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Berukhi hai us chaand ki, meri wafaon ka ye sila nahin
Barbaad beshak kiya usne mujhe phir bhi koi gila nahin
Shabo roz nihaarta tha main tanha jis chaand ko aksar
Chaandni bankar wo meri raaton me kabhi dhala nahin
Pehlu mein chhupa kar rakha tha maine chaand ko
Kho jaane ke dar se raaton ko karwat tak badla nahin
haath mera thaam kar kuch door tak to saath chala wo
ek baar jo bichhda wo mujhse, phir aaj tak milaa nahin
Roz seenchta hun main apne aansuon se tere gulsitan ko
Teri khushbu se jo abaad ho, phool wo ab tak khila nahin
Jalaa baithaa main sab kuch teri in garm saanson mein
meri aahon se lekin tera dil–e -jigar ab tak pighla nahin
Kis chandani ki raah lagaaye baitha hai aise ‘Intezar’
Tera chaand to sadiyoN se aasman mein nikla nahin… !
Shukriya
Intezar !
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«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2011, 06:23:33 AM » |
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intezar ji....kya kahun main ab meri samjh me nahin aaraha..
aap mere fav ho ye apko pata hai lekin ab aisa likhoge to fav se bhi aage ka kuch word sochna padega....
uffffffff....ye design bhi mastam hai ji..sply jo side me aapne likha hai wo bht pasand aaya mujhe......
chand ki chandni na usse kisi surat juda ho sakti hai
mahobbat jo dil me hai sirf aankhon se bayan ho sakti hai
dhundhti rahi hum main tumhe har suun na jane kab se sanam
meri iss talaash ko sirf teri tapti aahh samjh sakti hai
boondon ki maanind baras raha hai pyaar tera aankhon se
pyaas mere dil ki sirf ye sukhi banzar zameen samjh sakti hai
intezaar kitna hai mujhe tere laut k aajane ka ee humsafar
ye tere dil me uthti mere milne ki kasak hi samjh sakti hai...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2011, 08:30:17 AM » |
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wah bahut khub.
kya mast hai Intezaar ji ka post aur K mam aapka reply.
bahut mast.
keep it up.
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Intezaar-e-Sanam -- Kasak Dil me uthati hai
Kasak dil ki jo uthe Mehboob-e-Intezaar me bepanaah rulaati hai
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don mind
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2011, 08:49:39 AM » |
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mast reply hai nirala ji..kya mast jod tod kiya hai aapne..mast
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«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2011, 09:15:00 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2011, 11:22:36 AM » |
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Bahut khoob likha hai intezar ji n nice reply kasak ji...
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«Reply #7 on: January 14, 2011, 12:57:03 PM » |
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wonderful intjaar ji......ek ek shabd dil me ghar kar gaya apaka........bahot khub....
anamika ji .wah kya reply diya he.........u r best out of best in reply..........keep it up ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 14, 2011, 02:31:21 PM » |
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Kya baat hai Kasak ji... Shukriya adaa karun ki taareef karun... bas yun hi saath dete rehiye aap bahut bahut shukriya... aur bahut hi khubsurat jawaab mila aapse jiski ummeed thi hume bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne... shukriya kasak ji... Intezar ! intezar ji....kya kahun main ab meri samjh me nahin aaraha..
aap mere fav ho ye apko pata hai lekin ab aisa likhoge to fav se bhi aage ka kuch word sochna padega....
uffffffff....ye design bhi mastam hai ji..sply jo side me aapne likha hai wo bht pasand aaya mujhe......
chand ki chandni na usse kisi surat juda ho sakti hai
mahobbat jo dil me hai sirf aankhon se bayan ho sakti hai
dhundhti rahi hum main tumhe har suun na jane kab se sanam
meri iss talaash ko sirf teri tapti aahh samjh sakti hai
boondon ki maanind baras raha hai pyaar tera aankhon se
pyaas mere dil ki sirf ye sukhi banzar zameen samjh sakti hai
intezaar kitna hai mujhe tere laut k aajane ka ee humsafar
ye tere dil me uthti mere milne ki kasak hi samjh sakti hai...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: January 14, 2011, 02:32:52 PM » |
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Shukriya niraala ji... aapki nazar pahunchi dil khush ho gaya... aate rehiye aur mehfile sajaate rehiye... shukriya ji shukriya.. Intezar ! wah bahut khub.
kya mast hai Intezaar ji ka post aur K mam aapka reply.
bahut mast.
keep it up.
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Intezaar-e-Sanam -- Kasak Dil me uthati hai
Kasak dil ki jo uthe Mehboob-e-Intezaar me bepanaah rulaati hai
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don mind
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thanx
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«Reply #10 on: January 14, 2011, 02:34:30 PM » |
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shukriya manjum ji bahut bahut shukriya tahe dil se shukriya kubul kijiyega... aapke dil tak pahuncha ab aur kya chahiye... khush rehiye... Intezar ! |
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«Reply #11 on: January 14, 2011, 02:35:41 PM » |
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Geet ji aapka shukriya Saath humesha rehne ke liye dil se bahut bahut shukriya hai ji... Intezar ! Bahut khoob likha hai intezar ji n nice reply kasak ji...
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«Reply #12 on: January 14, 2011, 02:37:16 PM » |
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«Reply #13 on: January 14, 2011, 03:59:17 PM » |
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Matrix ji aapke dil tak pahunch saka bahut bahut shukriya aapka... bas saath rehiye humesha... Intezar ! wonderful intjaar ji......ek ek shabd dil me ghar kar gaya apaka........bahot khub....
anamika ji .wah kya reply diya he.........u r best out of best in reply..........keep it up ji
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«Reply #14 on: January 14, 2011, 06:24:44 PM » |
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geet ji mann ji and rajaji thnx k aapne mere likhe ko pasand kiya aur saraha..yunhi hausla badhate rahiye...
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