sab ki kismat men manzil nahi aati

by siddharth on March 30, 2005, 03:00:33 AM
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siddharth
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zindgi ko zene ki wajah nahi aati
khowab tote is-kadar aab nend nahi aati
jakhm hamara tum bhi mahsus karte magar
dil ke jakhmon se boo nahi aati
gairon ke apne ho chale is kadar
aab to apno ki yadon ki yaad nahi aati
manzil hum paa na sake to khair
sab ki kismat men manzil nahi aati
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2005, 05:13:43 AM »
nice one
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2005, 01:56:49 PM »
Achha likha hai Siddharth ...
Nice start ...
Hope to see more from you ...
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2005, 03:48:31 PM »
Quote from: "siddharth"
zindgi ko zene ki wajah nahi aati
khowab tote is-kadar aab nend nahi aati
jakhm hamara tum bhi mahsus karte magar
dil ke jakhmon se boo nahi aati
gairon ke apne ho chale is kadar
aab to apno ki yadon ki yaad nahi aati
manzil hum paa na sake to khair
sab ki kismat men manzil nahi aati


arre wahhhhhhhhh!! bohot acha likha apne!!! keep it up janab and welcome to yoindia!!!

 :D
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laparwah
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2005, 11:52:18 AM »
Good Sidd
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2005, 11:56:14 AM »
Ab to wo is raaste se guzarte bhi nahi hai,
Khafa kyu hai mujhse kuchh khata bhi nahi hai,
Pehle meri awaaz sunne ko the bechain,
Ab to wo meri koi baat sunte bhi nahi hai ...
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ali
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2005, 07:31:08 PM »
:arrow: Likhna to hamko kuch bhi aata nahi hai phir bhi
                  Unki nazar ne hamko fankaar kardiya hai

 sad5 Mai khatawaar hu to saza do mujh ko
          Kis lieyae khafa ho yeh bata do mujhko
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tanhadill
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2005, 01:56:53 PM »
:oops: unki yaadoo se ab dill bhra nahi karta hum roz yaad kare unkoo unhe koi fark nahi padata ae kudha mujhe itna bata ki kya mohbaat mai sajda ka asar nahi padata
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #8 on: April 06, 2005, 03:07:21 PM »
Unki bewafai par wafaa hum karenge,
Yaad ko unki dil se judaa hum karenge,
Itna chaha phir bhi yakeen nahin,
Aise zindagi jee kar kya karenge ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: September 29, 2005, 07:52:22 PM »
bahoot khoob siddharth and JHL !!!!

Mera ek bahoot hi Fav. shair likh rahi hu, magar mera likha hua nahi hai!!!

ek hi kadam, tamam umar mai, chala main galat
ek hi kadam, tamam umar mai, chala main galat
tamam zindagi main, manjil talaashta raha!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #10 on: October 08, 2005, 02:41:24 PM »
Thanks a lot Pooja for apprecaition ...
And it was a nice one ...


Dil de to is mijaaj ka parwardigaar de,
Jo rang ki ghadi bhi khushi se guzaar de ...
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ali
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2005, 09:12:05 PM »
Dil de to is mijaaj ka parwardigaar de,
Jo rang ki ghadi bhi khushi se guzaar de ...

wah kya baat kahi hai
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #12 on: October 23, 2005, 06:20:40 AM »
wow kya khoob likha hai Siddharth..........good job..........well done......

nice work JHL
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #13 on: November 18, 2005, 10:38:35 AM »
Thanks a lot Isha for appreciation ...


When we were kids,
We couldn't wait to grow up and fall in love,
Now that we are grown we realize that,
Wounded knees were easier to heal than broken Heart ...
            ... Note It ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: November 18, 2005, 03:17:09 PM »
Very True JHL JI!!!

Both of your posts are beautiful.

Bachpan ki chote, hume pahar laga karati thi
Ab jab dil toota, to yah khayal ayya
wo dard to diya khuda ne sirf niv bharne ko
asali dard ka mahal to ab hai us per banwaya!!!

Niv = jo ghar banane se pahle jameen ke nichy rakhi jaati hai!!!
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