- Tanhai -

by Meena on June 15, 2005, 09:25:23 PM
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Meena
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«Reply #45 on: June 25, 2005, 03:50:52 PM »
Quote from: "Bharat_Desai"
Quote from: "Meena"
kuch jazbaat phir se pesh karti hoon...

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Very good Shayari, Meena

Mehboob se tohfe me mila gum bhi hame kubool hai
gum gum na hua jindagi jeene ka samaan hua


shukriya ji shukriya!!! and gud one!  :D

pyar me lene dena ka hisab kitab humne kabhi rakha nahin,
unka diya hua tofa hai, isslyie gum bhi hume gum lagta nahin!!
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Meena
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«Reply #46 on: June 25, 2005, 03:52:24 PM »
thank u chachu....kushi hoti hai koi meri shayari pad ke kush hota hai! meri to bas ek koshish rehti hai ke jazbaato ko shayari me pesh karon!! thank u!  :D
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«Reply #47 on: June 25, 2005, 03:53:04 PM »
good work all

tum aaye ho, na shab-e-intezaar guzri hai
talash me hai saher baar baar guzri hai
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«Reply #48 on: June 25, 2005, 04:12:33 PM »
 bahoot khoob  :thumb:

tujh se bichad janey ke baad apna yeh haal
log bhi kehtey hai zinda lash sar e bazaar guzri hai
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«Reply #49 on: June 25, 2005, 04:22:38 PM »
thanx dosto!!!

gud one sam and humtum!

na logo ko kehne de "humtum",
ke aaj ek zinda lash hai tu,
woh to majbooriyan le dubti hai insaan ko,
warna abhi tak kisi ke dil ke pas hai tu!
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«Reply #50 on: June 25, 2005, 04:31:40 PM »
good work everyone..................

u all doing gr8 buddies
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«Reply #51 on: June 25, 2005, 05:37:30 PM »
bahut ache humtum n meena

main hu derd ki jaan o pyari
teri yaad satati hai
ghum hai meri pahchaan yaaro
khoon ke ansu rulati hai
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«Reply #52 on: July 28, 2005, 11:01:28 PM »
Quote from: "samnoj"
bahut ache humtum n meena

main hu derd ki jaan o pyari
teri yaad satati hai
ghum hai meri pahchaan yaaro
khoon ke ansu rulati hai


very nice samnoj ji...

gum ko apni pehechan humne banaya kuch aise,
ke ansowon ki jagha muskurane lage hum,
sukha diya hume dard ke is samundar ko,
jisme te shayad doobne lage hum!!!
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«Reply #53 on: July 29, 2005, 12:00:18 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "samnoj"
bahut ache humtum n meena

main hu derd ki jaan o pyari
teri yaad satati hai
ghum hai meri pahchaan yaaro
khoon ke ansu rulati hai


very nice samnoj ji...

gum ko apni pehechan humne banaya kuch aise,
ke ansowon ki jagha muskurane lage hum,
sukha diya hume dard ke is samundar ko,
jisme te shayad doobne lage hum!!!
Bahot khub samnoj ji or meena ji

Khamoshi hoto pe hai or aakh bhi purnam nahi
Aap shayad sochte ho hamko koi gam nahi
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Meena
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«Reply #54 on: July 29, 2005, 07:04:09 PM »
shukriya ali ji.......and nice one too..............

 :D
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ali
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«Reply #55 on: July 30, 2005, 12:03:54 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
shukriya ali ji.......and nice one too..............

 :D
Thx. meena ji


Rafta-rafta bujhte jate hai mohabbat ke chiraag
Eay carage jeest tu thera hai ab kiya dekh kar
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«Reply #56 on: September 17, 2005, 01:02:57 PM »
very nice meena & ali jii too

gumo seye darna choor diya humnye
duniya kya darayegi humko duniya ko bhi chor diya humnye
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Meena
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«Reply #57 on: September 21, 2005, 10:28:09 PM »
nice ghazal ji.....

 :D
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bhambra
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«Reply #58 on: September 22, 2005, 03:57:02 PM »
All r nice .........

Is biraane me akela hi mai khush tha,
Kiu dia tha sath, jab chor k hi jana tha,
Kalion ka khilne tak intezar nahin karte,
Kalion ko aakhir dal se tutna hi to tha.
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Meena
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«Reply #59 on: September 22, 2005, 08:51:07 PM »
very nice bhambra ji

har baagh ke phool ko murjana hota hai,
sukh ke saath yaha gum bhi pana hota hai,
zindagi rukh nahin jati ek rang ke jane se,
kho kar bhi har rang ko apnana hota hai!!
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