tadpte rahe marte rahe..! (Radhika)

by Radhika_2 on September 07, 2010, 09:23:50 AM
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tadpte rahe marte rahe
tere pyaar main khud ko jalate rahe

teri doli ke sajte hi
hum apni arthi sajate rahe

tere pyaar ko muqammal kerte rahe
apne pyaar ko parwaan chadate rahe

jub pata chala tujhe meri ruuh ka
ruuh se ruuh meelate rahe


" pyaar ka anjaam yahi hota hai
apni koshishon ko dabana
khud hi saja hota hai "

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«Reply #1 on: September 07, 2010, 09:40:03 AM »
wah radhika ji kya kehana....
bahot dard he is me....aese hi likhte rahiyega....



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«Reply #2 on: September 07, 2010, 01:37:46 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai Radhika ji...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2010, 06:00:19 PM »
tadpte rahe marte rahe
tere pyaar main khud ko jalate rahe

teri doli ke sajte hi
hum apni arthi sajate rahe

tere pyaar ko muqammal kerte rahe
apne pyaar ko parwaan chadate rahe

jub pata chala tujhe meri ruuh ka
ruuh se ruuh meelate rahe


" pyaar ka anjaam yahi hota hai
apni koshishon ko dabana
khud hi saja hota hai "



Very Impressive ...... Radhika Ji ! Very Touching ... bahut khoob ! dil se daad ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #4 on: September 07, 2010, 10:51:13 PM »

Radika Jee Aadab!

Aapki rachna ke ahsaas to behad khoob lage hume daad....
par aapse haq se kahte hai ke aapne jitna progress kiya hi sb bhool gayi aap is kalaam meiN aisa hume lagta hia .....

Hum yeh sab isliye kah rahe hai ke aap hume janti nahi hai per humne aapko bahut padha hai aap kafi kuch achcha likha hai.. Jis per humne dil se daad bhi dii hai ..... aapki is creation ko dekhkar hum yeh nahi kaheNge ke aise hi likhate rahiye...

Aap jaise achcha achcha likha rahi hai waisa likhiye....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda hafez......

Sameer Ahemad

    

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«Reply #5 on: September 08, 2010, 03:26:01 AM »
Nice one Radhika jee..!
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Radhika_2
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«Reply #6 on: September 09, 2010, 05:19:23 AM »

Radika Jee Aadab!

Aapki rachna ke ahsaas to behad khoob lage hume daad....
par aapse haq se kahte hai ke aapne jitna progress kiya hi sb bhool gayi aap is kalaam meiN aisa hume lagta hia .....

Hum yeh sab isliye kah rahe hai ke aap hume janti nahi hai per humne aapko bahut padha hai aap kafi kuch achcha likha hai.. Jis per humne dil se daad bhi dii hai ..... aapki is creation ko dekhkar hum yeh nahi kaheNge ke aise hi likhate rahiye...

Aap jaise achcha achcha likha rahi hai waisa likhiye....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda hafez......

Sameer Ahemad

     



ji eshsaason ko pasand karne ke liye shukriya....ji aapki information ke liye.......ek to ye mari purani peshkash hai, aur ek bade reply ke liye shukriya........aapne mujhe pada to plz ouro ko bhi padne de........

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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2010, 08:18:28 AM »
wah radhika ji kya kehana....
bahot dard he is me....aese hi likhte rahiyega....



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ji bhaut bhaut shukriya
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AMAR SINGH143
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2010, 08:38:10 AM »
bahot khub ji ..radhika ji..
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2010, 08:46:02 AM »
badhiya likha ji likhte rahiye ..apne shabdo me~

rahiyo sada sambhal ke ye kahe Abhi kaviray
bada jatil sansaar ishq ke mare ko koi na bachavanhaar~
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«Reply #10 on: September 21, 2010, 05:21:31 AM »
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai Radhika ji...!!!


ji bhaut bhaut shukriya....
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«Reply #11 on: September 29, 2010, 09:10:47 AM »
Very Impressive ...... Radhika Ji ! Very Touching ... bahut khoob ! dil se daad ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....

ji bhaut bhaut shukriya.............
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«Reply #12 on: September 30, 2010, 05:25:45 AM »
Wah Radhika ji.. Kamaal Ke Alfaaz Likhe Hain aapne.. Aaj Pahali baar aapko Padha.. aur padh kar Bahut Accha laga.. Tadap Ko, Judaai ko Aapne Behad Khubsoorati ke Sath Lafzon Me Utaara hai.. Applause Applause


Dil se Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #13 on: October 05, 2010, 05:01:33 AM »
Nice one Radhika jee..!

ji thanks for apprecicate................
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«Reply #14 on: October 26, 2010, 05:26:00 AM »
bahot khub ji ..radhika ji..

ji shukriya....................
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