lamha lamha yeh dard....

by Manav Mehra on August 05, 2007, 01:43:39 PM
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lamha lamha yeh dard
nas nas mein utarTa jaye

kayun waqt nahi mere liye
soch soch yeh dil ghabraye

kya karu kahan jaun
mann mein yeh "Manav" sawal uthaye

ankh mein shikayat,dil mein tadap
"Manasi",mera dum hai ghutTa jaye...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2007, 05:46:46 PM »
Mr. your lines are always simple but easily expressing what you want to.
Good words.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2007, 06:20:23 AM »
I must say i thing here.. simple & beautiful..

Keep writing Manav
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2007, 04:55:28 AM »
Quote from: "Ricky"
Mr. your lines are always simple but easily expressing what you want to.
Good words.


Thanks for liking.. i hope i will always leave the same impression
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2007, 04:57:33 AM »
Quote from: "deepika_divya"
I must say i thing here.. simple & beautiful..

Keep writing Manav



thanks divya.. ur signatures are very impressive.

pls do write something here !!!!
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angel4u
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2007, 05:14:01 PM »
this is really lovely,
simple and sweet Usual Smile
keep it up
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«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2007, 09:03:05 PM »

Pehle Pehel To Khwabon Ka Dam Bharne Lagti Hai,
Phir Aankhein Palkon Mein Chhup Kar Rone Lagti Hai,

Jaane Tab Kyon Suraj Ki Khwahish Karte Hai Log,
Jab Baarish Mein Sab Deewarein Girne Lagti Hai,

Tasveeron Ka Rog Bhi Aakhri Kaisa Hota Hai,
Tanhayi Mein Baat Karo To Bolne Lagti Hai,

Sahil Se Takrane Wali Wehshi Maujein Bhi,
Zinda Rehne Ki Khwahish Mein Marne Lagti Hai,

Tum Kya Jaano Lafzon Ke Aazaar Ki Shiddat Ko,
Yaadein Tak Sochon Ki Aag Mein Jalne Lagti Hai...
* * * * *


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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2007, 11:24:56 PM »
bahoot khoob Manav ji!!

Nice sharing Angle!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2007, 04:30:14 AM »
Very Nice one Manav... =D>

And Beautiful Sharing Angel... Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #9 on: August 08, 2007, 09:18:47 AM »
sard hawayo ka jhoka ruk  jata hai
chupke se kaano mea,kuch keh jata hai

chukar mere rom rom ko
ak meeta gum de jata hai

juda hun sanam se main apne
Is baat ka ehsaas kara jata hai

dard jisse bulana chahti hun
usse phir yaad kara jata hai

lamha lamha beet rahi meri zindagi
ab is yaadon ka safar nahi saha jata hai

Divya
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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2007, 09:48:03 AM »
manav ji...a very simple but emotional poem!! bohot hi acha likha hai! keep it up!!!

Angel and deepika...bohot khoob!!

 :D
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angel4u
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2007, 08:47:45 PM »
Thanks pooja di, shikha and meena JI:)
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #12 on: August 09, 2007, 11:24:27 AM »
Thanks Pooja,Shikha,Meena ...aap sab bhi  mere sath aapni ek-adh rachna share karein toh achha lagega.

Angel thanks for liking and sharing. keep sharing and writing
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«Reply #13 on: August 09, 2007, 11:27:12 AM »
dard jisse bulana chahti hun
usse phir yaad kara jata hai

bohaat achhe divya !!!. appko pard kar, kuch likha hai, umeed hai aapko aor baki doston ko pasand aayega.


sihran teri yaadon ki
pal pal tadapa rahi hai

judai teri khusbu ki
jeena bhula rahi hai

doori tere ehsaas ki
khoon ke ansu rula rahi hai

kate kaise ek bhi lamha
dhadkan doobti ja rahi hai

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«Reply #14 on: August 09, 2007, 05:03:41 PM »
thanks manav,

judayi teri meri rooh ko ashqon mein doobo gayi,
mohabbat karne ki kya khoob saza dhadkane de gayi,
pehle dhadakti thi hamare liye,
tumhare jane se ye bhi dilse bewafayi kar gayi
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