milte hai (nam)

by poonamA on July 25, 2013, 12:35:33 PM
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Mlite hai hum unse pyar jaatane ke liye
Door rahte hai vo hume bas saatane ke liye

Samajhte hai mehfilon ki shaan hai hum
Bheegte hai hum barish me ansoo chupane ke liye

Humse milne ki unko koyee chahat nahi
Hum door rahte hai unke aur kareeb aane ke liye

Jante nahi vo mere ansoou ki kimat
Har waqt khade hai taiyaar mujhe rulaane ke liye

Koyee gila shikayat nahi karenge unse
Shamaa hai hum to bas jal jaane  ke liye
 
Bekaraar  dil ko ab mere rahat nahi
jee rahe hai POONAM us par mar jaane ke liye






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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2013, 12:57:26 PM »
waah waah poonam ji.. bahut khoob..  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2013, 01:05:52 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2013, 01:18:01 PM »
WaaH WaaH Poonamji Bahut Khoobsurati se aap itne gehrey jasbaat bayan kiya.. aur ek rau toh banta hai ji...........
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«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2013, 01:37:53 PM »
Poonam Jee Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2013, 01:51:16 PM »
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

wa wa wa ji bhot khob .
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«Reply #6 on: July 25, 2013, 02:01:02 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob... dheron daad...
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«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2013, 04:30:25 PM »
Waaaah waaah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 25, 2013, 05:11:09 PM »

Poonam jee Aadaab...!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... badi achchi kalaam huyi hai...
kafi khoob ashaar rahe...

Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #9 on: July 25, 2013, 05:27:28 PM »
wah wa hwah bahut khub poonama ji bahut badhiya likha... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: July 25, 2013, 07:47:06 PM »
Mlite hai hum unse pyar jaatane ke liye
Door rahte hai vo hume bas saatane ke liye

Samajhte hai mehfilon ki shaan hai hum
Bheegte hai hum barish me ansoo chupane ke liye

Humse milne ki unko koyee chahat nahi
Hum door rahte hai unke aur kareeb aane ke liye

Jante nahi vo mere ansoou ki kimat
Har waqt khade hai taiyaar mujhe rulaane ke liye

Koyee gila shikayat nahi karenge unse
Shamaa hai hum to bas jal jaane  ke liye
 
Bekaraar  dil ko ab mere rahat nahi
jee rahe hai POONAM us par mar jaane ke liye









Dil ko choo lene waalee abhivyakti
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«Reply #11 on: July 25, 2013, 10:56:14 PM »
Samajhte hai mehfilon ki shaan hai hum
Bheegte hai hum barish me ansoo chupane ke liye

Koyee gila shikayat nahi karenge unse
Shamaa hai hum to bas jal jaane  ke liye

Emotional kar diya poonam jee..bahut bahut bahut khooob likha hai..
Ab aur kya kahu..rau le lijiye..happy9
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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2013, 11:16:47 PM »
Bheegte hai hum barish me ansoo chupane ke liye

 Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2013, 11:18:31 PM »
wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #14 on: July 26, 2013, 12:42:10 AM »
bahut hi emotional jazbaat hain. Applause Applause Applause
Jaise chahte hain dil ki gahraayee se
Uske liye sab kuchh karne ko dil chahta hai

Jitna bhi satane ki kiyon na koshish kare wo
Phir bhi uspe mar mitne ko jee chahta hai
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