{ { ...nahin royee nahin hoon main.....} }

by -Kashish- on June 07, 2009, 11:14:29 AM
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Jaane kyun meri aankhon ka kaajal
ab phaelta jaa raha hai
rehta to pehle bhi tha in aankhon mein
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Jaante ho na mausam ke is rukh ko
khushk ho jaata hai sab kuch
mere bhi hoth hain sookhe
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Dekh kar andekha kar do yeh aanchal
zara paani se bheeg gaya hai
jaane do,bhool bhi jaao
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Kahan pareshaan hoon main
bas aise hi khamosh hoon main
dil mein koi baat bhi nahin
nahin,royee nahin hoon main...

Bahut tez tha hawa ka woh jhonka
le aaya tha kuch tinke saath mein
ek chubh gaya to surh hain aankhein
nahin , main royee nahin hoon... 


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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2009, 11:21:34 AM »
Wow... It is too good. Good work Kashish  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2009, 11:22:41 AM »
Wow... It is too good. Good work Kashish  Thumbs UP


bahut bahut shukriya Roja di
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2009, 11:25:46 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Bahaut achi peshkash hai yeh Kashish di...Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai apne...Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2009, 11:26:29 AM »
Bahot acha likha hai aapne Kashish ji hamesha ki tarah lajawaab,bahot khoob   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut shukriya Kaash ji
aapne waqt diya  aur pasand kiya
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2009, 11:27:32 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Bahaut achi peshkash hai yeh Kashish di...Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai apne...Applause

Bahut bahut shukriya Rahim Bhai
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2009, 11:47:14 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Roja di


Welcome dear  Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2009, 12:55:52 PM »
Jaane kyun meri aankhon ka kaajal
ab phaelta jaa raha hai
rehta to pehle bhi tha in aankhon mein
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Jaante ho na mausam ke is rukh ko
khushk ho jaata hai sab kuch
mere bhi hoth hain sookhe
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Dekh kar andekha kar do yeh aanchal
zara paani se bheeg gaya hai
jaane do,bhool bhi jaao
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Kahan pareshaan hoon main
bas aise hi khamosh hoon main
dil mein koi baat bhi nahin
nahin,royee nahin hoon main...

Bahut tez tha hawa ka woh jhonka
le aaya tha kuch tinke saath mein
ek chubh gaya to surh hain aankhein
nahin , main royee nahin hoon... 




Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah,.
Really Bohat Touching Likha Hai Kashish Ji, Aapne,.
Bohat Achche Yunhi LIkhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2009, 01:32:54 PM »
Jaane kyun meri aankhon ka kaajal
ab phaelta jaa raha hai
rehta to pehle bhi tha in aankhon mein
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Jaante ho na mausam ke is rukh ko
khushk ho jaata hai sab kuch
mere bhi hoth hain sookhe
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Dekh kar andekha kar do yeh aanchal
zara paani se bheeg gaya hai
jaane do,bhool bhi jaao
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Kahan pareshaan hoon main
bas aise hi khamosh hoon main
dil mein koi baat bhi nahin
nahin,royee nahin hoon main...

Bahut tez tha hawa ka woh jhonka
le aaya tha kuch tinke saath mein
ek chubh gaya to surh hain aankhein
nahin , main royee nahin hoon... 


Kashish ji!

Dard-e-baatinee ko dilkash tasweeraat-e-tasawwuraat key zariye bakhoobee halkey-phulkey paayedaar alfaaz mein bayaan kiyaa gayaa hai! 'Gadya-kaavya' kaa eik 'sundar' tukrhaa hai, aap kaa kalaam! 
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Dard jii leytey hain, pii leytey hain aansoo apney:
Taa ki wo pur-sukoon neend leyn, deykheyn sapney!
Raaz paaindah hai koyee, kaheen gahraayee mein;
Aur, chupchaap, ham rawaan hain, khushee sey khapney!!

              - abd bundeli


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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2009, 02:38:49 PM »
bahut Bahut Khoob Kashish!!!

Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2009, 05:47:29 PM »
Jaane kyun meri aankhon ka kaajal
ab phaelta jaa raha hai
rehta to pehle bhi tha in aankhon mein
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Jaante ho na mausam ke is rukh ko
khushk ho jaata hai sab kuch
mere bhi hoth hain sookhe
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Dekh kar andekha kar do yeh aanchal
zara paani se bheeg gaya hai
jaane do,bhool bhi jaao
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Kahan pareshaan hoon main
bas aise hi khamosh hoon main
dil mein koi baat bhi nahin
nahin,royee nahin hoon main...

Bahut tez tha hawa ka woh jhonka
le aaya tha kuch tinke saath mein
ek chubh gaya to surh hain aankhein
nahin , main royee nahin hoon... 





Aaye Haye.. Kashish Dear.. Kitna Dard Hai Is Rachna Me.. 3 baar Padhi hai Maine abhi aapki yeh Rachna.. Itni khubsoorati se Likhi hai aapne.. !!!

Taareef Me Kya Likhun dear.. lafz nahi mil rahe Hain..!! Bassss itna kahunga ki Dil ko chhoo gai aapki yeh Rachna.. Great Words & Great Work.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #11 on: June 07, 2009, 05:51:37 PM »
Jaane kyun meri aankhon ka kaajal
ab phaelta jaa raha hai
rehta to pehle bhi tha in aankhon mein
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Jaante ho na mausam ke is rukh ko
khushk ho jaata hai sab kuch
mere bhi hoth hain sookhe
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Dekh kar andekha kar do yeh aanchal
zara paani se bheeg gaya hai
jaane do,bhool bhi jaao
nahin, main royee nahin hoon...

Kahan pareshaan hoon main
bas aise hi khamosh hoon main
dil mein koi baat bhi nahin
nahin,royee nahin hoon main...

Bahut tez tha hawa ka woh jhonka
le aaya tha kuch tinke saath mein
ek chubh gaya to surh hain aankhein
nahin , main royee nahin hoon... 




Waah...Bohot Khoob dear.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2009, 06:51:24 AM »
bahut bahut khoob kashish ji
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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2009, 10:53:44 AM »
Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah,.
Really Bohat Touching Likha Hai Kashish Ji, Aapne,.
Bohat Achche Yunhi LIkhte Rahiye,.

shukriya Azeem
jo aapne waqt diya....
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«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2009, 10:57:10 AM »
Kashish ji!

Dard-e-baatinee ko dilkash tasweeraat-e-tasawwuraat key zariye bakhoobee halkey-phulkey paayedaar alfaaz mein bayaan kiyaa gayaa hai! 'Gadya-kaavya' kaa eik 'sundar' tukrhaa hai, aap kaa kalaam! 
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Dard jii leytey hain, pii leytey hain aansoo apney:
Taa ki wo pur-sukoon neend leyn, deykheyn sapney!
Raaz paaindah hai koyee, kaheen gahraayee mein;
Aur, chupchaap, ham rawaan hain, khushee sey khapney!!

              - abd bundeli





Bahut bahut shukriya Abd sahab jo aap is thread par aaye
aapne bhi kamaal likha hai....
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