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Zindagi se koi shikwa to nahi...
paas hai hamare par saath wo nahi....
doob jayenge in andhero me
dhundhega hume shayad koi nahi....
sabke saath me bhi hai kitne tanha
jante hai wo par mante wo nahi....
gila to karna chahte hai hum...
par wo to chale gaye hai kahi.....
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«Reply #1 on: November 22, 2010, 08:21:57 AM » |
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bahut khoob priya ji:)
dil e beqaraar ka khubsurat bayaan..
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dil me basaane ko tujhe bas ek pal hi kaafi tha,
bhoolna chaha tujhe to saari umar bhi Na-Kaafi nikli!!!!
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Priya ji...bahut umda peshkas aapki..daad kubool kijiye
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«Reply #2 on: November 22, 2010, 01:40:25 PM » |
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Priya jee,
Bahaut khoob..
Likte rahiyega.!
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«Reply #3 on: November 22, 2010, 01:50:19 PM » |
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Bahut Ache Priya Ji..
Bahut Khoob!!! 
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«Reply #4 on: November 23, 2010, 09:04:44 AM » |
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dil hi to tha behak gaya aakir... gam-e-furkat ka ab iljam kis ko du...... kalam pasand karne ka shukria subash ji.... bahut khoob priya ji:)
dil e beqaraar ka khubsurat bayaan..
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dil me basaane ko tujhe bas ek pal hi kaafi tha,
bhoolna chaha tujhe to saari umar bhi Na-Kaafi nikli!!!!
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Priya ji...bahut umda peshkas aapki..daad kubool kijiye
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«Reply #5 on: November 23, 2010, 09:06:01 AM » |
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thanx rahim ji.... aap hausla badhate rahiye... hum likhte rahenge.... Priya jee,
Bahaut khoob..
Likte rahiyega.!
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«Reply #6 on: November 23, 2010, 09:07:18 AM » |
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«Reply #7 on: November 23, 2010, 09:36:47 AM » |
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«Reply #8 on: November 23, 2010, 09:38:07 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: November 23, 2010, 09:52:46 AM » |
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sikwa ...
ek sundar rachna hai Mazil ji
koi choti kosis nhi ye.
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«Reply #10 on: November 23, 2010, 10:05:39 AM » |
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apna apna nazariya hai subash ji.... aapko meri rachna pasand aayi... iske liye main aapki shukrguzar hu... or waise bhi koshishe hi to kamyab hoti hai... hum honge kamyab ek din..... lol... sikwa ...
ek sundar rachna hai Mazil ji
koi choti kosis nhi ye.
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«Reply #11 on: November 23, 2010, 10:21:59 AM » |
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jaroor hohne kaamyaab ek din..
itna kamyaab hoiye ki kamyabi bhi sharma jaye aapse...
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hum honge kaamyab ek din..!!
ab iss ek din ko nikal dijiye or yaad rakhiye HUM HONGE KAMYAAB bas Kaamyabi ko yaad rakhna h:)
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«Reply #12 on: November 23, 2010, 11:09:39 AM » |
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bahut khoob priya ji....
dher saari daad hazir he...
likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #13 on: November 23, 2010, 05:10:36 PM » |
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kahan hai Daad hazir Abhi ji..mujhe nai dikh rha Jaldi dikhaiye Daad...
mujhe b dekhna hai
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«Reply #14 on: November 25, 2010, 06:08:18 AM » |
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shukria abhi ji..... bahut khoob priya ji....
dher saari daad hazir he...
likhte rahiye~
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