Lamhe ki khata...........mann

by mann.mann on September 14, 2012, 08:48:14 AM
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Lamhe main khata ki thi.
Sadiyon tak saza payi.

Us gham ki udasi bhi,
Aankhon main utar aayi.

Ab bhid na raas aaye,
Aur dasti hai tanhai.

Apne sab chhod gaye,
Ab ruthi hai parchhai.

Tumhe jitni sadayen di,
Sab jake palat aayi.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2012, 09:00:41 AM »
waah maan sahab bohut khub
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2012, 10:07:07 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2012, 01:19:03 PM »
Lamhe main khata ki thi.
Sadiyon tak saza payi.

Us gham ki udasi bhi,
Aankhon main utar aayi.

Ab bhid na raas aaye,
Aur dasti hai tanhai.

Apne sab chhod gaye,
Ab ruthi hai parchhai.

Tumhe jitni sadayen di,
Sab jake palat aayi.

Mann



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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2012, 04:14:08 PM »
Bahut khub mann sahbh.... Bahut hee dardile jazbaat pesh kiye aapne....
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«Reply #5 on: September 14, 2012, 04:55:48 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya saahilji
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«Reply #6 on: September 14, 2012, 05:03:35 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya touhid sahab....
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«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2012, 05:04:40 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji.... ummid hai ki aapka sath aage bhi milta rahega.....
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«Reply #8 on: September 14, 2012, 11:50:32 PM »
Bahut hi khoob likha mann jee. kaafi achha laga aapka ye kalaam.
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«Reply #9 on: September 14, 2012, 11:54:03 PM »
Lamhe main khata ki thi.
Sadiyon tak saza payi.      lamho.n ney khataa ki
                            sadiyo.n ney sazaa paayii
sher kuch aisey  padha thaa maine

Us gham ki udasi bhi,
Aankhon main utar aayi.

Ab bhid na raas aaye,
Aur dasti hai tanhai.

Apne sab chhod gaye,
Ab ruthi hai parchhai.

Tumhe jitni sadayen di,
Sab jake palat aayi.

Mann


gud Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2012, 09:01:45 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya soudagarji
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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2012, 10:05:25 PM »
Bahut khoob mann jee
jabardast likha hai aapne
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«Reply #12 on: September 16, 2012, 05:36:46 AM »
Lamhe main khata ki thi.
Sadiyon tak saza payi.

Us gham ki udasi bhi,
Aankhon main utar aayi.

Ab bhid na raas aaye,
Aur dasti hai tanhai.

Apne sab chhod gaye,
Ab ruthi hai parchhai.

Tumhe jitni sadayen di,
Sab jake palat aayi.

Mann


bahut khoob.

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«Reply #13 on: September 17, 2012, 08:56:41 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khamoshji
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«Reply #14 on: September 17, 2012, 08:59:48 AM »
shukriya shihabji
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