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Meena

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kuch jazbaat phir se pesh karti hoon...

Aaj phir se hume tanhai ka guman hua,
Ashkon ka samundar ankhon pe meherban hua,

Dil me jo dard tha, behe gaya kuch palon ke liye,
Shant hui dil ki hulchul, yeh dil bhi ansowon ka kadardan hua,

Beete hue pal kyu aaj(today) me basna chaha rahe hai,
Yeh aaj aur kal ki kashmakash me yeh dil bhi jung ka maidan hua!


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nikki

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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2005, 09:27:58 PM »

wonderfull as ever Meena sis............
aap kamaal ka likhti hain...........keep writing.


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Meena

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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2005, 09:33:14 PM »

thank u nikki!!!! for reading and liking my poems kuddiye!!!!

:D


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HumTum

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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2005, 09:36:54 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

aap ki post dekh ker yeh mujhey kya hua
mera qalam bhi kuch likhney ko tiyaar hua !!

Krz hai !!!

ruswaiyon se keh do,door talak abb na nazar ayain hamain
unn ko abb hum dil-e-mehmaN banaya nahi karte

karne hain jitne bhi zulm is dil par woh kar lain abhi
unn ke zor-o-sitam se hum abb ghabraya nahi karte

unka zikar unki tamana aur unki aarzoo bhi nahin
be-wajah unke khayal abb hamain tadpaya nahin karte


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isha_verma7

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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2005, 09:46:54 PM »

wah very nice meena ji n' hum tum....paadh kar mazaaa agaaya......kuch lines toh dil ke aar paar ho gaye....just mind blowing u both Usual Smile


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2005, 09:59:29 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

wow meena.........once again superbsssssssssssss.............. tongue3

Kudiye..

ashkon ki baarish mein bah gaya mera ashiyana
sab kuch chal shaam dhalte dhalte
meri aankhen sookh gayee lub khamosh ho gaye
main sab kuch dekhta raha main dum niklate nikalte..................


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Meena

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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2005, 10:27:57 PM »

thank u humtum, isha aur waheed!!! :D

aur humtum janab azr waheed mundeya dono ne bohot acha likha hai!!!

:D


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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2005, 10:50:36 PM »

wah meena sis,bohat acche se tanhaiyon ka aalam pesh kiya hai aapne,wonderful reply humtum Usual Smile

and nice one waheed also.


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Meena

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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2005, 10:53:14 PM »

thank u kuddiye...thank u... pas ek ksohish hoti hai diff type of feelings ke bare me likhne ki! :D


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2005, 11:01:16 PM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

wah meena sis,bohat acche se tanhaiyon ka aalam pesh kiya hai aapne,wonderful reply humtum Usual Smile

and nice one waheed also.

thanxxxxxx alot nidhi........... tongue3

meenu................. tongue3

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Jind

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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2005, 11:24:43 PM »

Wah wah wah Meena ji, kamaal ki shayari hai. Hum toh aap ki shayari ke deewane hogaye. tongue3

Lol. Keep it up yaar. Humari dua aap ke saath hai. Usual Smile


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Aarzuu

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«Reply #11 on: June 16, 2005, 02:15:57 AM »

Quote from: "Meena"

Heartfelt...............keep it up!!!!


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Aryaan

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«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2005, 06:22:03 AM »

Ek baar phir aap ne bohat hi acha aur khubsoorat likha Meena.....

Hoon ek aisa diya main
Jis se koi roshni na ho
Hoon ek aisi chahat main
Jis mein koi mahobbat na ho
Yeh nadaangi nahi, deewangi hai
Lekin jaise pagal pan ki tarha
Yeh jee rone ko chahata hai
Ek ruke huwe toofaan ki tarha
Zindigi ki chand saanson se
Bana leinge ek tanha mahel
Jis mein hoga basera tanhai se


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khushiiiii

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«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2005, 10:30:05 AM »

Quote from: "Meena"

wahh wahh............very nice meena...............bahut achha likhti hai aap.........


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sky_web2005

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«Reply #14 on: June 16, 2005, 01:20:18 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

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kya naam dein ab is zindgi ko hum
ek dard hei, ek aah hei, ek nasoor hei aur kuchh bhi nahi.

unke pahlu mein rahne ka manzer, humse na puchho yaro,
unki zameene bandgi mein humne sir kata diya.

bahut hi mahweyas the hum us wakt shayad,
jab hamari rahguzar se nashat chupchap juzar gayi.

jab bhi kho jate hein teri yadon ke manjar mein,
koi pukare to asker kahte hein yahi,
na jagao awaz de kar kuchh lamho ke liye
dard soya hei abhi..

ek nayab shei hein ashk bhi mere
rote hein to shabnam ki tarah, hanste hein to khoon ki shakl lete hein.

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