MUKADAR

by gum on June 13, 2006, 03:36:10 PM
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Main duba toh kinare pe khadi thi duniya,
Hasne walon mein mera mukadar bhi tha,
Ro rahi thi jo janaje se lipat kar mere,
Kaise keh du ke vahi mera katil tha,
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nirbhay
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2006, 03:57:36 PM »
Wah =D> !
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nikki
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2006, 04:21:16 PM »
nice one Gum...
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mrkotians
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2006, 04:28:06 PM »
khoob hain gum... good one...

Quote from: "gum"
Main duba toh kinare pe khadi thi duniya,
Hasne walon mein mera mukadar bhi tha,
Ro rahi thi jo janaje se lipat kar mere,
Kaise keh du ke vahi mera katil tha,
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2006, 09:59:53 AM »
Bahut achha hai Gum ji.... Very nice....
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2006, 05:21:16 PM »
Quote from: "gum"
Main duba toh kinare pe khadi thi duniya,
Hasne walon mein mera mukadar bhi tha,
Ro rahi thi jo janaje se lipat kar mere,
Kaise keh du ke vahi mera katil tha,


Bahut khoob kaha GUM bhai

MuKaddar ke hum Sikander th na bann paye.....
Par door na the mujhse teri khushion ke saye.....

Motion ki tarah kabhi humne bhi the khawaab sajaye......
The hum khade Manzil pe par tum hee naa aaye.....!!!!!!!
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HANNU
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2006, 07:08:01 PM »
Quote from: "gum"
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Quote from: "gum"
Main duba toh kinare pe khadi thi duniya,
Hasne walon mein mera mukadar bhi tha,
Ro rahi thi jo janaje se lipat kar mere,
Kaise keh du ke vahi mera katil tha,


Bahut khoob kaha GUM bhai

MuKaddar ke hum Sikander th na bann paye.....
Par door na the mujhse teri khushion ke saye.....

Motion ki tarah kabhi humne bhi the khawaab sajaye......
The hum khade Manzil pe par tum hee naa aaye.....!!!!!!!



Lovely Shayar Bhai

Kitna Bhi Chaho na Bhula Paogay humein,
Jitna Be Door ho jayo najdik Payogay humein,
Mita Sakte ho toh mita to yaadein Hamari,
Magar kya sapno se juda kar Payogay humein



Bhot khub Badnaam ji and Gum ji bhot khub likha hai..............


Khabo se nikal daugi hume,
Yaado se nikalo gi kase,

Ban gaye hai hum SAYAA apka,
Apne sayae se door jao ge kase,

Mita dogi naam kitabo se humara,
Apne Dil se mitao gi kase,

Ban gaye hai MUKADAR hum apka,
Apne mukadar se door jaoge kase...!!!!!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2006, 07:44:36 PM »
Mana ki door tumse ja na payegy
Dil apne ko hum ab tadpayegy

Suna hai dard hi hai dar ki dawa
Bas issi dawa se khud ko bahlayegy
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HANNU
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2006, 08:25:45 PM »
Dard bass gaya hai meri zindagi
banke mera mukadar,tere pass kese
aye ga,meri yaado ke samendar me
tujhe dard nazar nahi aaye ga.......!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #9 on: June 16, 2006, 12:21:14 PM »
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Dard bass gaya hai meri zindagi
banke mera mukadar,tere pass kese
aye ga,meri yaado ke samendar me
tujhe dard nazar nahi aaye ga.......!!


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Khabo se nikal daugi hume,
Yaado se nikalo gi kase,

Ban gaye hai hum SAYAA apka,
Apne sayae se door jao ge kase,

Mita dogi naam kitabo se humara,
Apne Dil se mitao gi kase,

Ban gaye hai MUKADAR hum apka,
Apne mukadar se door jaoge kase...!!!!!!!


I Can only Wonderfull.....Hannu Keep it up...... =D>

Dard nahi Makuddar me tere Khushian bhar dunga......
JO WaQt aya kabhi kuch badalne ka toh tera MukaDdar badal dunga......!!!!!!!!!
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #10 on: June 16, 2006, 12:46:00 PM »
aap sabhi bahut acha likhtey hai...............& nice 1 indeed shayar ji


muqaddar ko sab dosh hai dete ,
har koi muqaddar ko beawfa keh raha hai
saari duniya ne mana hai jise muqaddar ,
 woh khud apna muqaddar seh raha hai.

...........@fahi@................
 


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Dard bass gaya hai meri zindagi
banke mera mukadar,tere pass kese
aye ga,meri yaado ke samendar me
tujhe dard nazar nahi aaye ga.......!!


Quote
Khabo se nikal daugi hume,
Yaado se nikalo gi kase,

Ban gaye hai hum SAYAA apka,
Apne sayae se door jao ge kase,

Mita dogi naam kitabo se humara,
Apne Dil se mitao gi kase,

Ban gaye hai MUKADAR hum apka,
Apne mukadar se door jaoge kase...!!!!!!!


I Can only Wonderfull.....Hannu Keep it up...... =D>

Dard nahi Makuddar me tere Khushian bhar dunga......
JO WaQt aya kabhi kuch badalne ka toh tera MukaDdar badal dunga......!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 18, 2006, 03:27:37 AM »
Quote from: "gum"

Kabhi Khamoshi bhi bhayut kuch keh jati hai,
Tadpne ke liye sirf yaadein reh jati hai,
Kya fark padhta hai dil ho ya koyla,
Jalne ke baad toh sirf rakh he reh jati hai


teri jali hui raakh ko hum utha lenge.
duniya ki nazaroon se hum bacha lenge.
raakh leker usko mal lenge aapne jism  mein
us raakh ko hi aapna mukaddar bana lenge.
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«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2006, 03:32:40 AM »
Quote from: "gum"

Main duba toh kinare pe khadi thi duniya,
Hasne walon mein mera mukadar bhi tha,
Ro rahi thi jo janaje se lipat kar mere,
Kaise keh du ke vahi mera katil tha,


bahut khoob gum bhai sach mein aapki lines padker gum nikal aata hai.

main dooba to kinare per has rahi thi duniya.
lagta hai jalane ko mujhe taras rahi thi duniya.
soocha ki kuch humdari ke bol to niklenge uske muh se,
per usney bhi kaha aacha hua mar gaya kamina.
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«Reply #13 on: June 18, 2006, 03:41:01 AM »
Quote from: "gum"
Karni khuda se kuch fariyaad baaki hai,
Humne unse kehni kuch baat joh baaki hai,
Maut aayegi toh kah denge rukh,
Abhi mere  se meri aakhari mulakat baaki hai


yaar sach mein yahan behtareen shayri ka mujayra ho raha hai. every one is superb writting.

nhi kerni khuda se koi fariyaad
ki fariyaad ki khusi na sah paayenge.
ek fariyaad mein manga tumko to itna tadpe.
pata nhi doosri fariyaad mein wo kitna tadpayenge.
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«Reply #14 on: June 18, 2006, 03:48:45 AM »
Gud Jhob Bhondu ji

Poochte hai woh humse.....
Yeh Mukaddar-e-Ishq kya bala hai......

Jara bata de koi unhe.....
Mukaddar deta harr Mahobbar ka Sila hai.......

Woh cheez kya hai jo Aankhein bhar jaati hai.....
Wahi toh Mukaddar hai jo pal pal Ashk chalkati hai....!!!!!!
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