tera chaand to Sadiyon se aasman mein nikla nahin... Intezar !

by Intezar on January 14, 2011, 12:13:06 AM

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«Reply #15 on: January 14, 2011, 06:28:20 PM »

shukriya aapka intezar ji jo aapne itna pasand kiya mere reply ko...waise aapki poem thi hi aisi k bas flow me likhte chale gaye....thnx ji yunhi mast mast likhte rahiye taaki hum bhi aapko jawab de te rahen


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Re: tera chaand to Sadiyon se aasman mein nikla nahin... Intezar !

«Reply #16 on: January 15, 2011, 03:04:55 PM »

Bahut Hi Umda Likha Hai Intezar Ji Such Mein Dil Mein Uttar Gai Aapki Kahi Huvi Har Ek Baat .. Wah Kya Line Likhi Hai Aapne
...Tera Chand To Sadiyon Se Aasman Mein Nikla Nahi...

Kya Behtrin Creation Hai Aapka Khub Sari Daad Kabul Kijiye Meri Taraf Se Intezar Ji
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Kasak Ji Aur Nirala Ji Aapne Bhi Bahut Sunder Sath DIya Intezar Ji


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Re: tera chaand to Sadiyon se aasman mein nikla nahin... Intezar !

«Reply #17 on: January 15, 2011, 03:18:40 PM »

Apni apni dunya mein sab jeeye ja rahe hain,
Saahil ko gham ke sagar mein duboye ja rahe hain, koi rakhta hai kasak dil mein koi dil e kaSak basaye ja rahe hain,
Maana ke hum likhtey nahi aapki tarah,
Isi liye hum dil ke zakham par dard ki marham lagaye ja rahe hain


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Re: tera chaand to Sadiyon se aasman mein nikla nahin... Intezar !

«Reply #18 on: January 16, 2011, 07:11:06 PM »

Rishi ji aapka saath humesha mila uske liye bahut bahut shukriya bas yun hi saath banaaye rakhiye... aap ke dil tak pachunch saki baat use dil se bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 15, 2011, 03:04:55 PM

Kasak Ji Aur Nirala Ji Aapne Bhi Bahut Sunder Sath DIya Intezar Ji


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«Reply #19 on: January 16, 2011, 07:12:36 PM »

gair ki duniya ka maatam manaana chhod Saahil
khud ki raah par nazar daal andhera bahut hai... !

Intezar !

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Re: tera chaand to Sadiyon se aasman mein nikla nahin... Intezar !

«Reply #20 on: January 16, 2011, 08:00:57 PM »

Intezaar Sahab Aadab!

Kia baat hai janab .. kia khoob ahsaas aur khayaal
bayaaN kiye hai adaygi hi behad khoob rahi daad
kabool kijiye...

Sabhi ashaar achche lage hume..

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..


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«Reply #21 on: January 16, 2011, 08:16:20 PM »

Shukriya Parwaaz ji bauhut bahut shukriya... aapke comments mile tahe dil se shukriya aapka...

Intezar !

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Re: tera chaand to Sadiyon se aasman mein nikla nahin... Intezar !

«Reply #22 on: January 16, 2011, 08:25:13 PM »

bahoot umda behtar se behtreen likha aapne intzar ji daad kabool karen.......@Kdk ji aapne bhi bahoot achcha likha ..
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«Reply #23 on: January 16, 2011, 08:30:02 PM »

Shukriya Bekaraar ji dil se bahut bahut Shukriya aapka... aapne ise dil se pasand kiya bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !


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«Reply #24 on: January 16, 2011, 08:44:00 PM »

Intezar jee,
Sach bolun toh this is one your best ever..
bahaut bahaut khoob..
Apne dil choo liya, dil main uttar gayi yeh nazm..
Clapping Smiley

Bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob once again..
Dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!


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«Reply #25 on: January 16, 2011, 08:45:12 PM »

Anamika di,
BAhaut khoob..
Aur Nirala jee..
Applause

Khush rahiye..!


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«Reply #26 on: January 19, 2011, 08:14:29 PM »

Rahim ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka is tarah hausla afzaayi ka dil se shukriya, aapko bahut pasand aaya bahut khushi huyi...

Intezar !

Quote from: -Rahim- on January 16, 2011, 08:44:00 PM

Intezar jee,
Sach bolun toh this is one your best ever..
bahaut bahaut khoob..
Apne dil choo liya, dil main uttar gayi yeh nazm..
Clapping Smiley

Bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob once again..
Dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!


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