lamha-lamha

by ranjana on April 24, 2006, 04:38:44 AM
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lamha-lamha waqt ko fislate dekha,
us fislate waqt mein maine akas tera dekha.........

Jab-jab nadi ko sagar se milte dekha,
jaise maine apne dil ko tujhse milte dekha....

Jab-jab hawaon ne sehalaya darkthon ko,
maine tujhko apne daman se lipta dekha.......

Jab-jab seepe mein boond gir ke moti bani,
us seepe ko maine apni kokh sa dekha................

Jab-jab chaaye rang indar-dhanush ke,
un rango main khud ko tere pyar mein duba dekha...........

Dur jab abhaas liye mile dharti gagan,
aase hi tera milna maine tujhse dekha..........

PAR...........kya kabhi mile hain dharti gagan........?
is liye aaj khud ko bahut tanaha maine dekha..........
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2006, 04:55:17 AM »
wah wah bahut achaa ranjanaa........issa dekh kar kuch yaad aagayaa yaar sad5 .......anyways, keep up the good work....gr8 work yaar!!!!!
and WELCOME to YOINDIA dear!!!:)
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2006, 05:16:16 AM »
wah kaya baat hai Ranjana bahoot khoob!! Apka Yoindia mai sawagat hai!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2006, 12:39:23 PM »
shukriya Isaha and Pooja.......

aap dono ne isko pada aur pasand kiya.......

with love

ranju
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nirbhay
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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2006, 12:44:23 PM »
bahut he khoob ranjana jee!!!
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sweety pie
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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2006, 01:14:00 PM »
Great work! Usual Smile
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ranjana
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«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2006, 05:05:35 AM »
SHUKRIYA .........NIRBHAY.........

WITH LOVE

RANJU
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ranjana
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«Reply #7 on: April 25, 2006, 05:06:43 AM »
THANKS......

SWEETIPIE.......!

WITH LOVE

RANJU
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ranjana
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«Reply #8 on: April 26, 2006, 08:52:15 AM »
shukriya Majid ji.............

LAMHA LAMHA WAQT KO GUZAR TE DEKHA.
APNE HAATHO SE TERE HAATH KO CHHUT TE DEKHA.
JAB AAYI TERI YAAD TANHA RAATO MAIN
TO KHUD KO ROTE BHI DEKHA.
DEKHTE THE KHWABO MAIN TUJHE HAR WAQT SAATH.
JAB AANKH KHULI TO KHUD KO TANHA DEKHA...
 
 
bahut khub.......

thanks

ranju
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vikas2210
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«Reply #9 on: April 26, 2006, 09:07:00 AM »
lamha lamha khud ko pighalte dekha
lamha lamha khud ko trapte dekha.....
Ki jab jab sone koshish ki tujhko khud mai milte dekha
lamha lamha maine khudko tujhme badalte dekha...


nice Ranju and nice majid

keep it up....
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ranjana
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«Reply #10 on: April 26, 2006, 04:12:40 PM »
lamha lamha khud ko pighalte dekha
lamha lamha khud ko trapte dekha.....
Ki jab jab sone koshish ki tujhko khud mai milte dekha
lamha lamha maine khudko tujhme badalte dekha...

thanks vikas ji........

bahut bahut shukriya

with  love

ranju
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #11 on: April 26, 2006, 06:05:26 PM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai apne RANJANA JI..
aur MAJID BHIA, VIKAS JI aapne bhi acha likha hai..

Tere bin LAMHA-LAMHA, ek-ek saal sa lagta hai,
kisi aur ka ho chuka hai tu, phir bhi apna sa lagta hai....

tere sath hi mujhe yeh duniya rangeen aati thi nazar,
ab to tere bin yeh jahan bhi mujhe berang sa lagta hai.....
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«Reply #12 on: April 26, 2006, 06:13:09 PM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
lamha-lamha waqt ko fislate dekha,
us fislate waqt mein maine akas tera dekha.........

Jab-jab nadi ko sagar se milte dekha,
jaise maine apne dil ko tujhse milte dekha....

Jab-jab hawaon ne sehalaya darkthon ko,
maine tujhko apne daman se lipta dekha.......

Jab-jab seepe mein boond gir ke moti bani,
us seepe ko maine apni kokh sa dekha................

Jab-jab chaaye rang indar-dhanush ke,
un rango main khud ko tere pyar mein duba dekha...........

Dur jab abhaas liye mile dharti gagan,
aase hi tera milna maine tujhse dekha..........

PAR...........kya kabhi mile hain dharti gagan........?
is liye aaj khud ko bahut tanaha maine dekha..........


Wahh ranjana bohat hi khoob likha aapne,alst two lines r really the best finishing lines that cud b for this ghazal.And Welcome 2 yoindia Usual Smile .

Nice one majid n vicky.
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ranjana
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«Reply #13 on: April 28, 2006, 08:52:24 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya NIDHI .............

YAHAN sab ne bahut pyar se welcome kiya accha laag

with love

ranju
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vikas2210
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«Reply #14 on: April 29, 2006, 04:51:07 AM »
Ranju u are welcome and thanks for liking my effort.

take care

vikas
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