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« on: February 07, 2005, 07:30:52 PM »
doostooN.....Aaj phir se ik bar iss duniya ki ek aur sacchai liye aap ki mehfil  mein aaya hooN. Kal batooN hi batooN mein na janey kasseY mere aur mere doostooN ke bich taqdeer aur garibi ka mudda chid gya aur iss bahes mein kitneY zzazbaat ubar aayey. unhi jazbatoon ko lafz deker ke aap ke nazar kerna chahta hoon. to pesh-e-kidmat hai.....  


"bhookh ke bazar me neelam imaan ho gaya
zarra zarra bik gaya,khokhla insaan ho gaya

asmat au insaniyat ki bazi kheli taqdeer ne
behakte pason me bashar luta saaman ho gaya

khwabon ko deker thapki sulane chale derker kabhi
khuli ankhon me chamakta uadas asmaan ho gaya

bebas muradey taqti rahey soone phalak ki aas me
sitaron me "ROTI SA CHAND"gerdis-e-makan ho gaya

bagawat ki andhi urati rahi dhool ke tinke phakat
sholey banker chehro pe berse ,ashq-e-nishan ho gaya

muflisi ki raah me ,ek din aisa bhi daur aya "HumTum'
lashey hain kandon pe magar,jism shamshan ho gaya


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« Reply #1 on: February 07, 2005, 08:52:09 PM »
Wah!!!!
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« Reply #2 on: February 07, 2005, 08:56:45 PM »
gud HUMTUMji.........
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« Reply #3 on: February 07, 2005, 08:59:46 PM »
shukriya talat ji... pandit ji.....
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« Reply #4 on: February 07, 2005, 10:21:22 PM »
wah hum tum ji lekin woh na apki puri poems samajh me nahin aati mujhe  sad5
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« Reply #5 on: February 07, 2005, 10:41:57 PM »
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wah hum tum ji lekin woh na apki puri poems samajh me nahin aati mujhe  sad5



shukriya meena ji... aur aapko jo lines samajh na aaye woh plz likh diya kro aur mein aap ko uska meaning batla diya karunga....
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« Reply #6 on: February 07, 2005, 10:52:56 PM »
arre kaise ek ek line ya word likh doon ,itna to yaad bhi nahin rahega  :? but jo samajh me ata hai uspe sache dil se wah wah karti hoon!  :D
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« Reply #7 on: February 07, 2005, 10:57:13 PM »
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arre kaise ek ek line ya word likh doon ,itna to yaad bhi nahin rahega  :? but jo samajh me ata hai uspe sache dil se wah wah karti hoon!  :D


ohh... shukriya meena ji... aur mein aagey se khosish krunga ki difficult words ko explain ker ke likhu....
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« Reply #8 on: February 07, 2005, 11:09:47 PM »
thank u thanku seems like im the only one here who is complaining  :oops:  but mai kaise tareef karon ya jawab likhon jab mujhe samajh me hi na aye. but thatx for ur effort dost ji!  :D
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« Reply #9 on: February 07, 2005, 11:13:46 PM »
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thank you thanku seems like im the only one here who is complaining  :oops:  but mai kaise tareef karon ya jawab likhon jab mujhe samajh me hi na aye. but thatx for ur effort dost ji!  :D



ur..welcome...... Meena ji....
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« Reply #10 on: February 08, 2005, 04:48:53 PM »
jaagatii aa.Nkho.n se bhii dekho duniyaa ko
Khvaabo.n kaa kyaa hai vo har shab aate hai.n

kaaGaz kii kashtii me.n dariyaa paar kiyaa
dekho ham ko kyaa kyaa karatab aate hai.n

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« Reply #11 on: February 09, 2005, 09:31:03 PM »
wahhhhhhhhh hum tum ji!!!

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« Reply #12 on: February 09, 2005, 09:32:57 PM »
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wahhhhhhhhh hum tum ji!!!

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shukriya Meena ji...
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