milte nahee do dil kabhee.........MKV

by mkv on June 22, 2012, 06:22:34 AM
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Na ghajal hai na ye geet hai
Na ye haar hai na ye jeet hai

Jo hua hai mujhko ae sanam
Vo yakeeen jaano preet hai

Mere dil pe bas nahee mera
Jo hai chahtaa bas jeet hai

Sab kuch lutana padta hai
Ulphat kee ye hi reet hai

Milte nahee do dil kabhee
Sadiyon se ye hee reet hai

Ab laut bhee aao sanam
Hai bula raha mera geet hai

Mai ho gaya tanhaa sanam
Na raha mera koee meet hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2012, 06:34:37 AM »
 icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower baut sunder
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2012, 07:40:32 AM »
boht khub mukesh ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2012, 10:45:47 AM »
khoob kaha MKV Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 22, 2012, 10:50:42 AM »
Bahut  achha  kalaam  hai , MKV ji .
Mubarakbaad  aur  duaaein .
 
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2012, 11:25:25 AM »


MKV JI....ACHCHEE KOSHISH JUST KEEP IT UP..ALL THE BEST..RAQEEB
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2012, 11:50:45 AM »
bahut sundar mukeshji

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 22, 2012, 02:02:40 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  ek dum masssttt zabardasttt Mukesh ji.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne... dil khush ho gaya padh ke....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 22, 2012, 02:18:22 PM »
Na ghajal hai na ye geet hai
Na ye haar hai na ye jeet hai

Jo hua hai mujhko ae sanam
Vo yakeeen jaano preet hai

Mere dil pe bas nahee mera
Jo hai chahtaa bas jeet hai

Sab kuch lutana padta hai
Ulphat kee ye hi reet hai

Milte nahee do dil kabhee
Sadiyon se ye hee reet hai

Ab laut bhee aao sanam
Hai bula rahe mere geet hai

Mai ho gaya tanhaa sanam
Na raha mera koee meet hai


Hai bula rahe mere geet hai...    likhna ghalat hai. Issmein "hai" nahi, "hain" lagega. Aapka radeef "hai" hai, to iss hisaab se iss misre ko durust kar lijiyega.

Baaqi, aapka ye kalaam achha laga.
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«Reply #9 on: June 22, 2012, 05:08:31 PM »
bahut badhiya kalaam mkv ji.......... dhero daad aur mubarak baad

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«Reply #10 on: June 22, 2012, 05:18:42 PM »
nice jee
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mkv
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«Reply #11 on: June 22, 2012, 07:17:43 PM »
icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower baut sunder
Shukriya Sir
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«Reply #12 on: June 23, 2012, 02:53:55 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 23, 2012, 02:59:46 AM »
bahut acche
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«Reply #14 on: June 23, 2012, 05:39:49 AM »
very nice mkv jee true very true
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