Mere shahar ka mausam udaas hai...!!

by Talat on January 30, 2009, 10:55:36 AM
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #45 on: February 04, 2009, 06:01:12 AM »
Tere Shehar Mein Aaya Tha, Bebas Tha, Lachaar Tha Main,.
Is Daur Mein Paagal Banaa Hoon, Us Daur Me Kisi Ka Pyaar Tha Main,.
Bahut khoob Jaanasheen ji!

Us dour mein bhi wo hi wo they:
Is dour mein bhi wo hi wo hain!
Mujhko to lagtaa hai aisaa:
Har dour mein wo hi wo hongey!

Yah rishtah bahut puraanaa hai!
Bas yuun hi aanaa-jaanaa hai!
Duniyaa mein mein, duniyaa mein wo;
Ham jahaan raheyngey, wo hongey!!

                   - abd bundeli
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Talat
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«Reply #46 on: February 10, 2009, 11:09:11 AM »
Bohot Khoob..NIce lines Azeem, Abd Ji
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #47 on: February 10, 2009, 02:33:11 PM »
Bohot Khoob..NIce lines Azeem, Abd Ji
Shukriyah!
           - abd bundeli
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divyam
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«Reply #48 on: March 15, 2009, 05:47:48 AM »
Quote from: Celmira
Timtimaati jaise har khushii ki aas hai
mere shahar ka mausam bohat udaas hai

laakh zaraar seh kar bhii yuu.n hi dhaDhkata hai
bohat puKhta is imaarat kaa asaas hai

takhliif bhi is ki sahuu.n, davaa bhii na karuu.n
haa.n, yeh dard dil ka baDa hi khaas hai !


Dr sahiba,

aap ka kalaam achchha laga, khaas kar chune huye aasaar behad pasand aaye...meri aur se daad haazir hai.......

yuu.n hi koshish zaari rakhiye, ummeed hai aap aage aur bhi behtar likh paaye.ngi......

Mayank
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Roja
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«Reply #49 on: March 15, 2009, 06:54:00 AM »
Udaasi Ka Nakhaab Tere Chehre Se Hataane Aaya Hoon,.
Tere Shehar Mein Main Khushiyaan Lutaane Aaya Hoon,.

Dekhaa Nahi Jaata, Kisi Ke Bhi Dilka Dard "Mujhse,.
Main Tujhe Bhi Khushiyon Se Dosti Karwaane Aaya Hoon,.

Tere Chehre Pe, Udaasi Mujhe Achchi Nahi Lagti,.
Tere Haq Ki Hai Jo Khuhshiyaan, Tujhe Pahoonchaane Aaya Hoon,.

_____________________________-Jaanasheen-


Wah bahut acche dear Azeem
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Talat
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«Reply #50 on: March 15, 2009, 10:19:13 PM »


Dr sahiba,

aap ka kalaam achchha laga, khaas kar chune huye aasaar behad pasand aaye...meri aur se daad haazir hai.......

yuu.n hi koshish zaari rakhiye, ummeed hai aap aage aur bhi behtar likh paaye.ngi......

Mayank


Bohot bohot shukriya Mayank Ji, aapne is thread pe waqt diya...Hausla afzai ka bohot bohot shukriya..Inshallah koshish hogi aur behtar likhne ke Usual Smile
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