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tadpte rahe marte rahe
tere pyaar main khud ko jalate rahe
teri doli ke sajte hi
hum apni arthi sajate rahe
tere pyaar ko muqammal kerte rahe
apne pyaar ko parwaan chadate rahe
jub pata chala tujhe meri ruuh ka
ruuh se ruuh meelate rahe
" pyaar ka anjaam yahi hota hai
apni koshishon ko dabana
khud hi saja hota hai "
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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«Reply #2 on: September 07, 2010, 01:37:46 PM » |
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai Radhika ji...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2010, 06:00:19 PM » |
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tadpte rahe marte rahe
tere pyaar main khud ko jalate rahe
teri doli ke sajte hi
hum apni arthi sajate rahe
tere pyaar ko muqammal kerte rahe
apne pyaar ko parwaan chadate rahe
jub pata chala tujhe meri ruuh ka
ruuh se ruuh meelate rahe
" pyaar ka anjaam yahi hota hai
apni koshishon ko dabana
khud hi saja hota hai "
Very Impressive ...... Radhika Ji ! Very Touching ... bahut khoob ! dil se daad ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen... duaaon ke saath.... |
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«Reply #4 on: September 07, 2010, 10:51:13 PM » |
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Radika Jee Aadab!
Aapki rachna ke ahsaas to behad khoob lage hume daad....
par aapse haq se kahte hai ke aapne jitna progress kiya hi sb bhool gayi aap is kalaam meiN aisa hume lagta hia .....
Hum yeh sab isliye kah rahe hai ke aap hume janti nahi hai per humne aapko bahut padha hai aap kafi kuch achcha likha hai.. Jis per humne dil se daad bhi dii hai ..... aapki is creation ko dekhkar hum yeh nahi kaheNge ke aise hi likhate rahiye...
Aap jaise achcha achcha likha rahi hai waisa likhiye....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda hafez......
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«Reply #5 on: September 08, 2010, 03:26:01 AM » |
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Nice one Radhika jee..!
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«Reply #6 on: September 09, 2010, 05:19:23 AM » |
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Radika Jee Aadab!
Aapki rachna ke ahsaas to behad khoob lage hume daad....
par aapse haq se kahte hai ke aapne jitna progress kiya hi sb bhool gayi aap is kalaam meiN aisa hume lagta hia .....
Hum yeh sab isliye kah rahe hai ke aap hume janti nahi hai per humne aapko bahut padha hai aap kafi kuch achcha likha hai.. Jis per humne dil se daad bhi dii hai ..... aapki is creation ko dekhkar hum yeh nahi kaheNge ke aise hi likhate rahiye...
Aap jaise achcha achcha likha rahi hai waisa likhiye....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda hafez......
Sameer Ahemad
ji eshsaason ko pasand karne ke liye shukriya....ji aapki information ke liye.......ek to ye mari purani peshkash hai, aur ek bade reply ke liye shukriya........aapne mujhe pada to plz ouro ko bhi padne de........ |
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2010, 08:18:28 AM » |
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2010, 08:38:10 AM » |
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bahot khub ji ..radhika ji..
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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2010, 08:46:02 AM » |
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badhiya likha ji likhte rahiye ..apne shabdo me~
rahiyo sada sambhal ke ye kahe Abhi kaviray
bada jatil sansaar ishq ke mare ko koi na bachavanhaar~
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«Reply #10 on: September 21, 2010, 05:21:31 AM » |
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«Reply #11 on: September 29, 2010, 09:10:47 AM » |
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Very Impressive ...... Radhika Ji ! Very Touching ... bahut khoob ! dil se daad ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath....
ji bhaut bhaut shukriya............. |
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«Reply #13 on: October 05, 2010, 05:01:33 AM » |
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Nice one Radhika jee..!
ji thanks for apprecicate................ |
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«Reply #14 on: October 26, 2010, 05:26:00 AM » |
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bahot khub ji ..radhika ji..
ji shukriya.................... |
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