~~~RANG~~~

by baadal102 on September 29, 2008, 04:42:46 PM
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baadal102
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Ek sirf tujhe apna maana tha hum ne,
KHUDA ki kasam KHUDA jaana tha hum ne,

Bhula baitha tha Baadal apna sab kuch,
Sirf aur sirf tujhe jaana tha hum ne,

Gum kya hote hai yeh bhi yaad na tha,
Apne ko sirf tari banho main paaya tha hum ne,

Tanha samajte the jo hum khud ko hamesha,
Naam tera lake apne pe garrur kiya tha hum ne,

Bhula ke ki pyar ki jindgi do din ki hai,
Apne ko tujh pe mitaya tha hum ne,

Yaad tujhe jarur hoga wo jamana ae kaatil,
Apne ko katel kar ke, tujhe sajaya tha hum ne,

Aaj jee raha hai tu jo shaan ki jindgi,
Us jindgi ko lal rang diya tha hum ne,

Baitha hai aaj jo tu gair ki banho main,
Mat bhool ke wo jindgi bhi di hai hum ne,

Yaad ker wo waada kayamat ke din ka,
Tum bhool gaye lakin nibhaya hai hum ne,

Hum bhatak rahe hai aaj bhi tare milan ko,
Tum ne jammi ko to falak ko apnaya hai hum ne,

Tum ne jammi ko to falak ko apnaya hai hum ne......





Baadal tearyeyed
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2008, 05:40:12 PM »
Wah bohat khoob likha hai baadal ji..
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sonalxoxo
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«Reply #2 on: September 29, 2008, 08:02:17 PM »
amazing!  icon_salut

itna sab kho diya uske liye tumne
phir bhi sochte ho kya galti ki mene
jo itni hi behrehem thi agar woh,
to tum kyon udaas ho, jo bhi khoya hai, khoya hai usne
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2008, 04:40:14 AM »
wah badal ji khoob likha hai aapne...
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baadal102
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2008, 05:19:54 AM »
sukriya aap sab ka
jo aap ne apna time
nikal ke hume padha.
thanx a lot,
honey ji
sonal ji
bekarar ji
thanx a lot




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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2008, 05:34:41 AM »
 Applause  Applause  Applause
BAHUT AACHA LIKHA HAI,
BAADAL JI...
BY. K.SHAEL
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2008, 10:32:33 AM »
baadal ji
bohut acha likha hai
kuch dino se yo par na kuch likha aur na kuch padha
par jab aaj waqt mila to sabse pehle aapki hi post par najar gayi
ham jaanna jarur chahenge baadal ji
itna dard kisliye?Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh?
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baadal102
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«Reply #7 on: September 30, 2008, 04:12:49 PM »
thanx a lot shael ji



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baadal102
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«Reply #8 on: September 30, 2008, 04:14:37 PM »
baadal ji
bohut acha likha hai
kuch dino se yo par na kuch likha aur na kuch padha
par jab aaj waqt mila to sabse pehle aapki hi post par najar gayi
ham jaanna jarur chahenge baadal ji
itna dard kisliye?Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh?

nahi bhawna ji aise kuch baat nahi hai
sirf ye lines hai aur kuch nahi

& thanx a lot to read my lines


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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: September 30, 2008, 04:18:23 PM »
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Baadal ji...  Applause  Applause
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baadal102
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«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2008, 08:31:53 AM »
thanx a lot roja dear




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