tanhaye mein

by Only4U on January 27, 2006, 02:36:40 PM
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tanhaye mein aaty hain tere yaadein
Guzre hoay palon ki batein
ik baar palat kar dekh lo
na din katte hain na raatein
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nikki
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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2006, 02:46:18 PM »
bahut khoob Only4u....

bahut waqt beet gaya yaadon ke sahare
abb tum hi koi surat batao..
iss tanhayi mein hum baaki jeevan kaise guzarein
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2006, 03:03:54 PM »
Quote from: "Only4U"
tanhaye mein aaty hain tere yaadein
Guzre hoay palon ki batein
ik baar palat kar dekh lo
na din katte hain na raatein


Nice one Only4U...

Tere sang bitaaye un haseen lamhon ki yaadein,
tere khwabon se saji ye bechaen tanha raatein,
tere na hone ka ehsaas mere har sapne ko tod jaata hai,
lamha koi guzarta hai, chehre par ek lakeer chhod jaata hai,
jaane kyun yaad aata hai phir mujhe wo guzra hua kal,
dard ka gawah bana hai aaj tere sang bitaya ek ek pal.

Very nicely written  u2 nikki sis  Usual Smile
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nikki
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«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2006, 03:17:18 PM »
thanx  bhai...tum bhi kuch likho...
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2006, 06:19:53 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
thanx  bhai...tum bhi kuch likho...


I'll try writing something, i don't write much these days...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: January 28, 2006, 01:52:00 AM »
Very Nice Only4U, Nikki & Amit....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: January 28, 2006, 02:09:26 AM »

Jidhar bhi dekhta hoon tanhayi nazar aati hai
Aapke intezaar mein harr shaam guzar jaati hai
Main kaise karoon gilah dil ke zakhmon se huzoor
Aansoo chalakte hi meri soorat nikhar jaati hai..




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