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« on: August 15, 2007, 03:35:55 AM »
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« Reply #1 on: August 15, 2007, 03:39:17 AM »
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Excellent ! =D> =D> =D>

Last 4 lines are ultimate !
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« Reply #2 on: August 15, 2007, 03:43:24 AM »
Thank You for liking it Rajbir !! Usual Smile
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« Reply #3 on: August 15, 2007, 08:39:16 AM »
bahoot khoob talat...

Chaya tha mujh per wo kuch is tarah
Bhooli thi kaynaat kuch is tarah
Bichard kar kaynaat mujhko bhula gaya
Mera chand mujhe kahin dharati main milla gaya

Dukhta hai dil ajj, ansoo sirf bahte hai
Dete hai dard mujhe, aor yah kahte hai
Beet gaya jo, usko beet jaane de
Bhul ja usse, nai subah ko ane de

Bhulna nahi asaan, dil bas yah kahta hai
Socho main uski ajj bhi subah sham rahta hai
Her pal wo pal yaad atein hai
Dukhta hai dil, socho main rah jaatein hai

Asmaan mera wo na jaane kyun kho gaya
Kaya chahiye tha usko, kyun itna bedard ho gaya
Nahi koi jawab, shunay sab lagta hai
Dil bas ro ro kar yahi kahta hai

Dukhta hai dil ajj, ansoo sirf bahte hai
Dete hai dard mujhe, aor yah kahte hai
Beet gaya jo usko beet jaane de
Bhul ja usse, nai subah ko ane de.......
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« Reply #4 on: August 15, 2007, 10:15:18 AM »
BAHOOT KHOOB TALATJI...EHSAAS KO SAHI ALFAAS DIYA AAPNE.
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« Reply #5 on: August 15, 2007, 01:11:59 PM »
Pooja

Very good thoughts ! =D>

Keep writing !
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« Reply #6 on: August 15, 2007, 07:15:36 PM »
thanks Veer ji!!!
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« Reply #7 on: August 16, 2007, 04:28:34 PM »
Thank a lot Pooja and Khwaish...thanks for liking my creation Usual Smile

Pooja, aapne bhi bohot achcha likha hai Usual Smile
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« Reply #8 on: August 17, 2007, 03:59:04 PM »
maan gaye Talat ji aur Pooja ji
kamal likha hai aap dono ne
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« Reply #9 on: August 21, 2007, 05:03:34 AM »
Jab bhi achi aur khoobsurat shayeri ki baat aati hai tau sirf do hi naam zehan mein aate hain, Talat & Pooja ..
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« Reply #10 on: August 21, 2007, 03:15:13 PM »
Tooo good....

Very Beautifully Written Talat and Pooja di...
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« Reply #11 on: August 28, 2007, 11:13:39 PM »
Thank you so much Samnoj and Shikha Usual Smile
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« Reply #12 on: August 28, 2007, 11:15:32 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Jab bhi achi aur khoobsurat shayeri ki baat aati hai tau sirf do hi naam zehan mein aate hain, Talat & Pooja ..


Bohot bohot shukriya Aryaan...thanks for the great compliment Usual Smile
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« Reply #13 on: August 29, 2007, 12:35:23 AM »
Bahoot bahoot shukaria Talat, Sam, Aryaan and Shikha!!!
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« Reply #14 on: September 23, 2008, 12:21:55 AM »
Thankyou ! Yoindia
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