- Tanhai -

by Meena on June 15, 2005, 09:25:23 PM
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romeo_must_die
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«Reply #30 on: June 16, 2005, 02:28:26 PM »
Main nay to samjha laut aatey hain janeywaley;
tu nay to ja kar judaii meri kismat kardi;
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Meena
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«Reply #31 on: June 16, 2005, 02:33:08 PM »
gud romeo ji

majbooriyon ne badha diye fasle darmiyan,
warna hume bih tamana thi unke bahon me marne ki!
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romeo_must_die
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«Reply #32 on: June 16, 2005, 02:35:56 PM »
thnx meena ji!!

agar wo chaand tha to khushiyon ki sogaat baanta ;
ye kirchian kyun merey daaman main bikhair gaya woh;
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romeo_must_die
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«Reply #33 on: June 16, 2005, 02:39:42 PM »
giri bijli nasheman par to sab gum khaney aa pohunchey;
magar in doston main buhut begaaney aa pohunchey;
nahin do rangi duniya main pehchan apno ki ;
kisi nay ashq pohunchay to koi tarpaaney aa pohunchey.
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Meena
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«Reply #34 on: June 16, 2005, 02:40:22 PM »
hmm

khaliyan di unke haaton me humne,
unone samjha humne dillagi hai ki,
kalyehi to bahar banenge unke liye,
humne to sirf unki bhalayi hai ki!
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romeo_must_die
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«Reply #35 on: June 16, 2005, 02:43:39 PM »
gud meena jii !


huzaaron parwaney mar gaye is raaz ko janney k liye ;
k shamma jalti hay jalney k liye ya jalaney k liye;
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lover_choice143
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«Reply #36 on: June 16, 2005, 03:32:23 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
kuch jazbaat phir se pesh karti hoon...

Aaj phir se hume tanhai ka guman hua,
Ashkon ka samundar ankhon pe meherban hua,

Dil me jo dard tha, behe gaya kuch palon ke liye,
Shant hui dil ki hulchul, yeh dil bhi ansowon ka kadardan hua,

Beete hue pal kyu aaj(today) me basna chaha rahe hai,
Yeh aaj aur kal ki kashmakash me yeh dil bhi jung ka maidan hua!

 Sar  jukaogay to, pathar devta ho jayega,
Itna mat chaho usay, woh be-wafa ho jayega  
Hum bhi dariya hain hamein, apna hunar maaloom hain,
Jis taraf bhi chal padangay, raasta ho jayega

Main khuda ka naam lay kar, pee raha hoon doston,
Zahar bhi ismay agar, hoga dava ho jayega

Rooth jana to mohabbat kee, alamat hai magar,
Kya khabar thi mujh say woh, itna khafa ho jayega

Sar jukaogay to pathar devta ho jayega,
Itna mat chaho usay woh be-wafa ho jayega
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Meena
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«Reply #37 on: June 16, 2005, 04:13:11 PM »
wah lover ji!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bohot acha likha apne!!!! and welcome to yoindia!
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nikki
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«Reply #38 on: June 17, 2005, 02:30:06 AM »
bahut khoob Romeo, Meena sis n Lover ji...........................
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Meena
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«Reply #39 on: June 17, 2005, 02:51:49 PM »
thank u nikki............................................ ..
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #40 on: June 17, 2005, 03:02:16 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
gud romeo ji

majbooriyon ne badha diye fasle darmiyan,
warna hume bih tamana thi unke bahon me marne ki!


wow  excellent  work  all................... good  going......

ab  jiska  dil  chahe  woh meri  bahon  mein aaye
maine to sare  aam  apna  dil  nikal  kar rakh diya hai......
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Meena
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«Reply #41 on: June 23, 2005, 08:30:52 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "Meena"
gud romeo ji

majbooriyon ne badha diye fasle darmiyan,
warna hume bih tamana thi unke bahon me marne ki!


wow  excellent  work  all................... good  going......

ab  jiska  dil  chahe  woh meri  bahon  mein aaye
maine to sare  aam  apna  dil  nikal  kar rakh diya hai......


hmm gud waheed!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #42 on: June 23, 2005, 08:56:44 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "Meena"
gud romeo ji

majbooriyon ne badha diye fasle darmiyan,
warna hume bih tamana thi unke bahon me marne ki!


wow  excellent  work  all................... good  going......

ab  jiska  dil  chahe  woh meri  bahon  mein aaye
maine to sare  aam  apna  dil  nikal  kar rakh diya hai......


hmm gud waheed!!


thanku  thanku  meena............................tongue3
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Bharat
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«Reply #43 on: June 25, 2005, 08:26:53 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
kuch jazbaat phir se pesh karti hoon...

Aaj phir se hume tanhai ka guman hua,
Ashkon ka samundar ankhon pe meherban hua,

Dil me jo dard tha, behe gaya kuch palon ke liye,
Shant hui dil ki hulchul, yeh dil bhi ansowon ka kadardan hua,

Beete hue pal kyu aaj(today) me basna chaha rahe hai,
Yeh aaj aur kal ki kashmakash me yeh dil bhi jung ka maidan hua!


Very good Shayari, Meena

Mehboob se tohfe me mila gum bhi hame kubool hai
gum gum na hua jindagi jeene ka samaan hua
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Amanush...
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«Reply #44 on: June 25, 2005, 01:09:46 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
kuch jazbaat phir se pesh karti hoon...

Aaj phir se hume tanhai ka guman hua,
Ashkon ka samundar ankhon pe meherban hua,

Dil me jo dard tha, behe gaya kuch palon ke liye,
Shant hui dil ki hulchul, yeh dil bhi ansowon ka kadardan hua,

Beete hue pal kyu aaj(today) me basna chaha rahe hai,
Yeh aaj aur kal ki kashmakash me yeh dil bhi jung ka maidan hua!


Hi...Meena Beti!

Toumhare jazbaat paDh kar hum hamesha khoush hote hein...

Younhi likhti rehna...

Chachu...

 Usual Smile
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