::pyar shabd apni zindagi se mita dungi::

by nidhi_yadein on May 16, 2005, 06:15:20 AM
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«Reply #75 on: June 17, 2005, 05:32:48 PM »
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bahut khoob Nidhi sis ....

woh kaon hai jo tujhe gum ki parchayi de gaya hai
lane wala tha khushiyon ke badal
ab dukh mein lipti purwayi de gaya hai

dor aasmano mein gunjata tha naam jiska
woh sanaate se bhi bu`ttar.....tanhayi de gaya hai
wowowow nikki sis,kya baat hai,last two lines to bilkul dil ko choo gayin,very touching. Usual Smile and thanx for appreciating.

"Yun hi hoti hai kya dil ki duniye,koi bataye mujhe,
  jo sapne sajaaye,sab toote,kya kahoon main ise,
  pal pal muskuraai meri zindagi uski chahat me,
  aaj pal pal mar rahi hoon usi chahat ki tanhai me."
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«Reply #76 on: June 17, 2005, 07:57:25 PM »
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Quote from: "nikki"
bahut khoob Nidhi sis ....

woh kaon hai jo tujhe gum ki parchayi de gaya hai
lane wala tha khushiyon ke badal
ab dukh mein lipti purwayi de gaya hai

dor aasmano mein gunjata tha naam jiska
woh sanaate se bhi bu`ttar.....tanhayi de gaya hai
wowowow nikki sis,kya baat hai,last two lines to bilkul dil ko choo gayin,very touching. Usual Smile and thanx for appreciating.

"Yun hi hoti hai kya dil ki duniye,koi bataye mujhe,
  jo sapne sajaaye,sab toote,kya kahoon main ise,
  pal pal muskuraai meri zindagi uski chahat me,
  aaj pal pal mar rahi hoon usi chahat ki tanhai me."


wah  kya  baat hai....nidhi................nikki................ .nikki  4  lines  hi  likhti hai  lekin jabardast.....  bahot  khoob.......... dono  ka padhke  maza aa gaya.......

kahan aake rukne  the raaste  
kahan mod  tha  use  bhool ja
wah  jo  mil  gaya hai use yaad rakh
jo  nahi mila  use  bhool  ja....................
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«Reply #77 on: June 21, 2005, 05:48:55 PM »
Very nice all ...
Keep writing everybody ...


Dard milte hai ghum nahi milte,
Har kisiko alam nahi milte;

Jinse milkar bhi dil na milta ho,
Aise logo se hum nahi milte;

Jaane kis raah se gaye hai wo,
Unke nakshe kadam nahi milte;

Zidagaani to sabko milti hai,
Dil ke chahe janam nahi milte;

Maikado ke nagar mein main,
Dhoondta hoon haram nahi milte ...
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«Reply #78 on: June 21, 2005, 05:54:04 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Very nice all ...
Keep writing everybody ...


Dard milte hai ghum nahi milte,
Har kisiko alam nahi milte;

Jinse milkar bhi dil na milta ho,
Aise logo se hum nahi milte;

Jaane kis raah se gaye hai wo,
Unke nakshe kadam nahi milte;

Zidagaani to sabko milti hai,
Dil ke chahe janam nahi milte;

Maikado ke nagar mein main,
Dhoondta hoon haram nahi milte ...
wah,kya likha hai yaar,superbbb,ek ek alfaaz gazab ka hai.Nice waheed also and Thanx both of u.gr8 going Usual Smile

"Milte rehte hain jo wo dil me samaa jaate hain,
  milkar jo nahi milte wo bohat yaad aate hain."
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«Reply #79 on: June 21, 2005, 05:59:58 PM »
bohat acha likha aap sab ne.....................................
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«Reply #80 on: June 21, 2005, 06:01:54 PM »
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bohat acha likha aap sab ne.....................................
Thanx Jalpari Usual Smile
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«Reply #81 on: June 21, 2005, 06:02:46 PM »
shukriya Nidhi sis n Waheed .............

aap sabne bhi bahut hi acha likha hai...

jo shakhs hamse kabhi mila hi nahi
uske pyar ka hume pata bhi nahi

aaj jab pata chala hai
to na jaane woh duniya ki bheed mein kahan kho gaya hai

hamara pyar shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho gaya hai



khuda aisi saza dushman ko bhi na de
kissi ka dil dhadke jo kissi ke liye ..
to khuda unhe milwa de ..unki khushi ke liye
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«Reply #82 on: June 21, 2005, 06:04:02 PM »
Thanks a lot Nidhi and Jalpari for appreciating my post ...
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«Reply #83 on: June 21, 2005, 06:08:42 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
shukriya Nidhi sis n Waheed .............

aap sabne bhi bahut hi acha likha hai...

jo shakhs hamse kabhi mila hi nahi
uske pyar ka hume pata bhi nahi

aaj jab pata chala hai
to na jaane woh duniya ki bheed mein kahan kho gaya hai

hamara pyar shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho gaya hai



khuda aisi saza dushman ko bhi na de
kissi ka dil dhadke jo kissi ke liye ..
to khuda unhe milwa de ..unki khushi ke liye
wah nikki sis,kya baat keh di,lovely :D
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«Reply #84 on: June 21, 2005, 06:10:31 PM »
Bahut hi khoob likha hai Nikki dear ...
Well done ...
Keep writing ...
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«Reply #85 on: June 21, 2005, 06:12:00 PM »
Thanx sis .... Bahut acha laga jaankar ...hamara likha bhi kissi ko pasand aata hai......

aaj dil kuch udaas hai
na to koi tamana hai
na hi koi aas hai

ho bhi kyun na, jab koi apna hi na apne paas hai
jispe kiya tha bahrosa woh shatir nikla
pata chala hai ke wahi hamare dil ka qatil nikla
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«Reply #86 on: June 21, 2005, 06:13:58 PM »
Bohat khoob...Nidhi, JHL, Nikki & Waheed......
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«Reply #87 on: June 21, 2005, 06:15:21 PM »
Thanks a lot Aryan and too cool Nikki ...
Good going ...
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«Reply #88 on: June 21, 2005, 06:21:13 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
Thanx sis .... Bahut acha laga jaankar ...hamara likha bhi kissi ko pasan aata hai......

aaj dil kuch udaas hai
na to koi tamana hai
na hi koi aas hai

ho bhi kyun na, jab koi apna hi na apne paas hai
jispe kiya tha bahrosa woh shatir nikla
pata chala hai ke wahi hamare dil ka qatil nikla


wah again gr8,superbb,nikki sis,maza aa gaya aaj to Usual Smile

"Jise ham samajhte rahe sambhalega hame,
  wahi aaj apna qaatil nikla.....,
  jise sambhale rahe barson tak dil me,
  wo shaks pyar ke kaabil hi na nikla."
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«Reply #89 on: June 21, 2005, 06:21:37 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya aap sab ka...Nidhi,JHL n Aryaan.....................

hume zindagi ki khuaish nahi hai
maut bhi aaj aane se mukar gayi hai

zindagi ke din lambe ho gaye hain
aur hum apne kandhon par ek laash ka bojha dho rahe hain
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