'lagayenge tumko gale"

by aaina on July 08, 2009, 03:50:38 PM
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Lagayenge tumko gale zara se zakhm bhr jaane do
jo zehne o dil pe chaai hai gard utar jaane do

Mujhse daikha hi nahi jayega ye mousam e hijraa.n
Milan ke khaab merei palko.n se bikhr jaane do

Humne to maangi hai dua zulamto.n se bachne ki
Hoti hai agr raat ke jaisi hi sahr, jaane do

Har taraf dard hai faryaad o foghaa.n hai ke yahan
Gul ko jeene nahi daite ho to mar jaane do

Kar lainge paar samandar tum baraosa to rakho
Bas tufaano ke ye zor thaher jaane do

Tumko kehna hai jo baat haq ki to keh daalo
Agrachey jaata hai aslam, to sar jaane do
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2009, 03:57:57 PM »
Mashallah....Kya khoob likha hai....Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2009, 05:05:59 PM »
MILAN KE KHAAB MERI.....BAHUT KHOOB AAIN JI Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2009, 06:07:51 PM »
MILAN KE KHAAB MERI.....BAHUT KHOOB AAIN JI Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukriya bahyaat sahab
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2009, 06:09:12 PM »
Mashallah....Kya khoob likha hai....Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji  icon_thumleft

thnxxxxxxx so much talat, aap hamesah hi sath daiti hain hosla afzaai ka bhut bhut shukriya
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2009, 06:14:12 PM »
Wah Aaina ji,excellent,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2009, 06:16:50 PM »
wah ji wah bahut khoob likha Aaina ji...
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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2009, 06:27:44 PM »
Bahoot Bahoot umda likha hai.. behad lajawaab Aslam ji.. bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #8 on: July 08, 2009, 06:33:53 PM »
Aslam

Superb Applause Applause Applause

Keep it up Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2009, 05:41:52 AM »
Kya baat hai Aaina Ji, kya khoob likha hai! Applause
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