhi aya to kya hua..
uski fikra nt..samjh hi jaunga me kese bhi:)Usual Smile
very very sundar peshkash...
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«Reply #10 on: December 03, 2010, 05:47:50 PM »
aap ki yahi saadgi to hume pasand hai KB ji... shukriya aapke khusbsurat comments ke liye... bas aise hi saath rehiye humesha...

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Intezaar ji...bahut achha likha aapne ...bhale meri samjh me nhi aya to kya hua..
uski fikra nt..samjh hi jaunga me kese bhi:)Usual Smile
very very sundar peshkash...
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«Reply #11 on: December 03, 2010, 07:12:21 PM »
Na Jaane kyun Yun lag raha hai jaise ye kalaam mere liye likha gaya ho./
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«Reply #12 on: December 03, 2010, 07:25:55 PM »
itni gehraayi se padhne ke liye shukriya Azeem ji... ki ye aap ke liye laga aapko... bahut bahut shukriya...

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Na Jaane kyun Yun lag raha hai jaise ye kalaam mere liye likha gaya ho./
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«Reply #13 on: December 06, 2010, 04:09:47 AM »
Good one intezaar ji
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«Reply #14 on: December 06, 2010, 06:43:41 PM »
shukrya bahut bahut shukriya... Rajest ji.. bas yun hi saath rehiye... fir ek baar shukriya aapka...

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Good one intezaar ji
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