~Woh yaar chala~ by Rahim

by dead heart on October 02, 2010, 04:36:48 PM
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Barbaad mera jahan karke woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Jo kal tak meri duniya ko roshan karta tha,
Mere sapnon tak ko be-rang kar woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Izhar-e-mohobat mujse aur baahon main kisi aur ki rehta tha,
Aisi bhi wafa nibha kar woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Apna sab kuch jis kay naam kar diya ‘Khamosh’,
Rulane wali yaadon ka tofa de kay woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Kabhi mera dil bhi ehsaason se bhara tha; aj pathar sa hai,
‘Rahim’ ko ‘Khamosh’ bana kar woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..


~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: October 02, 2010, 08:01:07 PM »
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Rahim ................very very nyc .........

Bhut khoob dost ........
 Applause Applause Applause Applause


" main ankhian bichai bethi rehi uski raah main
Aur voh kissi aur ka haath tham ke chala

Voh dekho yaaro mera yaar chala
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«Reply #2 on: October 02, 2010, 10:39:11 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai.....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2010, 09:15:31 AM »
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Teh dil se shukriya Neel Dost..
Bahaut khubsoorat lines apki orre se bhi.. Applause Applause

Teh dil se shukriya Kapil Dost..!
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«Reply #4 on: October 03, 2010, 12:16:54 PM »
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Rahim .kya kahun bhai iske liye..itna dard aur tadap hai isem k aankhein bhar aai....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

mere hi gumahon ka bojh tha k jo wo na seh saka
dard mila use mujhse itna k wo mujhse dur ho chala
bada hi majbuur hokar dekhao mera yaar chala
dard ko dil me chhupakar dekho mera yaar chala...
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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2010, 03:09:57 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya di..!

Apki chaar lines ne ek naya pehlu reflect kiya hai kay kyun woh yaar chala..bahaut bahaut khoob.. Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 03, 2010, 04:32:36 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: October 03, 2010, 04:41:25 PM »
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Rahim Bhai.. Kya Baat Hai.. "Wo Yaar Chala" Yeh Topic Hi Apni Kahani Kaha raha hai.. Dard Ke Sath Tadap Ko Lafzon me Behad Khubsoorati se Utaara hai Bhai.. Heart Touching Creation.. Applause Applause

Dil se Daad Kubool Karo Bhai..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Chod Ke Ja Rahi Ho, Phir Se Ek Baar Tum,
Is Baar To Bata Do, Phir Laut Ke Kab Aaogi...!!




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«Reply #8 on: October 03, 2010, 08:05:00 PM »
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Shukriya Yasmeen jee aur Vikas bhaijan..
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«Reply #9 on: October 03, 2010, 08:06:47 PM »
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Vikas bhaijan, Bahaut khubsoorat do lines..badi masoomiyat se apne uski bewaffai ko chupaya hai aur meetha sa sawal kar gaye..
Applause Applause Applause

Baar baar chale ate ho zindagi main meri,
Zalim tumhe toh bewaffai ki ada bhi nahin ati..!
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