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teri aankhon mai aansu kyon...........Mann

by mann.mann on May 24, 2012, 11:58:24 AM

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«Reply #45 on: May 28, 2012, 03:45:56 AM »

Quote from: mann.mann on May 28, 2012, 03:31:26 AM

bahut bahut shukriya ufaqji... aapne bahut kuch sikhaya mujhe... aapne sach kaha ki mujhe ghazal ke bare main koi jankari nahin.. mujhe agar kuch pata hai to bas wo dard jo aapne dekha... maine apni shayari ko kabhi ghazal, geet nahin kaha kyon ki mujhe unki jankari nahin hai.. main hamesha rachna shabd ka istemal kiya hai.... par meri koshish rahegi kahin se bhi thoda bhi kuchh sikhne ko mile to ye meri khush-nasibi hogi... islie aapka bahut bahut shukriya... khushi hai ki kam se kam mera dard to pur-asar hai...

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mann jee.kaise hai aap?aik baat kahta hu aapse....isse badkar appreciation doosra nahi ho sakta ki aapka qalaam kisi ko majboor kar de ki wo uske misro men apne misre jod de........great work....sabse phale to poetic heart hona zaroori hai.......jo ki beshak aap paas hai.......technical aspects to kabhi bhi sikhe jaa sakte hai.........take care


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Re: teri aankhon mai aansu kyon...........Mann

«Reply #46 on: May 29, 2012, 03:33:49 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya qaisji....

ye sach hai ki mujhe geet ghazal ki bandishon ki jankari nahin hai.... aur main sikhne ko hamesha taiyar hun.... islie kabhi bhi kuch kamiyan nazar aayen jo sudhari ja saken to mujhe khushi hogi ki mujhe pata chale.... so aap mera sath dete rahiye....


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Re: teri aankhon mai aansu kyon...........Mann

«Reply #47 on: May 29, 2012, 03:35:32 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya qalbji.. yun hi mauqa dete rahiye ki kuchh sikh sakun...


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Re: teri aankhon mai aansu kyon...........Mann

«Reply #48 on: May 29, 2012, 03:40:29 AM »

ji janumanuji... sach kahte hain aap... main ne hamesha chaha hai ki koi mujhe sikhaye... shayad iske lie mujhe ufaqji, qaisji, qalbji, aap aur bhi bahut se shayar hain jinki zarurat hai.... islie aap sab mera sath dete rahiye... meri kamiya batate raheye jisse main sudhar kar sakun...