koi wadan nahi hai

by Pooja on August 24, 2004, 05:49:00 AM
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #15 on: September 23, 2004, 11:42:04 PM »
Good Lines Pooja ji!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #16 on: September 24, 2004, 12:23:03 AM »
Very Nice Pooja...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #17 on: September 24, 2004, 01:29:22 PM »
wah!!!!!  Pooja..............nice...................

Kushiya banke phool, khilli thi kabhi
Phir waqt guzarthe hi murjha bhi gayee
Ab ruhu mein bas unki kushbhu hai
Ek haara hua shaks hun magar jeene ki aarzoo hai

Dil ki har umeed mith chukhi hai
Maine zamane se aur zamane ne mujhse tauba ki hai
Ab to bas tanhayee hi ar soo hai
Ek haara hua shaks hun magar jeene ki aarzoo hai....
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jishapn
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«Reply #18 on: September 24, 2004, 01:54:54 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
kaanton se guzar jaanaa sholon se nikal jaanaa
phoolon ki basti mein jaanaa to sambhal jaanaa..........



very true!!!waheed bhai bus pata nahin kyoon phoolon ki basti mein jaane wale samjte nahin...
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nishita
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«Reply #19 on: September 24, 2004, 02:49:07 PM »
Mai akela hi chala tha janibemanzil ki taraf,
Log aate gaye aur karwa banta gaya. (NM)
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #20 on: September 24, 2004, 05:24:15 PM »
thanx Jishapn.....................
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #21 on: September 24, 2004, 05:25:59 PM »
nice one nishita......
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waheed
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«Reply #22 on: September 24, 2004, 06:37:54 PM »
nice work all

main kya karoon mere dosto
yeh dard kam hota nahi
kyun gaya tha mian uski gali mein
main ab raat bhar sota nahin
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Talat
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«Reply #23 on: September 24, 2004, 08:05:25 PM »
Shaam bhi hogai dhundhalaa gaii aankhen bhi meri
Bhuulnevaale main kab tak teraa rastaa dekhoon
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #24 on: September 26, 2004, 09:10:07 PM »
nice Talat.........

Naye safar main abhi aik Nuqs baqi hai
jo shakhsh sath nahi uska aks baaqi hai..
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jishapn
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«Reply #25 on: September 27, 2004, 02:10:35 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
thanx Jishapn.....................



don't say thanx bus ek khoobsurat sa sher aur ek likh daliye yahin mere liye thanx hoga janab... bus yoon samj lijiye ki muje is baat ka ilm tha so i wrote...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #26 on: September 27, 2004, 10:29:58 PM »
aap ko kuch bura laga kya?Huh?Huh???  agar laga to sorry...........
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jishapn
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«Reply #27 on: September 28, 2004, 10:17:56 AM »
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aap ko kuch bura laga kya?Huh?Huh???  agar laga to sorry...........

nahin to...bura kyoon lagega but i want more shayari from u on thia topic..i liked ur almost all shers that i read...janab kabhi fir sorry na kahiyaga..jisha..well i contacting u all the way from kerala...u knw..
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #28 on: September 29, 2004, 11:57:33 AM »
thanx jishpan..........ab main sorry nahin kahoonga...mujhe aisa laga tab maine aap se kaha............

Hum to intezaar ki shamme jalaye baithe hain,
Gum ki sarhad par ek aas lagaye baithe hain,
Aayega qayamat pe koi seene se lagane ke liye
Tab talak gum ko seene se lagaye baithe hain..............
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jishapn
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«Reply #29 on: September 29, 2004, 12:40:01 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
thanx jishpan..........ab main sorr nahin kahoonga...mujhe aisa laga tab maine aap se kaha............

Hum to intezaar ki shamme jalaye baithe hain,
Gum ki sarhad par ek aas lagaye baithe hain,
Aayega qayamat pe koi seene se lagane ke liye
Tab talak gum ko seene se lagaye baithe hain..............


shukriyaaaa.bahut khoob..mere paas alfaz nahin khushi bayan karne ke liye...great..
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