**~** Maut Ki Dua **~**

by _Vicky_ on July 08, 2008, 11:33:38 AM
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_Vicky_
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Pichli kuch Yaadon Ko, In Channd Alfaazon me Dubo ke, aapke saamne Pesh karne ki koshish ki hai...!!!


Wo Jo Kabhi Mujhe, Duaao Me Maanga Karte The,
Aaj Wahi Meri Maut Ki, Dua Maang Rahe hain...!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2008, 11:48:08 AM »
Wo Jo Kabhi Mujhe, Duaao Me Maanga Karte The,
Aaj Wahi Meri Maut Ki, Dua Maang Rahe hain...!!


Bahot Khoob Baat kahi Hai aapne..
Mann Sahab

Wo Jo Kabhi Diya Karte The Jawaab
aaj Woh Bhi Sawaal Kar Ne Lage Hai...!!
                           
                            -- Raza
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2008, 11:57:41 AM »
Bohot khoob Mann and Raza,

Woh jo kabhi aankhain bichaaya karte the
Aaj wohi humse nazrain churaya karte hain !!
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2008, 12:01:36 PM »
Shukriya aur Bahut Khoob Raza & Celmira....!!


Wo jo Kabhi Mera Har Khwaab Sajaaya Karte The,
Aaj Wahi Mujhe Haqiqat Me Rulaaya Karte Hain.....!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2008, 12:07:14 PM »
Woh jo kabhi MERE SATH muskuraya karte the
Aaj wohi humaari tazheeq udaaya karte hain  !!
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punam
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2008, 12:20:43 PM »
sab ne bahot acha likhe..
good start from u Mann ji...

woh jo kabhi humse milne taraste the
aaj hume dekh ke andekha karte hain...
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syednaami
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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2008, 12:27:37 PM »
Lagta hai hogaye hain maayoos khud se,,
Is liye maot ki dua kar rahe hain..

Yeh Zindagi hai Khuda ka diya tufha,,
Aisi baaten karke yun gunahgaar na baniye..
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2008, 05:18:19 AM »
nice lines mann ji

jinka ek pal bhi na gujara tha kabhi mere bina
aaj wahi gairon sang baahein daal ghuma karte hain
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2008, 10:53:58 AM »
Shukriya.. Punam & Bhawana Ji...!!

Bahut Accha Likha Hai Celmira ji, Punam & Bhawana... Ehasaason se Bhare Lafz Likhe Hain..!!

Aur Syed Ji aapne.. Sahi Farmaya parrrrrrrrrr.....!!!!! sad5 sad5


Wo Jo Kabhi Meri, Har Shaam Sajaaya Karte The,
Aaj Pal-Pal ek Deedar Ko, Tadpaaya Karte Hain.....!!!

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Shikha12
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2008, 11:17:10 AM »
Bahut khoob Mann, Muhammed, Celmira, Punam, Syednaami, and Kaushikbhawna...

Really nice verses by all of you... Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2008, 12:27:35 PM »
Shukriya Mann and Mahiya Usual Smile

Wo jo ek lamha bhi door reh nahin paate the
Aaj wohi humse sadiyon ke faasle pe hain

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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2008, 12:35:15 PM »
bichaye phool jisne kabhi rahon me meri,
aaj kaante bichaya karte hain,

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Sammual
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«Reply #12 on: July 09, 2008, 02:51:46 PM »
Sabhi Ne Bahut Acha Likha Hai. Applause Applause

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syednaami
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«Reply #13 on: July 09, 2008, 07:14:55 PM »
Hum hain Khuda ke bande,,
Bas jaante hain yeh,,
Usne hi di hai zindagi,,
Phir Maot Ki dua Kaisi..
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«Reply #14 on: July 10, 2008, 10:44:44 AM »
Behad Shukriya.. CELMIRA JI, BEKARAR, SAMMUAL......!!!

Aur Behad dard Bhare Alfaaz Likhe hain Celmira ji, Bekarar & Syed Ji...!!


Wo Jo Kabhi Lab pe Mere, Mohabbat Barsaya karte The,
Aaj Wahi Meri Har Raat Ko, Veeran Banaaya Karte Hain...

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