Tanhayee~~~~ Saahil

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nigaah main rakhte hain ek aansu
jab dil karta hai ro lete hain

dil k zakhmo ka ilaaz nahin mumkin
jab behta hai lhoon, toh si lete hain

dariye ko dekha hai sookha hua maine
jab se uske ashq mere dil mein rehte hain

aati nahin ab parindon kii chahchahat is taraf
na jaane kin darakhton k saaye main rehte hain

akelepan ko tarasta raha ummra bhar 'Saahil'
jan tanhayee mile toh zaar-zaar rote hain
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2009, 02:24:30 PM »
nigaah main rakhte hain ek aansu
jab dil karta hai ro lete hain

dil k zakhmo ka ilaaz nahin mumkin
jab behta hai lhoon, toh si lete hain

dariye ko dekha hai sookha hua maine
jab se uske ashq mere dil mein rehte hain

aati nahin ab parindon kii chahchahat is taraf
na jaane kin darakhton k saaye main rehte hain

akelepan ko tarasta raha ummra bhar 'Saahil'
jan tanhayee mile toh zaar-zaar rote hain

Bahut Khoob Har Line Bahut Pasandh Aayi, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Tanhayi ko sathi banakar mout ka intzaar kiya karte hain,
Ham aajkal u hi zindagi ko hathon me lekar jiya karte hai,

Mehfil me log be-hisaab peete hai aur rote hai,
Ham leke haath me jaam so baar tujhe yaad kiya karte hain,

Haath mere khali hi rahe tere jaane ke baad,
Haan kabhi kabhi aansoo se muthi bhar liya karte hain.

Shally.

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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2009, 02:29:33 PM »

Bahut Khoob Har Line Bahut Pasandh Aayi, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Tanhayi ko sathi banakar mout ka intzaar karte hain,
Ham aajkal u hi zindagi ko hathon me lekar jiya karte hai,

Mehfil me log be-hisaab peete hai aur rote hai,
Ham leke haath me jaam so baar tujhe yaad kiya karte hain,

Haath mere khali hi rahe tere jaane ke baad,
Haan kabhi kabhi aansoo se muthi bhar liya karte hain.

Shally.


thanks and very good reply from u shally

nazar aaya mujhe ek saaya
jo andhere main khone kii koshish karta hai

uski shaql dekhi hai qayi baar maine aaine main
magar woh is kadar mayoos toh nahin dikhta hai

kuch wajah jaroor hai uske , tanhayee main ghum hone ki
warna woh toh apne sang mehfile liye phirta hai
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2009, 02:35:44 PM »
nigaah main rakhte hain ek aansu
jab dil karta hai ro lete hain

dil k zakhmo ka ilaaz nahin mumkin
jab behta hai lhoon, toh si lete hain

dariye ko dekha hai sookha hua maine
jab se uske ashq mere dil mein rehte hain

aati nahin ab parindon kii chahchahat is taraf
na jaane kin darakhton k saaye main rehte hain

akelepan ko tarasta raha ummra bhar 'Saahil'
jan tanhayee mile toh zaar-zaar rote hain


VERIII NAAICE...............S2002
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2009, 02:46:47 PM »
thanks and very good reply from u shally

nazar aaya mujhe ek saaya
jo andhere main khone kii koshish karta hai

uski shaql dekhi hai qayi baar maine aaine main
magar woh is kadar mayoos toh nahin dikhta hai

kuch wajah jaroor hai uske , tanhayee main ghum hone ki
warna woh toh apne sang mehfile liye phirta hai


Shukriya Salil Ji, Aapne bhi khoob reply kiya,

Bahut seh liya gammo ko meri masoom hassi ne,
Aab ham bhi dil khol kar aankhon ko rulaya karte hain,

Koi gunaah na kiya koi dhokha na kiya kisi se,
Phir bhi jaane kis darr se nazre churaya karte hain,

Log to ek pal mein hi jaane kaise todte hai dosti,
Ham to nafratoon ko bhi saalo tak jhela karte hain.

Shally.
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2009, 03:22:59 PM »


VERIII NAAICE...............S2002
shukriya K_A
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«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2009, 03:26:16 PM »

Shukriya Salil Ji, Aapne bhi khoob reply kiya,

Bahut seh liya gammo ko meri masoom hassi ne,
Aab ham bhi dil khol kar aankhon ko rulaya karte hain,

Koi gunaah na kiya koi dhokha na kiya kisi se,
Phir bhi jaane kis darr se nazre churaya karte hain,

Log to ek pal mein hi jaane kaise todte hai dosti,
Ham to nafratoon ko bhi saalo tak jhela karte hain.

Shally.



bahut achche shally

dosti ko samajhte ho toh aisi baat na karte
dosti ko muqabla nafraton k saath na karte
khata kucch nahin teri , bas khata yeh meri
sachchai se rakhta ho parda,uske ghar yaar nahin baste
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«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2009, 03:47:46 PM »


bahut achche shally

dosti ko samajhte ho toh aisi baat na karte
dosti ko muqabla nafraton k saath na karte
khata kucch nahin teri , bas khata yeh meri
sachchai se rakhta ho parda,uske ghar yaar nahin baste

Bahut Khoob Salil Ji,

Acha laga ki tune mere gunaah ko jahir kiya,
Apni dukhe hue dil ko mujhe dikha diya,

Insaan hi ho mein bhi e dost khuda nahi,
Jo bhi hua anjaane me hua jaanbujhkar nahi kiya.

Shally.
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«Reply #8 on: May 07, 2009, 06:01:05 PM »
nigaah main rakhte hain ek aansu
jab dil karta hai ro lete hain

dil k zakhmo ka ilaaz nahin mumkin
jab behta hai lhoon, toh si lete hain

dariye ko dekha hai sookha hua maine
jab se uske ashq mere dil mein rehte hain

aati nahin ab parindon kii chahchahat is taraf
na jaane kin darakhton k saaye main rehte hain

akelepan ko tarasta raha ummra bhar 'Saahil'
jan tanhayee mile toh zaar-zaar rote hain
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bohat khoob salil bhai..

Bohat khoob shally ...
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«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2009, 11:02:58 PM »
nigaah main rakhte hain ek aansu
jab dil karta hai ro lete hain

dil k zakhmo ka ilaaz nahin mumkin
jab behta hai lhoon, toh si lete hain

dariye ko dekha hai sookha hua maine
jab se uske ashq mere dil mein rehte hain

aati nahin ab parindon kii chahchahat is taraf
na jaane kin darakhton k saaye main rehte hain

akelepan ko tarasta raha ummra bhar 'Saahil'
jan tanhayee mile toh zaar-zaar rote hain
Waah...bohot khoob Salil
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2009, 11:18:40 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Salil & Shally..
aap dono ne bahut acha likha hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2009, 11:25:37 PM »
bahut khoob saahil

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«Reply #12 on: June 17, 2009, 07:58:22 PM »

Bahut Khoob Salil Ji,

Acha laga ki tune mere gunaah ko jahir kiya,
Apni dukhe hue dil ko mujhe dikha diya,

Insaan hi ho mein bhi e dost khuda nahi,
Jo bhi hua anjaane me hua jaanbujhkar nahi kiya.

Shally.

thnks shally dear
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«Reply #13 on: June 17, 2009, 07:58:48 PM »
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bohat khoob salil bhai..

Bohat khoob shally ...

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«Reply #14 on: June 17, 2009, 07:59:51 PM »
Waah...bohot khoob Salil
Bahut Bahut Khoob Salil & Shally..
aap dono ne bahut acha likha hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut khoob saahil

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thnks talat ,khwahish, danish
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