KYA TUM BHI...................(ambu)

by ambalika sharma on October 27, 2013, 11:54:30 PM
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tearyeyed KYA TUM BHI  tearyeyed


tearyeyed Kya tumhe bhi neend nhi aati mere bina,
Kya tunmhe bhi raat stati hai mere bina?

Kya tum bhi takiye ko baahon me leke sote ho?
Kya meri tarah hi use geeli ankhiyon se bhigote ho?
Kya tumhe bhi lagta hai,
Ye waqt tum saath hote to or baat hoti,
Tere haathon me mere haath hote to or baat hoti.

Kya tum bhi dheemi roshni me us pankhe ko dekhte ho,
Kaash itni hi raftaar se ye raat bhi kat jati,sochte ho.

Kya tum bhi un khaabon ko liye jagte ho,
Kabhi vo tumhare or kabhi tum unke peeche bhagte ho.

Kya tumhe bhi lagta hai,
Kaash agli subah ek naya sooraj khil jata,
Mein mil jati tujhe or tu mujhe mil jata.

 
Thankyou !
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«Reply #1 on: October 28, 2013, 12:19:21 AM »
Waaaaahhhh!!!!!!!!!!! Ek khoobsurat soz se pighalte hue jazbaat ... Dheron daad Ambalika ji !!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: October 28, 2013, 12:32:04 AM »
Waaaaahhhh!!!!!!!!!!! Ek khoobsurat soz se pighalte hue jazbaat ... Dheron daad Ambalika ji !!!!!
thank u zarra
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«Reply #3 on: October 28, 2013, 12:59:00 AM »
beautiful..outstanding..minblowing creation
hats off..

Kya tumhe bhi neend nhi aati mere bina,
Kya tunmhe bhi raat stati hai mere bina?
Kya tum bhi takiye ko baahon me leke sote ho?  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Kya meri tarah hi use geeli ankhiyon se bhigote ho?  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Kya tumhe bhi lagta hai,
Ye waqt tum saath hote to or baat hoti,
Tere haathon me mere haath hote to or baat hoti.
Kya tum bhi dheemi roshni me us pankhe ko dekhte ho,
Kaash itni hi raftaar se ye raat bhi kat jati,sochte ho.
Kya tum bhi un khaabon ko liye jagte ho,
Kabhi vo tumhare or kabhi tum unke peeche bhagte ho.
Kya tumhe bhi lagta hai,
Kaash agli subah ek naya sooraj khil jata,

Mein mil jati tujhe or tu mujhe mil jata.
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dil khush ho gaya...kitne khoobsurat sawaal hain..
i can understand..
aur last line..wah wah wah javaab naheen
bahut mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #4 on: October 28, 2013, 01:07:10 AM »
thank u mkv ji.mujhe khushi hai ke apko meri kavita pasand aayi..
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«Reply #5 on: October 28, 2013, 01:23:01 AM »
beautiful poem .
jazbaat ki khubsurat akkaasi hai .
bahut mubarakbad.
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«Reply #6 on: October 28, 2013, 01:26:53 AM »
beautiful poem .
jazbaat ki khubsurat akkaasi hai .
bahut mubarakbad.
thank u
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«Reply #7 on: October 28, 2013, 01:35:39 AM »
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Loved it..all da questions dat u have asked..

Dil me baste hain aise kai sawaal jinka jawaab ham ek din zaroor janna chahte hain..

Behad umda likha hai ambalika..great work.. Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: October 28, 2013, 01:38:59 AM »
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Loved it..all da questions dat u have asked..

Dil me baste hain aise kai sawaal jinka jawaab ham ek din zaroor janna chahte hain..

Behad umda likha hai ambalika..great work.. Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

thank u ashwani ji
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«Reply #9 on: October 28, 2013, 02:06:14 AM »
Mujhey Aapke Likhne Ka Andaz Bahut Pasand Hai Ambalika Sis
Kis Qadar Aap Khubsoorati Aur Sadgi Se Apne Ehsaasaat Ko Lafzon Mein Pirote Hain Ki Bas Parh Kar Maza Hi Aa Jata Hai

Bahut Khub Clapping Smiley


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab
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«Reply #10 on: October 28, 2013, 02:11:00 AM »
Mujhey Aapke Likhne Ka Andaz Bahut Pasand Hai Ambalika Sis
Kis Qadar Aap Khubsoorati Aur Sadgi Se Apne Ehsaasaat Ko Lafzon Mein Pirote Hain Ki Bas Parh Kar Maza Hi Aa Jata Hai

Bahut Khub Clapping Smiley


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab
thank u
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«Reply #11 on: October 28, 2013, 02:33:56 AM »
nice jee  Applause icon_salut icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: October 28, 2013, 02:37:11 AM »
nice jee  Applause icon_salut icon_flower
thank u
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«Reply #13 on: October 28, 2013, 03:40:07 AM »
tearyeyed KYA TUM BHI  tearyeyed


tearyeyed Kya tumhe bhi neend nhi aati mere bina,
Kya tunmhe bhi raat stati hai mere bina?

Kya tum bhi takiye ko baahon me leke sote ho?
Kya meri tarah hi use geeli ankhiyon se bhigote ho?
Kya tumhe bhi lagta hai,
Ye waqt tum saath hote to or baat hoti,
Tere haathon me mere haath hote to or baat hoti.

Kya tum bhi dheemi roshni me us pankhe ko dekhte ho,
Kaash itni hi raftaar se ye raat bhi kat jati,sochte ho.

Kya tum bhi un khaabon ko liye jagte ho,
Kabhi vo tumhare or kabhi tum unke peeche bhagte ho.

Kya tumhe bhi lagta hai,
Kaash agli subah ek naya sooraj khil jata,
Mein mil jati tujhe or tu mujhe mil jata.

 
Thankyou !


wah wah wah ambu aisi soch tum laati kahaan se ho dear mujhe bahut tajjub ho raha hai tumhaari poem mein itna sweetness hai ki kya kahoon . meri hazaaro.n daad iss poem ko icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #14 on: October 28, 2013, 03:43:16 AM »
thank u sheba
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