lamha lamha yeh dard....

by Manav Mehra on August 05, 2007, 01:43:39 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 10, 2007, 08:49:58 AM »
Nice Manav n All Usual Smile

Ishq to apni manzil ko paye
Phir "Manav" kyun gabraye?

Jo dard ko apna banaye
Wohi dard mein sakun paye

Gar tu Pyaar ki Aag jalaye
Yaqenan "Mansi" Pigaal jaye

Kudha meri dua kabool farmaye
"Mansi" "Manav" ki ho jaye !!


HumTum
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Pooja
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«Reply #16 on: August 12, 2007, 03:16:49 AM »
bahoot khoob manav ji and bahoot hi acha likha hai Humtum ji ...
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Talat
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«Reply #17 on: August 12, 2007, 01:33:40 PM »
Bohot khoob likha aapne Manav...Keep it up Usual Smile

Divs and Humtum, bohot khoob....Nice sharing Angel  !!  Usual Smile
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angel4u
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«Reply #18 on: August 12, 2007, 04:54:36 PM »

Jab Kar Na Sake Hum Unse Gila,
Gairon Se Shikayat Kyon Kare,
Dil Sheesha Samajh Kar Tod Diya,
Manzil Pe Laa Kar Chhod Diya,
Wo Pyar Nahi Ek Sapna Tha,
Sapno Se Shikayat Kyon Kare...
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #19 on: August 13, 2007, 05:16:59 PM »
thanks Talat and Pooja. aap sab ki honsla-afzai ka shukriya

Angel very beautiful poetry... bohaat achhe!!!
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #20 on: August 13, 2007, 05:23:09 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum is back"
Nice Manav n All Usual Smile

Ishq to apni manzil ko paye
Phir "Manav" kyun gabraye?

Jo dard ko apna banaye
Wohi dard mein sakun paye

Gar tu Pyaar ki Aag jalaye
Yaqenan "Mansi" Pigaal jaye

Kudha meri dua kabool farmaye
"Mansi" "Manav" ki ho jaye !!


HumTum



HumTum ji.... aap ka kya kehna!!!.. ek anjaan shaks ke liye aaise koi dua karne wale bohaat kam dikhte hain.Honestly kabhi aaisa mujhse bhi nahi hua. aaise mann mein ek vichar hai... jo jis raah par chal chuka hu,usko apne peechle walon mein kabhi na kabhi apna-app dikhai de jata hai... thanks ki aap ne aaise mere liye dua ki...

jab apno se bardkar shaks bhi yuhi badal jaye
aise mein kahan koi dard mein sakun phir paye

Hai "Manav" toh ek insaan hi "HumTum ji"
dil zakhmi phir kayun na uska bhi tilmilaye

sholon sa toofan utha rakha hai dil mein
"manasi" kayun hai be-asar, yeh samjh na aaye

magar kehna na usse bewaffa yaaron tum kabhi bhi
shayad waqt hai jo,mere sath,usse bhi hai aajamaye...!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #21 on: August 14, 2007, 12:02:20 PM »
Bohot khoob..phir se Manav Usual Smile

Very nice one Angel Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: August 14, 2007, 04:56:48 PM »
good reply Humtum ji!!!

bahoot khoob Manav ji... simple lafzo mai bahoot achi tarah se apne zazbato ko piroya hai... Good job!!
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Roja
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«Reply #23 on: August 15, 2007, 03:30:48 AM »
Quote from: "Manav Mehra"
Quote from: "HumTum is back"
Nice Manav n All Usual Smile

Ishq to apni manzil ko paye
Phir "Manav" kyun gabraye?

Jo dard ko apna banaye
Wohi dard mein sakun paye

Gar tu Pyaar ki Aag jalaye
Yaqenan "Mansi" Pigaal jaye

Kudha meri dua kabool farmaye
"Mansi" "Manav" ki ho jaye !!


HumTum



HumTum ji.... aap ka kya kehna!!!.. ek anjaan shaks ke liye aaise koi dua karne wale bohaat kam dikhte hain.Honestly kabhi aaisa mujhse bhi nahi hua. aaise mann mein ek vichar hai... jo jis raah par chal chuka hu,usko apne peechle walon mein kabhi na kabhi apna-app dikhai de jata hai... thanks ki aap ne aaise mere liye dua ki...

jab apno se bardkar shaks bhi yuhi badal jaye
aise mein kahan koi dard mein sakun phir paye

Hai "Manav" toh ek insaan hi "HumTum ji"
dil zakhmi phir kayun na uska bhi tilmilaye

sholon sa toofan utha rakha hai dil mein
"manasi" kayun hai be-asar, yeh samjh na aaye

magar kehna na usse bewaffa yaaron tum kabhi bhi
shayad waqt hai jo,mere sath,usse bhi hai aajamaye...!!!



wah wah... Manav ji..bahut khoob
and Hum Tum... nice reply...  =D>
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Pooja
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«Reply #24 on: August 15, 2007, 02:51:09 PM »
Payar ka dard wo hi shakas hai samjh paaye
Jo payar mai dil se hai thokar khaye

Insaan kai baar khud main itna majboor ho jaaye
Chah kar bhi dil ki baat, juban per na la paaye

Pard kar apki shayari Manav ji, bas itna hi man mai ayye
Pooja apke payar ke samne, dil se hai sir ko jhukaye !!
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #25 on: August 18, 2007, 04:53:26 AM »
Many many Thanks Talat ji...


Thanks Pooja ji... aapse comment milna bohat encouraging hai

Thanks to Roja ji also...


aap sabse nivedan hai.. aap bhi kuch likhein
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #26 on: August 18, 2007, 04:55:39 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Payar ka dard wo hi shakas hai samjh paaye
Jo payar mai dil se hai thokar khaye

Insaan kai baar khud main itna majboor ho jaaye
Chah kar bhi dil ki baat, juban per na la paaye

Pard kar apki shayari Manav ji, bas itna hi man mai ayye
Pooja apke payar ke samne, dil se hai sir ko jhukaye !!



Pooja,apki baat dil ko chu gayi.... last time Humtum ji ke baat sun kar ankhein nam ho gayi thi.. ajj aapne almost palkein bheego di meri...


pard ke aapki shayari Pooja ji
mann mein ek baat aayi hai

har koi hai prem-payaasa jag mein
lekin alag alag trishnayi hai

mil jayeinge,to khil jayeinge "manasi"
warna apni toh "manav",zindagi murjhayi hai
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #27 on: August 18, 2007, 04:55:57 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Payar ka dard wo hi shakas hai samjh paaye
Jo payar mai dil se hai thokar khaye

Insaan kai baar khud main itna majboor ho jaaye
Chah kar bhi dil ki baat, juban per na la paaye

Pard kar apki shayari Manav ji, bas itna hi man mai ayye
Pooja apke payar ke samne, dil se hai sir ko jhukaye !!



Pooja,apki baat dil ko chu gayi.... last time Humtum  ki baat sun kar ankhein nam ho gayi thi.. ajj aapne almost palkein bheego di meri...


pard ke aapki shayari Pooja ji
mann mein ek baat aayi hai

har koi hai prem-payaasa jag mein
lekin alag alag trishnayi hai

mil jayeinge,to khil jayeinge "manasi"
warna apni toh "manav",zindagi murjhayi hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #28 on: August 18, 2007, 06:39:37 AM »
murjha jaaye jo
wo payar nahi hota

khatm jo ho jaaye
wo intzaaar nahi hota

agg main jal kar hi kundan banta hai
jo payar ki agg main na jale wo payar nahi hota
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #29 on: August 18, 2007, 09:28:45 AM »
aapki baat bilkul sahi hai , pehli char lines aapka jawab aur next char lines mein aapko sawal....


uss kundan ko iss kundan ki kya keemat
jara iss nadaan ko bhi samjha dijiye

zindagi se lambe intezar ka kya faayda
mehfil mein apne sahbdon se bayaan kijiye

Phool aur fiza hamesha mehakte nahi rehte
ek hadh ke baad kaise khile,itna farma dijiye

Payar ko toh har dard ki dawa kehte hain log
issi mein kyun mile hai dard,yehi bata dijiye
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