....~~Pardes Mein~~....

by HumTum on April 26, 2005, 08:08:57 AM
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Pardes mein yaad jab teri ati he..
Dil rota he, ankh bhar ati he..
Kya gunah kiya tha hamne?
Pardes mein yaad jab teri ati he..

Kesi yeh ajeeb pareshani he..
Yaad bhi teri ek pareshani he..
Kabhi to sakoon milega dil ko
Kesi yeh ajeeb pareshani he..

Din lambe, Raaten bhi lambi hein..
Yaad mein hosh bhula bethe hein..
Talaash ki justujo kise nehi
Din lambe, Raaten bhi lambi hein..

Dil ke darwaze pe dastak ho rahi he..
Aaj pirr ek yaad sata rahi he..
Dil ki gehrayon me jhaank ke dekh..
Pardes me aaj phirr teri yaad aa rahi he
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2005, 10:02:02 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Pardes mein yaad jab teri ati he..
Dil rota he, ankh bhar ati he..
Kya gunah kiya tha hamne?
Pardes mein yaad jab teri ati he..

Kesi yeh ajeeb pareshani he..
Yaad bhi teri ek pareshani he..
Kabhi to sakoon milega dil ko
Kesi yeh ajeeb pareshani he..

Din lambe, Raaten bhi lambi hein..
Yaad mein hosh bhula bethe hein..
Talaash ki justujo kise nehi
Din lambe, Raaten bhi lambi hein..

Dil ke darwaze pe dastak ho rahi he..
Aaj pirr ek yaad sata rahi he..
Dil ki gehrayon me jhaank ke dekh..
Pardes me aaj phirr teri yaad aa rahi he


Wow Too good !!!!!!!!!!
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vitasta
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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2005, 10:12:10 AM »
kiski yaad sata rahi hai humtum???
waise bhahut hi accha likha hai,lovely.............
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HumTum
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2005, 04:54:17 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Quote from: "HumTum"
Pardes mein yaad jab teri ati he..
Dil rota he, ankh bhar ati he..
Kya gunah kiya tha hamne?
Pardes mein yaad jab teri ati he..

Kesi yeh ajeeb pareshani he..
Yaad bhi teri ek pareshani he..
Kabhi to sakoon milega dil ko
Kesi yeh ajeeb pareshani he..

Din lambe, Raaten bhi lambi hein..
Yaad mein hosh bhula bethe hein..
Talaash ki justujo kise nehi
Din lambe, Raaten bhi lambi hein..

Dil ke darwaze pe dastak ho rahi he..
Aaj pirr ek yaad sata rahi he..
Dil ki gehrayon me jhaank ke dekh..
Pardes me aaj phirr teri yaad aa rahi he


Wow Too good !!!!!!!!!!


Shukriya Talat ji ..

mitti mere kabra se chura raha hai koi,
mar kar bhi yaad aa raha hai koi,
ya rab ek paal ki zindagi aur dede,
udas meri kabr se ja raha hai koi
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HumTum
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«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2005, 04:55:40 PM »
Quote from: "vitasta"
kiski yaad sata rahi hai humtum???
waise bhahut hi accha likha hai,lovely.............

thank u ji !!!

Kisi ne Irshaad kaha to
Hamne aisehi khuch farma diya,
Varna kabil hum yu na the
Ke Bismil kahe aur Shayari Kare!
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vitasta
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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2005, 09:48:34 AM »
are wah aap to modesty bhi shayari ke saath dikhate hain!!! cool i like it!!!! keep it up!!!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2005, 10:04:55 AM »
Quote from: "vitasta"
are wah aap to modesty bhi shayari ke saath dikhate hain!!! cool i like it!!!! keep it up!!!!



 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2005, 03:47:11 PM »
"Dil ke darwaze pe dastak ho rahi he..
Aaj pirr ek yaad sata rahi he..
Dil ki gehrayon me jhaank ke dekh..
Pardes me aaj phirr teri yaad aa rahi he"


beautiful lines!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2005, 12:32:51 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
"Dil ke darwaze pe dastak ho rahi he..
Aaj pirr ek yaad sata rahi he..
Dil ki gehrayon me jhaank ke dekh..
Pardes me aaj phirr teri yaad aa rahi he"


beautiful lines!!!!!!!!!!

 :D



Thanx Meena  Puzzled !
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rohit30002
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«Reply #9 on: June 26, 2005, 01:15:39 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Pardes mein yaad jab teri ati he..
Dil rota he, ankh bhar ati he..
Kya gunah kiya tha hamne?
Pardes mein yaad jab teri ati he..

Kesi yeh ajeeb pareshani he..
Yaad bhi teri ek pareshani he..
Kabhi to sakoon milega dil ko
Kesi yeh ajeeb pareshani he..

Din lambe, Raaten bhi lambi hein..
Yaad mein hosh bhula bethe hein..
Talaash ki justujo kise nehi
Din lambe, Raaten bhi lambi hein..

Dil ke darwaze pe dastak ho rahi he..
Aaj pirr ek yaad sata rahi he..
Dil ki gehrayon me jhaank ke dekh..
Pardes me aaj phirr teri yaad aa rahi he


Bahut badiya humtum ji
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HumTum
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«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2005, 03:39:52 PM »
Aap ka bahut bahut Shukriya Rohit ji .................
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