|
Aryaan
Guest
|
Seh chuka hoon main apne muQaddar ke dukh
Zindagi se kaho mujhe azaad ab kare
Dikhta nahi jinhein apne siwa kuch
Unn be-hison se kyun faryaad ab kare
Zulmatein itni dhaain keh ginn nahi sakta
Zakhm miley kahan kahan kyun yaad ab kare
Jab haQ maanga bhi dehshat gardi ban jaye
Tau kis tarha yahan koi jehad ab kare
Maayus ho chuka hoon apni tamannaon se ab
Jo chahe mera faisla saiyaad ab kare
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
|
Meena
Guest
|
 |
«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2005, 06:12:04 PM » |
|
"Seh chuka hoon main apne muQaddar ke dukh
Zindagi se kaho mujhe azaad ab kare "
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Aryaan
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2005, 03:14:48 AM » |
|
"Seh chuka hoon main apne muQaddar ke dukh
Zindagi se kaho mujhe azaad ab kare "
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D Bohat shukriya Meena..... |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
fakharenaveed
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2005, 03:34:48 AM » |
|
phoolon se bhi kya dosti karna
kuch pal baad murjha jaate hain
dosti karo to kaanton se
chubhne ke baad bhi yaad aate hain
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Aryaan
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2005, 03:36:24 AM » |
|
phoolon se bhi kya dosti karna
kuch pal baad murjha jaate hain
dosti karo to kaanton se
chubhne ke baad bhi yaad aate hain Wah Naveed Bohat khoob... |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
fakharenaveed
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2005, 03:46:56 AM » |
|
phoolon se bhi kya dosti karna
kuch pal baad murjha jaate hain
dosti karo to kaanton se
chubhne ke baad bhi yaad aate hain Wah Naveed Bohat khoob... Thanx Aryaan............................. |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
isha_verma7
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #6 on: May 26, 2005, 05:39:04 AM » |
|
wow aryaan these lines just WONDERFUL"Seh chuka hoon main apne muQaddar ke dukh
Zindagi se kaho mujhe azaad ab kare"
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
isha_verma7
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #7 on: May 26, 2005, 05:42:59 AM » |
|
phoolon se bhi kya dosti karna
kuch pal baad murjha jaate hain
dosti karo to kaanton se
chubhne ke baad bhi yaad aate hain Wah Naveed kya baat........ek dam sahi kahaa.......i agree w/ every single line |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
fakharenaveed
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #8 on: May 26, 2005, 10:16:30 PM » |
|
phoolon se bhi kya dosti karna
kuch pal baad murjha jaate hain
dosti karo to kaanton se
chubhne ke baad bhi yaad aate hain Wah Naveed kya baat........ek dam sahi kahaa.......i agree w/ every single line Thanx isha sweety....................................... |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
jalpari
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2005, 04:08:57 AM » |
|
Seh chuka hoon main apne muQaddar ke dukh
Zindagi se kaho mujhe azaad ab kare
Dikhta nahi jinhein apne siwa kuch
Unn be-hison se kyun faryaad ab kare
Zulmatein itni dhaain keh ginn nahi sakta
Zakhm miley kahan kahan kyun yaad ab kare
Jab haQ maanga bhi dehshat gardi ban jaye
Tau kis tarha yahan koi jehad ab kare
Maayus ho chuka hoon apni tamannaon se ab
Jo chahe mera faisla saiyaad ab kare Ones again Aryaan..Bohat ache... |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Aryaan
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2005, 12:47:40 PM » |
|
Bohat shukriya Jalpari................................
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
fakharenaveed
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #11 on: May 27, 2005, 09:57:25 PM » |
|
Unko bhar ka bahon mein,
Dil se dil ko chu kar pyar se,
Kareeb iss kadar aaunga main,
Lab chu lunga lab se apne yaar ke.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Meena
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2005, 08:54:20 AM » |
|
Bohat shukriya Jalpari................................ :wink: |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
sandhaya
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2005, 08:58:08 AM » |
|
kya baat hai ........Aryaan ji
and nice work by all...............
hasrate dil ki dil main hi reh gai hai sayad
ki aabh tuh koi ehsaash nahi hota hai mujhe
dard itna mila hai mujhe mere apno se
ki abh tuh dusmaan bhi lagte hai apno ki tarah mujhe
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Aryaan
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #14 on: May 28, 2005, 05:53:56 PM » |
|
Bohat shukriya Jalpari................................ :wink: :D |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
on eTI community..
