Mera Yaar Chala,.

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Karke Sitam Mera Yaar Chala,.
Door Nazar Se Mera Pyaar Chala,.

Talab Khushi Ki Kaliyon Ki Thi,.
Dekar Ghamon Ki Bahaar Chala,.
Karke Sitam Mera Yaar Chala,.

Aankhein Ab Dhoondti Hai Usko,.
Thandak Iski Jo Maar Chala,.
Karke Sitam Mera Yaar Chala,.

Ab To Rona Bhi Nahi Aata Mujhe,.
Aadat Ye Bhi Sudhaar Chala,.
Karke Sitam Mera Yaar Chala,.

Bhoolaaoonga Use To Kaise Main,.
Jaate Jaate Jo Pukaar Chala,.
Karke Sitam Mera Yaar Chala,.

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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2009, 10:52:54 AM »
Bahut Khoob Azeem, Ye lines to dil ko choo gayi,  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.


Ab To Rona Bhi Nahi Aata Mujhe,.
Aadat Ye Bhi Sudhaar Chala,.


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«Reply #2 on: July 07, 2009, 10:55:48 AM »
Bahut khoob Azeem bhaiya...
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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2009, 11:10:11 AM »
kya baat hai azeemji....

karke sitam jo mera yaar chala,
yun bhi jeena hai, mujhe pata chala.
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«Reply #4 on: July 07, 2009, 12:50:09 PM »
Wah Azeem Bhai.. Mohabbat Ho Ya Dard.. aap to Masha-Allah Har Topic par Behad Khubsoorat likhte Hain.. yahan bhi DArd Ko Bakhoobi Bayan Kiya hai doat.. Lajawab Creation hai.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooob... Applause Applause


Sitam To Yeh Hai "Azeem", Wo Shaks Bewafa Bhi Nahi,
Aakhir Kaise Bahalaaun Dil Ko, Ke Bhool Ja Sitamgar Ko...!!



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«Reply #5 on: July 07, 2009, 12:52:29 PM »
Bahut Khoob Azeem, Ye lines to dil ko choo gayi,  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.


Ab To Rona Bhi Nahi Aata Mujhe,.
Aadat Ye Bhi Sudhaar Chala,.




Shukriya Shally Ji Hamaari Koshish Ko Sarhaane Ke Liye,.
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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2009, 12:53:54 PM »
Bahut khoob Azeem bhaiya...

Shukriya Punam Didi,.

kya baat hai azeemji....

karke sitam jo mera yaar chala,
yun bhi jeena hai, mujhe pata chala.

Shukriya Cara Ji, And Nice LInes,.
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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2009, 01:07:30 PM »
Wah Azeem Bhai.. Mohabbat Ho Ya Dard.. aap to Masha-Allah Har Topic par Behad Khubsoorat likhte Hain.. yahan bhi DArd Ko Bakhoobi Bayan Kiya hai doat.. Lajawab Creation hai.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooob... Applause Applause


Sitam To Yeh Hai "Azeem", Wo Shaks Bewafa Bhi Nahi,
Aakhir Kaise Bahalaaun Dil Ko, Ke Bhool Ja Sitamgar Ko...!!



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Shukriya Bhai, Hamaari Har Koshish Ko Sarhaane Ke Liye, Inshallah Koshish Rahegi Ke Har Baar Kuch Achcha Hi Pesh Karoon,.

Waise NIce Lines Janaab,.


Kehkar Bhi Dil Ko Dekha Maine,.
Usko Bhoolne Ka Aksar Socha Maine,.

Har Koshish Nakaam Rahi,.
Meri Mohabbat Benaam Rahi,.
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«Reply #8 on: July 07, 2009, 01:41:33 PM »
Wah Azeem bhai very nice creation,mindblowing,beautiful lines by Shally and Mann ji. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2009, 01:55:18 PM »
Wah Azeem bhai very nice creation,mindblowing,beautiful lines by Shally and Mann ji. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Madhuwesh Ji,.
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«Reply #10 on: July 07, 2009, 03:59:13 PM »
bahut dard bhare alfaaj likhe hai aapne Ajeem ji.......aankhe nam ho gyi
bahut khoob...... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: July 07, 2009, 04:10:08 PM »
bahot khoob aur dard se bhara kalaam likha hai
aapne Azeem dear,very nicely written,awesome poem

Shukriya Kaash Bhai,.
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«Reply #12 on: July 07, 2009, 04:11:08 PM »
bahut dard bhare alfaaj likhe hai aapne Ajeem ji.......aankhe nam ho gyi
bahut khoob...... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Pop Ji, ke Aapko Hamaara Kalaam Pasand Aaya,.
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«Reply #13 on: July 07, 2009, 06:15:55 PM »
Bahaut bahaut khoob Azeem bhaijan...Behad behad acha likte ho yaar aap..Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: July 09, 2009, 02:26:48 PM »
Bahaut bahaut khoob Azeem bhaijan...Behad behad acha likte ho yaar aap..Applause Applause

Shukriya Rahim Bhai Hausla Afzaai Karne Ke LIye,.
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