Na kar Alvida... Intezar !

by Intezar on February 28, 2011, 02:17:55 PM
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Badi kash-ma-kash mein hun tu kaise mujhe juda kar jaayega
Aaj jo badli raah tumne jaane phir ye musaafir kidhar jaayega

apne lamho me kuch wakt aur gujaar lun tumhe phir chale jana
Bas yahi tha armaan, phir to har armaan toot kar bikhar jaayega

is kadar bi na baha aansuon ko, mujhe kahin to baaki rehne de
Aankhon se bhi gira diya to bata phir ye katra kidhar jaayega

Kuch aisi bhi gujri hain hasrate apne darmayaan bhulau kaise
Kya khabar thi ke tere dard ka khanjar yun dil me utar jaayega

Koi jazbaat dil ke na khaali rakhna aur na dil ko viraan karna
Phir dhadak uthega dil jab ye shaks teri raahon se gujar jaayega

Dafan hoon in kaagazon me ho sake to kabhi mujhe dohraa lena
hogi is dil ko raahat jab mera koi lafz tumhare hontho par aayega

na najre hata tu, na kar alvida ke saanse meri ab thamne lagi hain
dekh le jee bhar kar aaj, phir tujhse bichhad kar Intezar mar jaayega !


Shukriya
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«Reply #1 on: February 28, 2011, 02:25:53 PM »
wah wah intezarji..... kya baat hai bahut khub

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«Reply #2 on: February 28, 2011, 04:17:01 PM »
superb peshkesh intezar ji....
bht bht khoob...
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«Reply #3 on: February 28, 2011, 11:04:51 PM »
Shukriya Manjum ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

wah wah intezarji..... kya baat hai bahut khub

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«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2011, 11:36:37 PM »
Bahut umda intezar ji...
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2011, 11:43:03 PM »
Shukriya Manzil ji aapka dil se shukriya...

Intezar !

superb peshkesh intezar ji....
bht bht khoob...
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«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2011, 11:49:35 PM »
Intezaar :: aapki ek khasiyat hai jo hame behad pasand hai.
sayd bahut kam shayro me hai wo baat--
aapki kalaamo ke har ashaar dusre ashaar ke saath bahut hi baarik tarike se connected hota hai.
yahi chij aapki kalaam ko jhakashhh banati hai--hum koi ek sher select hi nai kar paate--sab apas me mastam jude hokar khubsurat kalaam ban jaate hain.
aapka nagma as usual mast.
daad nhi deta aajkal mai Usual Smile
apko daad ki kya jarurat ji.
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«Reply #7 on: March 01, 2011, 12:18:41 AM »
Bahut Hi Khubsurat Likha Hai Intezar Ji Aapne
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«Reply #8 on: March 01, 2011, 12:19:09 AM »
Shukriya geet ji aapne pasand kiya...

Intezar !

Bahut umda intezar ji...
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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2011, 12:35:06 AM »


Badi kash-ma-kash mein hun tu kaise mujhe juda kar jaayega
Aaj jo badli raah tumne jaane phir ye musaafir kidhar jaayega

apne lamho me kuch wakt aur gujaar lun tumhe phir chale jana
Bas yahi tha armaan, phir to har armaan toot kar bikhar jaayega

is kadar bi na baha aansuon ko, mujhe kahin to baaki rehne de
Aankhon se bhi gira diya to bata phir ye katra kidhar jaayega

Kuch aisi bhi gujri hain hasrate apne darmayaan bhulau kaise
Kya khabar thi ke tere dard ka khanjar yun dil me utar jaayega

Koi jazbaat dil ke na khaali rakhna aur na dil ko viraan karna
Phir dhadak uthega dil jab ye shaks teri raahon se gujar jaayega

Dafan hoon in kaagazon me ho sake to kabhi mujhe dohraa lena
hogi is dil ko raahat jab mera koi lafz tumhare hontho par aayega

na najre hata tu, na kar alvida ke saanse meri ab thamne lagi hain
dekh le jee bhar kar aaj, phir tujhse bichhad kar Intezar mar jaayega !


Shukriya
Intezar !



umda kalaam intezar ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 01, 2011, 12:41:59 AM »
nirala ji aapka shukriya ada bhi ab nahin kiya jaata... bahut khushi hoti hai aap ka saath jab milta hai... aapne hume kareeb se padha achha laga...

main kuch ban to na saka...
chalo kisi ki khamoshi ka khalal hi sahi...

bas yunhi saath rahiye gujarish hai...

Intezar !

Intezaar :: aapki ek khasiyat hai jo hame behad pasand hai.
sayd bahut kam shayro me hai wo baat--
aapki kalaamo ke har ashaar dusre ashaar ke saath bahut hi baarik tarike se connected hota hai.
yahi chij aapki kalaam ko jhakashhh banati hai--hum koi ek sher select hi nai kar paate--sab apas me mastam jude hokar khubsurat kalaam ban jaate hain.
aapka nagma as usual mast.
daad nhi deta aajkal mai Usual Smile
apko daad ki kya jarurat ji.
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thanx
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«Reply #11 on: March 01, 2011, 12:53:22 AM »
Rishi ji Shukriya dil se bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

Bahut Hi Khubsurat Likha Hai Intezar Ji Aapne
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«Reply #12 on: March 01, 2011, 01:54:58 AM »
marhoom bahayaat ji aapka dil se bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

umda kalaam intezar ji
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«Reply #13 on: March 01, 2011, 02:24:00 AM »
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Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: March 01, 2011, 07:59:14 PM »
Intezar aapki shayri mein wo dard hai jo har koi mehsus kar sakta hai..

aapki shayri ko sachhe dil se salam !!!!!
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