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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #15 on: August 28, 2006, 07:37:04 PM » |
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you too wrote very well sufiyan hmmmmmmm ek aur nakaam koshi hs javab ki.......................
sahil ka dard janate hain sare ke sare
uska to ek ghar hai ki hain usake hi saare
haan ho sake to sochiye us lahar ke liye
jiska ki ghar koi na koi thikana hai
bas roz hi sahil se milne usko aana hai
haan rok le jo sahil to lehar usaki hai
par har roz usko lout kar padta jana hai
usake hi aansu hain jo ye bana samandar
ye kharapan bhi aansunon se milke aaya hai
ab lahar ka jo dukh kare koi nahi aisa
sab usko dekhdekh badha khush hi hote hain
haan raat ke andhere me vobhi sisakti hai
sahil ne us aawaz ko bhi shor jana hai
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«Reply #16 on: August 29, 2006, 05:53:10 AM » |
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Bhut khoob tabu,aryan n sufy.
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«Reply #17 on: August 29, 2006, 06:15:51 AM » |
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good job Tabbu
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #18 on: August 31, 2006, 03:31:17 AM » |
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thanx jeet ,pooja
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«Reply #19 on: September 01, 2006, 06:55:11 PM » |
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Sahil aor lehar ka rishta kuch khass hota hai
do pal mile phir juda ho gaye milne ke liye
mitt jaati hain kayi bar lehar milan ki ass mein
aor kayi bar mil jati hain,phirse bichardne ke liye
subha sham,charon pehar yehi khayal rehta hai
yuhi milne-bichardne ka silsa barkaraar rehta hai
na bhuj pati hai Sahil ki kabhi milan ki payass,
na lehar ka imithian kabhi khatam hota hai...!!!
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«Reply #20 on: September 01, 2006, 09:43:57 PM » |
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wah kaya baat hai.... last ki do line bahoot hi achi lagi... Good job Jeet
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #21 on: September 02, 2006, 04:02:04 AM » |
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bahut khoob jeet aap hamesha achcha likhate hain
ik saath nahi rah paana bhi to ek nasha ban jaata hai
usase milane ko jana bhi bas ek nasha ban jata hai
jo saath ye rah pate yun pyar nahi phir kar paate
ye milkar aur bichhad jaana bhi ek nasha ban jaata hai
jab door rahe sahil dil me jab usase mile to jhoom uthe
lahar lahar si lahrati sahil se milne jaati hai
sou sapne phir dil me liye vo lout bhi jaldi aati hai
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #22 on: September 03, 2006, 01:37:00 PM » |
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Well said all..
Arz Keyaa Hai..
main chaahataa bhii yahii thaa vo bevafaa nikle
use samajhane kaa koi to silsala nikle
kitaab-e-maazii ke auraaq ulat ke dekh zaraa
na jaane kaun saa safaa mudaa hua nikle
jo dekhne mein bahut hii qariib lagataa hai
usii ke baare mein socho to faaslaa nikale
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«Reply #23 on: September 03, 2006, 01:42:52 PM » |
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wonderfull Qutubuddin ji.....
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #24 on: September 04, 2006, 03:15:09 PM » |
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bahut khoob qutub ji................
na jaane kyun wafa ke naam pe aansu nikale
vahi qissa vahi ek dour yaad a nikale
zabar sitam ka jo padhna hai aankhen padh meri
bayan iska hadde qalam se bahar nikale
zehan ki had se bhi aage pahunch hai ab usaki
aur yun jo dekho to dil me vahi chhupa nikale
main saare sookhe gulabon ko leke baithi hun
meri kitaab ke warqon me jo chupe nikale
inhi se hai meri duniya me kuchh jo khushboo si
to dushmanon ki nazar in pe na lagi nikale........
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«Reply #25 on: September 05, 2006, 06:34:44 AM » |
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wah Qutub ji and Tabbu ji... kya andaz hain...
kuch Warkon ko ajj maine bhi dekha,
apni zindagi ki kitaab se ....
do rang ke nazar aaye lafz
meri zindagi ki kitaab mein
safed rang mera pyaar tha
aor kala teri nighaon ki nafrat
bas kuch aor pard na saka main phir
meri zindagi ki kitaab se...
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«Reply #26 on: September 05, 2006, 07:20:01 AM » |
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Well said tabassum .. and burniing_desiires..
KUCHH NAAM... Gum Ho Jatay Hai..
KUCHH NAAM... Diloy ke gayrayoo may Dafan Hojatay hail..
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Kisee Say Kay Gelaa Karay..
Kud Say Kay Husnay Selaa Karay..
Daykh kar usay Kay Kahay..
Dard Uhee Peyaa Karay..
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Tayree zindagi ki kitaab Say..
Tujhay Tu kouch Melaa Nahee..
Tayree Aarazu Tayree Justaju..
Tujhay Tu kouch Melaa Nahee..
Tayree zindagi ki kitaab May..
Wo Lekhaa Jo Tha Vo Padaa Nahee...
Tayree zindagi ki kitaab Say..
Tujhay Tu kouch Melaa Nahee..
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«Reply #27 on: September 05, 2006, 03:12:07 PM » |
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bahut khoob qutub ji......aur jeet aap bahut achcha likhte hain...............chitra singh ki gaai gazal hai
vo nahi milta mujhe uska gila apni jagah
usake mere darmiyan ka fasla apna apni jagah
isi ka qafiya leke likhne ki ek koshish..............
dil ki apni ek duniya aur ye duniya apni jagah
dono ka apna tareeqa tour hai apni jagah
milna ya tujhse bichhdna ye naseebon ki hai baat
dil me bas tu hi hai rahta ye ek sach apni jagah
chahaton ka bas sila rusvaai hai hamko mila
naam na ho uska rusva ye ahad apni jagah
furqaton ki baat ki to yaad teri aagai
qurbaten teri mili kab raaz ye apni jagah
jaane kaisi chahaten hain poori jo hoti nahi
dil me tu hai kyun dhadkta rah na tu apni jagah
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«Reply #28 on: September 06, 2006, 09:45:06 AM » |
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superbbb Qutub ji, Jeet n Tabassum...kamaal ke shayar ho aap log..yunhi likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #29 on: September 06, 2006, 10:32:00 AM » |
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Dekho meri ankhon mein Khwab kiske hain,
Dekho mere dil me toofan kiske hain,
Tum kehte ho mere dil ke raaste se koi nahi gaya,
To phir ye pairon ke nishaan kiske hain.
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