Mere dil dhadkane ka aalam na poocho

by Deepati on December 08, 2008, 10:52:08 AM
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Dil ki dharkan tak yuhin ham guzarne lag gaye
yeh kis nazuk mod se ham guzarne lag gaye

mere dil dhadkane ka aalam na poocho
guzarati hai kaise shab-e-gam na poocho

woh ik baat jisko nazar kah gayi hai
wohi baat honthon se hardam na poocho

na roke gaye gul ke aansoo kisi se
udi kaise phoolon se shabnam na poocho

koi dil ki nazuk ragyein choomata hai
jawaan kis kadar hai yeh mausam na poocho

tumhe kyon bataayein ham apni haqeeqat
hamaara bhi hai koi hamdam na poocho


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«Reply #1 on: December 08, 2008, 01:29:48 PM »
Dil ki dharkan tak yuhin ham guzarne lag gaye
yeh kis nazuk mod se ham guzarne lag gaye

mere dil dhadkane ka aalam na poocho
guzarati hai kaise shab-e-gam na poocho

woh ik baat jisko nazar kah gayi hai
wohi baat honthon se hardam na poocho

na roke gaye gul ke aansoo kisi se
udi kaise phoolon se shabnam na poocho

koi dil ki nazuk ragyein choomata hai
jawaan kis kadar hai yeh mausam na poocho

tumhe kyon bataayein ham apni haqeeqat
hamaara bhi hai koi hamdam na poocho


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Hai ni... kya kamaal ka hai yeh, bahut khoob Deepati


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«Reply #2 on: December 08, 2008, 01:52:48 PM »
nice sharing Deepati g..!!!
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2008, 04:47:11 PM »
Dil ki dharkan tak yuhin ham guzarne lag gaye
yeh kis nazuk mod se ham guzarne lag gaye

mere dil dhadkane ka aalam na poocho
guzarati hai kaise shab-e-gam na poocho

woh ik baat jisko nazar kah gayi hai
wohi baat honthon se hardam na poocho

na roke gaye gul ke aansoo kisi se
udi kaise phoolon se shabnam na poocho

koi dil ki nazuk ragyein choomata hai
jawaan kis kadar hai yeh mausam na poocho

tumhe kyon bataayein ham apni haqeeqat
hamaara bhi hai koi hamdam na poocho


NM

Good Sharing Deepti Ji,.
Pardhkar Achcha Laga,.

dosti jab kisi se ki jaye
dushmanon ki bhi rae li jaye


maut ka zahr hai fizaon mein
ab kahan ja k sans li jaye


bas isi soch mein hun duba hua
ye nadi kaise par ki jaye


mere mazi k zakhm bharne lage
aj phir koi bhul ki jaye


botlen khol k to pi barson
aj dil khol k bhi pi jaye

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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2008, 04:41:05 AM »

Hai ni... kya kamaal ka hai yeh, bahut khoob Deepati


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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2008, 04:41:49 AM »
nice sharing Deepati g..!!!

Thanks, Sadia Ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2008, 04:44:18 AM »
Good Sharing Deepti Ji,.
Pardhkar Achcha Laga,.

dosti jab kisi se ki jaye
dushmanon ki bhi rae li jaye


maut ka zahr hai fizaon mein
ab kahan ja k sans li jaye


bas isi soch mein hun duba hua
ye nadi kaise par ki jaye


mere mazi k zakhm bharne lage
aj phir koi bhul ki jaye


botlen khol k to pi barson
aj dil khol k bhi pi jaye

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Thanks, Janasheen Ji

Also nice sharing  Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2008, 05:26:22 PM »
Yaar Deepti Aage Bhi To L"ikhte,.
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«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2008, 12:16:06 AM »
Yaar Deepti Aage Bhi To L"ikhte,.
Khissa Aage Badhaate,.

Main Aiyna Hoon,Wo Mera Khayal Rakhti Hay
Main Toot-ta Hoon Tu Chun Kar Sambhal Rakhti Hay,
$ *-*-*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* $


Har Aik Maslay Ka Hal Nikal Rakhti Hai
Zaheen Hai,Mujhay Hairat Main Daal Rakhti Hay,
$ *-*-*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* $


Main Jab Bhi Tark-e-taluq Ki Baat Karta Hoon
Woh Rokti Hay Mujhay, Kal Pay Taal Rakhti Hay,
$ *-*-*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* $


Woh Mairay Dard Ko Chunnti Hay Apnay Pooron Say
Woh Mairay Wastay Khud Ko Nidhaal Rakhti Hay,
$ *-*-*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* $nm

BAHUT KHOOB. WAH


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«Reply #9 on: December 13, 2008, 01:04:47 PM »
Yaar Deepti Aage Bhi To L"ikhte,.
Khissa Aage Badhaate,.

Main Aiyna Hoon,Wo Mera Khayal Rakhti Hay
Main Toot-ta Hoon Tu Chun Kar Sambhal Rakhti Hay,
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Har Aik Maslay Ka Hal Nikal Rakhti Hai
Zaheen Hai,Mujhay Hairat Main Daal Rakhti Hay,
$ *-*-*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* $


Main Jab Bhi Tark-e-taluq Ki Baat Karta Hoon
Woh Rokti Hay Mujhay, Kal Pay Taal Rakhti Hay,
$ *-*-*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* $


Woh Mairay Dard Ko Chunnti Hay Apnay Pooron Say
Woh Mairay Wastay Khud Ko Nidhaal Rakhti Hay,
$ *-*-*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-* $nm

Wah wah Jaanasheen Ji, Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #10 on: December 13, 2008, 01:10:20 PM »
Meri zubaan se meri daastaan suno tou sahi
yaqeen karo naa karo meharbaan suno tou sahi

chalo yeh maan liya mujrim-e-mohabbat hai
hamaare jurm kaa hamse bayaan suno tou sahi

labon ko sii ke jo bethe hain bazm-e-duniya mein
kabhi tou unki bhi khamoshiyan suno tou sahi

kahoge waqt ko mujrim bhari bahaaron mein
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«Reply #11 on: December 13, 2008, 02:49:58 PM »
Meri zubaan se meri daastaan suno tou sahi
yaqeen karo naa karo meharbaan suno tou sahi

chalo yeh maan liya mujrim-e-mohabbat hai
hamaare jurm kaa hamse bayaan suno tou sahi

labon ko sii ke jo bethe hain bazm-e-duniya mein
kabhi tou unki bhi khamoshiyan suno tou sahi

kahoge waqt ko mujrim bhari bahaaron mein
jalaa tha kaise mera ashiyan suno tou sahi


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hai ni Deepati


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HUM SUNNTEY HAI,AAP KAHO TOH SAHI
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«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2008, 06:56:53 AM »
hai ni Deepati


JARA AAP APNI BAAT KARO TOH SAHI
HUM SUNNTEY HAI,AAP KAHO TOH SAHI
DOSTOH KEY LIYE HUM HAR LAMHA HAZIR HAI
APNA JAAN, KUCH KAHO TOH SAHI


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Bahut khoob, Jasbir Ji

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yeh ehataraam-e-junun hai ki sii liya daaman
vagarna ek tamaasha sa kuu-ba-kuu kartey

hamein yaqin hai ki gar tu qarib bhi hota
tou duur jaake kahin teri justaju kartey


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«Reply #13 on: December 14, 2008, 01:18:51 PM »
Bahut khoob, Jasbir Ji

Yeh aarzoo hii rahi ki koi aarzoo kartey
khud apni aag mein jalte jigar lahoo kartey

tere khayaal mein gum hoke ek gazal kahtey
aur us gazal ko naa rusva kuu-ba-kuu kartey

yeh ehataraam-e-junun hai ki sii liya daaman
vagarna ek tamaasha sa kuu-ba-kuu kartey

hamein yaqin hai ki gar tu qarib bhi hota
tou duur jaake kahin teri justaju kartey


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wah Deepati, kya baat kahi hai aap neh



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«Reply #14 on: December 14, 2008, 09:16:21 PM »
Shukriya deepti Ji,
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