Tanhaaiyon ka karb....!!!

by Talat on February 23, 2008, 09:54:12 PM
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Yaadain teri aaj phir aayi hain baar baar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

Chaandni raaton main hum tum mila karte the
Yunhi pehron baithkar baatain kiya karte the
Yaadon ka karb kar gaya aankhain ashkbaar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

Bulaayen kis tarah tumko, kahan tum kho gaye
Jism tadapta hai yahan, rooh saath le gaye
Tees uthti hai, aur utar jaati hai dil ke paar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

Ishq ko samjha ibaadat, kya yeh uski saza hai
Zindagi bhi to nahin, phir kya yeh qaza hai
Dil bekas aarzuon ka hai jeeta jaagta mazaar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

Yaadain teri aaj phir aayi hain baar baar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

Qaza = Maut
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2008, 03:03:40 AM »
Superb ....
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Ishq ko samjha ibaadat, kya yeh uski saza hai
Zindagi bhi to nahin, phir kya yeh qaza hai
Dil bekas aarzuon ka hai jeeta jaagta mazaar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

Yaadain teri aaj phir aayi hain baar baar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

Really very good to read and it is very touchy too.
Keep writing.
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2008, 03:47:40 AM »
Quote from: Talat on February 23, 2008, 09:54:12 PM


Ishq ko samjha ibaadat, kya yeh uski saza hai
Zindagi bhi to nahin, phir kya yeh qaza hai
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BAHUT KHOOB TALAT...BAHUT HI KHOOBSURTI SE LIKHA HAI AAPNE...AUR YEH LINE TO BAHUT HI ACHI THI...
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2008, 04:08:56 AM »
bahut khoob talatji
aapne be-inteha khoobsurati se apne dard ko shayari mein
bayan kar diya...
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2008, 02:51:59 PM »
Roja, Khwaish, Diya and Majid...aapka bohot bohot shukriya doston ki aapko meri ye poem pasand aayi Usual Smile
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2008, 02:54:42 PM »
wah wah bahoot khoob Talat... yah lines to kamal ki likhi hai

Bulaayen kis tarah tumko, kahan tum kho gaye
Jism tadapta hai yahan, rooh saath le gaye
Tees uthti hai, aur utar jaati hai dil ke paar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2008, 03:16:40 PM »
Thank You so much Pooja Usual Smile
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Shikha12
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«Reply #7 on: February 27, 2008, 12:37:19 PM »
Wow... That's really lovely..

Very Nice Work Talat...
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: February 27, 2008, 01:56:20 PM »
Thank You Shikha Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: February 27, 2008, 03:55:49 PM »
Jo kabhi mila nahi, kyun uski yaad atti hai
Kis liye dil dubta hai, yah jaan nikal si jaati hai
Mila nahi phir bhi salo ka rishta lagta hai
Na ayye ek bhi din, din soona soona sa lagta hai
Tanhaai hai kaya meri, jo mujhko yah dikhati hai
Ya dil mai hai dard jo her ek dard dekh ruk jaati hai.....
Apne hi sawalo jawabo mai din bit.ta jaata hai
Tanha thi yah zindagi, tanha hi dil jala jaata hai
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: February 27, 2008, 06:51:47 PM »
Bohot khoob Pooja...

Tahaaiyon ka karb sehne ki kuch is tarah aadat hui
Akelapan achcha laga, dekh logon ko, wahshat hui

Dard-o-ghum se jaise jaise hum wabasta hone lage
Rafta rafta har khushi ghar se mere rukhsat hui !
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: February 27, 2008, 08:20:48 PM »
bahoot khoob Talat!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: February 27, 2008, 09:01:59 PM »
Shukriya Pooja
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Bharat
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«Reply #13 on: February 28, 2008, 04:01:30 AM »
Hi Talat,
Bohot hi achcha likha hai !!!

Pooja,
Very nicely written !!!

Talat,
I have started with 2 lines of yours.


yaadain teri aaj phir aayi hain baar baar
pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar

har manzar pe, har mod pe ek ummeed hai
shayad tum kahin mil jaao muze ek baar

yeh sunapan, yeh tanhaai aur rishto ki deeware
hum hai deewar ke is paar aur tum ho us paar

kyun ho muze gile-shikwe, sab kho jane ka
teri chahat ka ehsaas, dil mein hai barkaraar

kuch jawaab tumne diye, kuch zindagi ne
ab hum kismat se kya kare koi istefsaar?

istefsaar - question
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zakhmola
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«Reply #14 on: February 28, 2008, 07:10:21 AM »
Accha hua mil gaya
Tamhaiyon ka saath
Ek muddat ho gayi thi mujhey
Khud sey miley huye...
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