~*~ Dard pate rahe..Muskurate rahe ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on March 25, 2011, 11:00:07 AM
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Zindagi ki inn sunsan raahon par,
Dard pate rahe; muskurate rahe..

Aj nahin hai mager kal hoga tere pas,
Yehi keh khud ka hausla badate rahe..

Paida hue ek average se parivar main hum,
Bachpan se apni khawaishon ko sulaate rahe..

Alag alag tarikon se ghumon ne gale lagaya,
Bas ghum pate rahe, nazmon main sunaate rahe..

Zakhmon ne kaha ab tehr bhi jao ‘Khamosh’,
Sansein chalti rahi so khud ko chalate rahe..

Who dhooriyan badata gaya mujse aur,
Hum dil se uske nishaan mitate rahe..

Ghum mile hai zindagi main toh shikva kaisa ‘Khamosh’,
Yehi toh zindagi jeene kay tarike seekhate rahe..

Zindagi ki inn sunsan raahon par,
Dard pate rahe, muskurate rahe..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2011, 12:14:30 PM »
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Good One ... Rahim Ji !

Very Touching ... Good Expression ... !
Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... ! Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2011, 12:44:32 PM »
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bht bht khoob rahim...
sply 6th one...
superb..
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2011, 12:50:29 PM »
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Zindagi ki inn sunsan raahon par,
Dard pate rahe; muskurate rahe..

Aj nahin hai mager kal hoga tere pas,
Yehi keh khud ka hausla badate rahe..

Paida hue ek average se parivar main hum,
Bachpan se apni khawaishon ko sulaate rahe..

Alag alag tarikon se ghumon ne gale lagaya,
Bas ghum pate rahe, nazmon main sunaate rahe..

Zakhmon ne kaha ab tehr bhi jao ‘Khamosh’,
Sansein chalti rahi so khud ko chalate rahe..

Who dhooriyan badata gaya mujse aur,
Hum dil se uske nishaan mitate rahe..

Ghum mile hai zindagi main toh shikva kaisa ‘Khamosh’,
Yehi toh zindagi jeene kay tarike seekhate rahe..

Zindagi ki inn sunsan raahon par,
Dard pate rahe, muskurate rahe..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya Kehne Bhai Rahim...Lajawaab

Mujhe Har ek sher bahut Khoob Aur Dil Ko Chuta Hua Laga..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2011, 01:09:47 PM »
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dost…bahut wait karwaya aapne apni peskash k lie.
aur aapki ye peskas ki kya bat kare nirala..suruat ke
50 % alfaazo me meri zindgi ki sachai likh daali aapne. mai ab khamosh hu ye sochkar ki aap bs kamaal ho.
aapki sachai likhne ki ada ka me dewaana hu ji.
agli baar jaldi post karna aap.
real truth par daad dene ki aukaat nahi meri. so simply hats off dear
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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2011, 01:17:22 PM »
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What to say about it.. Its Fantastic... Filled with lots of emotions and very very Well expressed...

Mindblowing Creation Bro !
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2011, 04:06:11 PM »
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Bahut khubsurat nagma rahiim bahut khoob..
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«Reply #7 on: March 25, 2011, 04:21:05 PM »
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[size=10bahut bahut khoob ,excellent Rahim ji ,maza aagaya.
koi khas line nahin puri ki puri hi bahut achhi hai,
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:pt][/size]
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2011, 12:49:13 PM »
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Good One ... Rahim Ji !

Very Touching ... Good Expression ... !
Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... ! Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !

Apka teh teh dil se shukriya Naresh bhai..
Khush rahiye..!

Bahut Khub Rahim Bhai...

ALLAH Pak Aapko Shad o AabadRakhe Aameen.

~Shihab~
Teh teh dil se shukriya Shihab bhaijan..
Khush rahiye.!

[size=10bahut bahut khoob ,excellent Rahim ji ,maza aagaya.
koi khas line nahin puri ki puri hi bahut achhi hai,
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:pt][/size]

Teh teh dil se shukriya Suresh bhai..
Khush rahiye..!

Bahut khubsurat nagma rahiim bahut khoob..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Geet di..
Khush rahiye..!

What to say about it.. Its Fantastic... Filled with lots of emotions and very very Well expressed...

Mindblowing Creation Bro !
Divya di, Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Aur apka likha bhi parrna hai mujhe..
Zaroor likhiyega..
Khush rahiye..!

bht bht khoob rahim...
sply 6th one...
superb..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Priya di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: March 26, 2011, 12:51:21 PM »
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dost…bahut wait karwaya aapne apni peskash k lie.
aur aapki ye peskas ki kya bat kare nirala..suruat ke
50 % alfaazo me meri zindgi ki sachai likh daali aapne. mai ab khamosh hu ye sochkar ki aap bs kamaal ho.
aapki sachai likhne ki ada ka me dewaana hu ji.
agli baar jaldi post karna aap.
real truth par daad dene ki aukaat nahi meri. so simply hats off dear
Nirala dost,
bahaut dinn baad dil ne kuch kaha so
likh diya..
Apne har baar ki tarha saath diya, apka teh teh dil
se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!


Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya Kehne Bhai Rahim...Lajawaab

Mujhe Har ek sher bahut Khoob Aur Dil Ko Chuta Hua Laga..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Bahaut bahaut shukriya Khwaish dost..
Yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2011, 05:28:38 PM »
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bahut khub --
ye post bht acha laga ji.
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dead heart
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2011, 04:53:38 AM »
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bahut khub --
ye post bht acha laga ji.

Shukriya Sf jee..
Mere pasandeeda posts main se hai yeh post..!
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: August 08, 2011, 10:07:14 AM »
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Zindagi ki inn sunsan raahon par,
Dard pate rahe; muskurate rahe..

Aj nahin hai mager kal hoga tere pas,
Yehi keh khud ka hausla badate rahe..

Paida hue ek average se parivar main hum,
Bachpan se apni khawaishon ko sulaate rahe..

Alag alag tarikon se ghumon ne gale lagaya,
Bas ghum pate rahe, nazmon main sunaate rahe..

Zakhmon ne kaha ab tehr bhi jao ‘Khamosh’,
Sansein chalti rahi so khud ko chalate rahe..

Who dhooriyan badata gaya mujse aur,
Hum dil se uske nishaan mitate rahe..

Ghum mile hai zindagi main toh shikva kaisa ‘Khamosh’,
Yehi toh zindagi jeene kay tarike seekhate rahe..

Zindagi ki inn sunsan raahon par,
Dard pate rahe, muskurate rahe..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

bahut achchche very very nice
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2011, 11:56:07 AM »
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bahut achchche very very nice
Applause Applause Applause Applause
Teh dil se shukriya Adil jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: August 14, 2011, 10:31:14 AM »
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Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
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