tu gale se laga na sake

by salil2002 on October 22, 2008, 01:30:09 PM
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aaj phir hum khud ko bacha na sake
aansu nikle bahut par baha na sake
keh gaye woh sab ,jo hum sun na sake
thi haqeeqat jo ,woh bata na sake

aaj phir se akele hai hum raah mein
apni raahon k patthar hata na sake
kitne bebas hai hum aaj jaana hai yeh
hai khanzar haathon main phir bhi lahu ko baha na sake

bas hum rote rahe, hosh main na rahe
dard badta gaya , kii marham laga na sake
chaha humne bahyt kii bhula de tumhe
sab ko bhoole magar tujhko bhula na sake

bas ab zinda hain bas yahi soch kar
kii kabhi toh tujhe bhi hum yaad aayenge
chahega jab tu dil se humho dil k paas
hogi koshish yeh bas tu gale se laga na sake
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2008, 01:33:47 PM »
Very Beautiful Creation Salil   Applause Applause Applause
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salil2002
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2008, 01:39:44 PM »
thnks talat
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2008, 04:52:02 PM »
Ati sundar rachna hai aap ki Salil
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2008, 04:52:32 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause hello2 wave

apka shyari ka andaj bahut hi dil ko chune wala hai
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2008, 05:07:43 AM »
Bahut Khoob Salilji  Applause Applause  Applause
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Rajbir
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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2008, 05:44:51 AM »
Salil

Great job once again Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: October 23, 2008, 06:17:49 AM »
BAHUT UMDA AUR LAJAWAAB KALAM
SALIL KEEP IT UP...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #8 on: October 23, 2008, 07:53:57 AM »
wonderful creation salil Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: October 23, 2008, 10:48:37 AM »
Salil miyan,
Well done, excellent work. Bahut pasand aaya.
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: October 24, 2008, 03:59:55 AM »
wah kaya baat hai salil ji bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #11 on: October 24, 2008, 04:43:09 AM »
thnks to khwahish, pooja ji ,k shael, bhawna , ruhaani , rtajesh
and to big b rajbir bhai
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salil2002
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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2008, 04:47:50 AM »
Salil miyan,
Well done, excellent work. Bahut pasand aaya.
thnks bhai
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«Reply #13 on: October 24, 2008, 06:29:25 AM »
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Bohat khoob salil bro achcha likha hai aapne... Thumbs UP
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salil2002
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«Reply #14 on: October 24, 2008, 12:04:40 PM »
thnks sis
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