tapan waisi to nahi thi

by mamta bajpai on May 08, 2010, 05:25:53 PM
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JAL RAHI THI MAI MAGAR SOORAJ ME TAPAN WAISI TO NAHI THI
BUJH RAHI THI MAI MAGAR HAWAON ME NAMI WAISI TO NAHI THI
RAAT NE PHIR OODH LI THI WAHI CHADAR CHAND SITARON WALI
SAB KUCH THA MAGAR USME CHAMAK PAHALE JAISI TO NAHI THI
AAJ KYON SARD HUA JATA HAI IS DIL KE NAGAR KA MOUSAM
MERE IS DIL KI FIZA PAHALE KABHI AISI WAISI TO NAHI THI
APNE MUQADDAR NE HASIL KIYE PAHLE BHI KAI SAKHT MUKAAM
DUSHWARIYON KI RAAH  DROUPADI KE CHEER JAISI TO NAHI THI
YE SHOR KYON BEVAJAH  HUA HUJOOM LOGON KA HUA JAMA
BAS NEEND ABHI LAGI HI THI OR KOI BAAT AISI TO NAHI THI
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«Reply #1 on: May 08, 2010, 05:53:36 PM »
wah mamta saheba kya kahene bahoth qoob acha kaha apne ..dad hazir hai qubool karen ...

bewajha hi wo taluq tood gaya mujh se !!
Baath khuch bhi magar waisi to nahi thi !!


Duwa go

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«Reply #2 on: May 08, 2010, 08:41:26 PM »
My God Its so beautiful creation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mamte ji Gud work !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2010, 10:07:22 PM »
Very good presentation Mamta Ji
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2010, 10:33:41 PM »
bahut bahut khoob Mamta ji...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2010, 01:07:18 AM »
QADEER BHAI IS QADAR HOUSLAAFZAI KE LIYE BEHAD SHUKRIYA...
AAP NE BHI KAM LFZON ME KYA KHOOB LIKH DIYA HAI.KAMAAL HAI .
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2010, 01:12:10 AM »
NEELGOLD JI BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA...AAPNE MERE KALAM KO WAQT DIYA OR SARAHA.AAGE BHI AAP KI HOUSLAAFZAI KI KHWAHISHMAND RAHOONGI.
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2010, 01:13:04 AM »
DHANYAWAD KLASKARJI.
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2010, 01:14:36 AM »
RAJESH HARISH JI.BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA SAHEB.
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«Reply #9 on: May 09, 2010, 05:39:18 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Mamta ji very touching and wonderful creation.beautiful lines by Qadeer ji icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 09, 2010, 03:51:29 PM »
Madhu ji aapka behad shukriya...
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«Reply #11 on: May 10, 2010, 08:27:41 AM »
khoob !
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«Reply #12 on: May 10, 2010, 08:38:07 AM »
thanks VB!
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«Reply #13 on: May 10, 2010, 01:00:08 PM »
SHIHAB SAHEB AAPKA BEHAD SHUKRIYA!!GAZAL KI NOK PALAK SANWARNE KA HUNAR TO NAHI MAALOOM.BAS AAP LOGON KI DAD OR HOUSALA AFZAI PAR HI MERE QALAM KA MEYAR HAI .UMMEED HAI AAP JAISE HUNARMAND MERI KAMIYON KO BHI DOOR KARENGE.
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